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I feel that the writing is great. The whole article is covered with a vague sense of sadness. It is easy for people to empathize with, and the weak men and strong women are very poignant. Okay, although you are strong, you have to listen to me [Read carefully]

No matter what other people think, I really like this book. I think the image of the heroine is really well portrayed. To be honest, I feel that all male-female stories are about strong men and weak women. This is the first time I have seen such a story about strong women and weak men. And although the male protagonist is weak, he does not feel like a drag. The cold-bloodedness of the female protagonist is also very consistent with dark literature. The setting and the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists are also very well portrayed. Compared with other single-female protagonists, there is a sense of contrast. Because I have been reading for a long time and I am tired of reading many common things, so I really like this sense of contrast. It feels really different, like it makes my numb heart beat again. The only thing I want to scold the author for is that it ended too quickly. When I read more than 100 chapters, I felt that I could still write hundreds of chapters, but it ended in the last 200 chapters. To be honest, it was really difficult to find a book that made me crawl without reading for a while. However, the author ended it so quickly. To be honest, I felt uncomfortable, but I really liked this book. Finally, I want to say that if the author wants to write another book about Liu Hancheng and Luo Yunxi, please write it as a sequel. Don't completely reopen it. If you want to completely reopen it, just change the names of the male and female protagonists. At least even if you don't give this book a sequel, don't take this book out to kill it. I think this is respect for a work, but also respect for the author's hard work and the love of readers. Finally, I hope the author will work hard.

The number of words should be small, if there are more, the data should be better. I feel that this book is not on the right track yet, and many people have the idea of ​​​​keeping a book. Finally, don't give up, author. I think your writing style and setting are quite good. Come on! ! !

The character portrayal is still very good, the plot is indeed relatively compact as mentioned in the introduction, the world view generally exaggerates the greed and selfish desires of most immortal cultivators, and the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also more attractive. The only shortcoming is the ending. I suggest that the characters can be enriched and some people with a sense of justice can be added (as long as it does not affect the overall world view).

In fact, the author's writing is much better than most. The plot is relatively novel and the logic is very rigorous. The most important thing is the handling of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It makes people feel very comfortable and does not have that empty stomach feeling. I often read novels before and felt that they were very formulaic and empty. Although the author's ending is not very good. It's satisfying, but I still really appreciate the author. The author handles the relationship between the two of them really well. There's no such thing as falling in love at first sight, and there's no twists and turns in the plot. Most of them are very reasonable, and the ideas are relatively novel. I really like the feeling of getting along between them. Thank you to the author.

Personally, I still like this kind of subject matter, so I give it five stars subjectively (after all, I really like it, and I don't want to be stingy,) There is an obvious problem with this book. It should be some wording problems. Anyway, some places read strangely. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and I also hope he can write it to the end without any regrets about breaking the chapter, because I really like it.

The writing is quite good. I hope that if I have the chance, I can see the boy take Xiao Qingmei to the modern world to play and experience happiness. Xiao Qingmei is really having a hard time. After reading it, I am very upset about why I don't have childhood sweethearts, haha😂

No, Lao Deng, I thought you were going to speed through this book, but I didn't expect O. Henry to have nothing at the end, right? [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] I quite enjoyed reading it. In fact, after all, I am also the kind of character who only cares about my own people and doesn't care about others, so I quite like the characters of the male and female protagonists. If you can In fact, I hope to finish this book, but everyone has their own difficulties, and I can't say anything if I force it. I just hope that the author's life will get better and better, write more masterpieces, and if he persists, he will see the dawn. Don't be afraid. If you are Han Cheng, you will one day wait for your own Yunxi. Come on, the future is long.

It's over. Although the ending is not happy, and can even be said to be a regret, it is still my favorite novel. I look forward to the next story between Liu Hancheng and Luo Yunxi✧

It's okay_(:з∠)_Originally I wanted to post a longer comment, but I don't know what to say. The logic is relatively clear, and there are hidden clues. The heroine was not particularly cold-blooded in the early stage, nor was she particularly yandere, but I still don't know what the protagonist is fighting. On the surface, the author writes that he is fighting against the protagonist's master, but I personally feel that he is fighting against shrinking lives and fate. The writing is not bad. The disadvantage is that sometimes it is a bit confusing, but it is much better now. The above is just my personal opinion

I think the first fifty chapters are very good. The characters written have relatively distinct personalities. The interaction between Luo Yunxi and the male protagonist is very rich. It mainly makes me feel a real feeling.

