崩坏：文娱世界里，我即是崩坏！

It looks good, I love to read it, I will read more, but the updates are a bit slow (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Don't waste your time reading this novel of mine (ᇂ_ᇂ|||). I have written a lot of original plots for Honkai characters, and I will use foreshadowing. If you really don't think about anything, it will feel a bit messy when you see it later. (；￣д￣) In fact, these foreshadowings are not buried deeply, so you don't need to think carefully, but don't lose your brain ˃ʍ˂ This is not a mindless novel, nor is it OOC. None of the Honkai characters are rigid, and their backgrounds and other aspects have been reasonably adapted. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Although some readers will give me three or four stars, it does not mean that my book is poisonous, but that it does not match their taste. This still makes me a little proud. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on The details are in the first chapter of the text, so I won't go into details. Thank you all. (●• ̀ω•́ )✧ This book has been completed, thank you for your support.

Personal evaluation, this is a good book that mainly focuses on daily life⊙▽⊙Among them, the extra chapters and parentheses bring some sense of separation and discomfort to the readers, but the author is very obedient and there are basically no poisonous points in the end. If you have any, just tell the author\^O^/ENTIRE The writing of this book is very smooth. The pits dug in the front will be filled in after a while and it won't take long. There are also many scenes that everyone likes to see╮(￣▽￣)╭For example, Siegfried, who plays Beng San, tells the story of Beng San to Siegfried of this world. So far, I have not seen Beng San's power. The characters are broken or too heart-warming or the text is disturbing, and I don't tear down the CP. Overall, the later the better, the author's writing style is improving. If you have any toxic points or discomfort, you can say it in the comment area. Almost all the comment authors will read or reply to it [laughs] Overall evaluation of personal feelings, Among the many books I found, they were particularly good. A high score does not mean the book is particularly good, but a low score does not mean it is particularly bad. Among the many Honkai Impact books I found, they were also particularly good⊙▽⊙The above are my personal feelings and evaluations, and praise, Mirror! !

I have read more than half of the book, and I can see that the author has great ideas, but the performance is a bit lacking. First of all, the mentality of the protagonist. It seems that there is no problem in thinking about the character behind the scenes of the house. After all, the book is a light-hearted and pleasant genre, but it is too smooth. The protagonist has everything he lacks, and it is not that exciting. If it continues like this, the plot will be too boring. Also, when the protagonist plays a role and opposes the people of this world, everything is like a script. It is too fake and has no tension (refer to Sinner's Elegy). This book is not going to be harsh, but I still hope that the protagonist can be more emotionally harsh (for example, the people in the other world get along too harmoniously with the people in this world). There are no contradictions. Everything going smoothly is the main reason why the plot is not exciting, and the emotions are not delicate enough (it is recommended to have a single female protagonist, it will be difficult to grasp if there is more). Speaking of attitude, I think the protagonist's attitude towards the world is still a "game attitude" without responsibility, meaning, and concept, just like being pushed by the system to push the main line. And the contradiction of not being emotionally involved in doing things or not being driven by fate (I sincerely recommend "Hengtie: Adopted by Kafka in the Beginning" and "You told me that the difficulty is Honkai Impact III?") Okay, that's about it. Now let's praise the author for some things. First of all, the author's combination of projection acting and Honkai Impact is novel in the field, and then the plot and many related characters and the development and development are well paved and handled well, especially the male master. The world view allows the author to solve the emotional problems easily. This aspect is completely non-toxic, and then the protagonist does things (hope to have fun, after all, it is a relaxed world view, and having fun is really a good way to improve). What can also be praised is that the author has no toxic points in writing the book (the disadvantage is that it is not exciting enough, and it will be difficult to score higher than 9.4 If it continues). The author also configures the scenes and characters well (it is difficult to have fun without conflict, and the plot is good)

Apart from anything else, it is different from other urban humanities, so it is not a mindless post. However, the pace is slow, so those who don't like slow pace may not be very interested. However, even though I don't like slow pace that much, I am very interested. I hope the author can write better and better, come on!

The structure of this article is clear, and the content may cause some people to not recognize the worldview and feel confused at the beginning. It describes the character of the protagonist very well, and the gradual progress of the protagonist's strength is very clearly described. It may be a little biased for other characters, but it will not make people too annoying. Although it is not a good idea to intersperse the protagonist's past memories with the main text. But overall the description is very good (the above is just my personal opinion)

There is Extraordinary, the third chapter opens a side story, the sixth chapter opens a newbie gift pack, the tenth chapter uses the panel to transform into Kallen, and the eighteenth chapter opens another side story. The author did check out the character stories. But my reading rhythm is not consistent with this one... I'd better work harder

Fortunately, I used to watch it with a score of 7.0 Or so. I watched the beginning and then stopped watching after seeing the extras, because I felt that adding extras in the main text made me feel uncomfortable. Now I see a score of 9.1, And I came back to read it when it was recommended. The main story is okay, but I just skipped the extras. Then when I watched Siegfried, I felt a little too hasty. The rest was okay, and I can see that the author worked hard [face covering] [OK]

I give it a five-star review and hope that the author can give it more. There are some minor flaws in the early part of the story, such as the description of the short film intact. Although it can show the author's intention, the movie viewer itself is to see the reaction of the moviegoers. Fortunately, the author listened to the advice and improved it later. I still have to say one thing, whose good character protagonist has just started school in chapter 350 [face covering] [OK]

It seems pretty good so far. According to the author, the female characters have brains and are not brainless. I hope to continue writing and the plot will be better in the future.

