[Writing by Newcomers] (This is my first time writing a novel, so I hope you will read it)
[Original plot + smaller size + no change to Aidian's character + system (weak sense of presence) + no original cp + single female protagonist]
In this bustling and noisy world, how does Xu Lingtian, a killer from the dark side, get involved with Hope and Light?
Ginjiu: Xu Lingtian, you are my only opponent in my life.
Miyano Shiho: Xu Lingtian, are you a piece of wood?
CONAN: Aren't you a killer? Why are you solving the case faster than me? Damn it!
Reader comments
Overall, it's good. It's good enough for a novice author to write like this.
It's okay, but sometimes the third person, sometimes the first person makes me feel a little uncomfortable, and the last two girls make me unable to hold my nerve.
Overall, it's good. It's good enough for a novice author to write like this.
It's okay, but sometimes the third person, sometimes the first person makes me feel a little uncomfortable, and the last two girls make me unable to hold my nerve.