It fits the description, and the sugar is just right, satisfying my fantasy about my childhood sweetheart. Unfortunately, it's too short and not enough to read. The author will update it quickly [crying]

The writing is okay, it's not a traditional immortality, it's more like a western fantasy + a slightly darker world of immortality with the main character. It's still pretty good to watch, but one problem is that it's a bit messy. It feels like a stream of consciousness. Although it's a hidden line + a main line interspersed, it's still a bit confusing. I feel that the author has made obvious progress, and I feel that this book still has a bright future.

@ Meng Xueshi's Ci Zong. Does becoming an immortal in this book refer to foundation building or what? Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, spiritual transformation, emptiness refining, body integration, Mahayana, transcending tribulations and ascending to immortality. How do the realms correspond? When I turned around and finished reading, I felt a little emotional. The book was really good. The little fight between the two of them was also very comfortable. Alas, I won't complain about the rest. Anyway, it's good.

A well-written book with distinct and outstanding characters. The relationship between the two is also very sincere.

It is well written, the characters are all flesh and blood, the plot is compact and the writing is vivid In fact, the suspense and horror style at the beginning is the best, but it's a pity that that style was lost during the writing.

Generally speaking, the transition is not very smooth, and part of the logic is nonsensical. The dark text is considered qualified, 6.8~8.2/10

The setting of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is worth reading. It's a decent novel among Tomatoes, but it's a pity. It can be seen from these 200 chapters that the author still has a lot of ideas. I hope the author can write better works and surpass himself! Don't be discouraged by this momentary setback. Come on and take care!

It's quite sweet, and the heroine has a pretty good personality, at least not like a personal computer.

This book is a pity to be honest. Although it is not finished, it is overall very good. I have put this book on my bookshelf since 2024 and have not read it for various reasons until now. The last part about the campus touched me very much. The ending is also very happy, although it is not finished yet...

Bookworms who like Jiangnan writing style are in luck. Since the earliest novel I came into contact with was Jiangnan's Tianzhichi, I personally have higher requirements for the writing style of novels. This book is really my favorite one I have read except Dragon Clan. I highly recommend it.

It's a great book, but why doesn't anyone read it? The number of people urging updates is so pitiful that I was afraid that the author would suddenly stop updating.

A good book, a high-quality plot, and a hidden yandere with a distant relationship. This kind of uniqueness brings a more comfortable feeling.

The subject matter is very new, the dialogue is humorous, and it's beautiful. Brothers! This is a great book! Because there were too few people reading it, the author couldn't keep going, so he ended it hastily... It's hard to calm down... I hope that one day the number of readers will increase, and the author will come back again. [Cry]

How can I put it this way? It's very good, and the author took out the main line at the end, which can be regarded as a very responsible work. There is nothing to say in terms of writing, and in terms of emotions, it is very good. There are many round characters that are very complex. It can be regarded as a novel with few points to read. It can be said that there is basically no poison. The author made a lot of little jokes in the middle [smile] It's really a very good book, and I feel it's a very unique kind of emotion. The main reason is that the author is humorous and the writing style is also very humorous. I also feel that the author has experienced a lot and can see many social problems.

Throughout the book, the plot develops at different speeds, the rhythm is well grasped, the emotional line develops naturally and fully, the main line is clear, the characters' positions are also rich, and there are no poisonous points. I'm very happy to read this book. It's not a waste of time. It's just that the author has no intention. Why did it end so suddenly [crying]

Hurry up, the charming yandere heroine, the cheating mortal protagonist, what exactly is becoming an immortal, the weird and dark world view, I feel like I'm being hooked, more soon

Come on, author, the book is very interesting and has a bit of a Cthulhu feel to it, which is when the male protagonist suspects that there is another one of him.

It's pretty good, but I'd like to ask if it has two heroines. [Thinking] I think Gu Ye who appeared earlier is quite interesting. The two heroines might be fun, hehe. I want to see blood flowing like a river!

I read a few, but I don't know why I can't stand it. Maybe it's because I'm not suitable for this kind of writing. I give you a five-star encouragement [like]