The Train Ramping Through Honkai

Why does it feel like the protagonist is a tool?

To be honest, you, the author, amazed me. This is the best fanfic I have ever read, and I even wonder if you, the author, have read my mind. It is very good. I just want to make some suggestions here. It is best to just let the system be the heroine and write the single heroine.

I can only say that it is complete, not beautiful. I said before that there is no contact and no fun. I can only say that it is a dream come true.

After reading this introduction, the yandere has already thought about it.

I like the male protagonist's character very much

I hope to add more anime characters in the later stages. What I'm most looking forward to is having the great teacher appear.

The plot of your book is above average in my opinion. However, the protagonist's character concept is slightly different from mine. As a result, I wanted to kill him several times while reading the book. The protagonist's character is too extreme. Personally, I prefer a more peaceful one, which leads me to be somewhat biased against your petty protagonist. Please forgive me

I still feel like I didn't see Gratio's parents and Destobia appear.

It looks good. I think it's better to travel alone.

It looks good, fits my taste, and is very realistic.