·Five-star praise [like] (one star missing was eaten by Kiana) QWQ, was sanctioned, be honest

Come on, this book is still okay (mainly for taste, I read this kind of book as long as the role-playing is not too boring) but I hope the author writes more about role-playing, such as [Sky Ranger] and [Xie'er] (especially Xie'er, I am a white chef, Black hope is also okay) and the like

It's really good to read, but the part about testing whether Yuexia can keep a secret is a little bit toxic, but it's understandable to ensure safety. The writing in other places is good, and it really deserves five stars.

It felt really good, creative and fun. If they saw this world in the Eigen World, they would be nostalgic and happy.

The rating is low compared to other Honkai fanfics, but it is probably no worse than those 9.6 Books. Although I have only read a few chapters, the detailed writing and content are great. Among the Tomato fanfics, only the legendary anti-pressure king Luoxu can stabilize this book. The others are almost better than those 9.6 Books.

Excellent. Nothing to say. It just looks good, very good-looking, very good-looking. They are all the most beautiful in the Honkai Impact series (and there are no knives). Even without knives, the story is told very well. The male protagonist's character is also very good, and you can clearly see his growth process. Anyway, the whole, the system, the world view, and the introduction of various things are very reasonable and logical. A great novel. Tell me about some of your personal expectations. (Based on personal preference) 1. Alicia's plot is too little, or it feels like something is missing. As the male protagonist Bai Yueguang, there are too few emotional descriptions of his family. 2. The subsequent story is not as exciting as the previous one. Maybe there is nothing to write about. After all, the male protagonist is almost invincible, so it is a good time to have some daily routine. Not only is it great, but it can also build up strength for subsequent attacks on the seal. (Although it's fine without accumulation, it's better than nothing.) 3. The main character descriptions of Honkai Impact are a bit lacking, which is a pity. 4. If the male protagonist can write a separate volume after arriving at Star Iron, I feel it will be very good. It just so happens that I can resolve some regrets. This is great isn't it? In summary, this novel is very interesting, and it is worth recommending especially to those who like Honkai Impact. Even if you have never played Honkai Impact, this is still a very good novel. Push push push. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

OK, when I found this book, it happened to be almost finished. I finally finished reading it today. It's very interesting. The setting and plot are beyond ordinary Honkai fanfics. It's good food. I'm looking forward to the next book.

The writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities, and each big and small event constitutes a warm daily life. I will probably go to the universe later, and I look forward to going to Star Iron Universe.

One of the five favorite books on my bookshelf, and it is updated very quickly. The theme of playing in another world is also very novel.

Very beautiful! From the beginning to now, it has not been addictive at all to me, but the updates are too slow. After I was attracted, I watched it for three days and finished it. The author, please give me 10,000 words of eloquence in one day () [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

What should I say? It's beautiful, very beautiful. After watching it for so many years, if the two numbers combined exceed 10,000 hours, how can I say that it can be ranked at the top of the list? It's good to read. It's very good to read. I've read it for so many years. It's a book that can be ranked among the top among the novels that I have read for so many years. I haven't seen such a high-quality book for a long time, especially Honkai Impact III. I hope that Der Spiegel can bring us more high-quality books. Come on, Der Spiegel! You are the one that I have read for so many years and can be ranked in the top three of the Honkai Impact Trilogy humanities. You deserve the five stars.

The author's writing is super beautiful^ω^ and made me cry several times (><) Will there be a story about Xinyan Yongran and your existence later? Please, I want to see [sending my heart]

May 1st, it is currently good, there is a lot of information available, there is a high probability that it will not be updated, right? It's just that the rating has been lowered, probably because the pace in the early stages was too slow.

A well-written Honkai Impact fanfic. The author's writing style is very good and the content is smooth. However, the updates are too slow. Two or three pictures a day are not enough to read! ! !

It's very good. I watched it very well. I stayed up all night and finally finished it.

According to the author's pace of writing this book, it will last a lifetime. The normal completion is guaranteed to be 5 million words [laughing and crying] Please have more interactions between the characters and themselves and their relatives and friends in other worlds. The protagonist has too many roles. The captain is really not important in the main plot.

Come on author, this is my personal favorite book. The original author continues to write books that he is satisfied with. I really want to Tell the author that you hope this book will continue on its path to the future. I also hope the author doesn't give up on this great book.

The plot is very good, The most important thing is Yuexia and Aili.

It's good to watch, finally the plot of Cecilia meeting Kiana is here, but it's a pity it's too short

It's beautiful, I love watching it, but why are there so few people?

Objectively speaking, there is actually not much need to add to the extra story, but then again, the story he wrote is very much in line with my taste.