Naruto: Saru Maki's Paradise

It's really good-looking, so will it be Saunaru? They will become powerful ninjas who will never stick to love. Sakura will also become a powerful female ninja, but the tailed beast will not really die (update soon) [I'm about to cry] Author, was your novel fed to AI? Otherwise, how could it have ended so quickly?

I mainly like this book, and I suggest the author update it quickly. ψ(｀∇´)ψBut that Nine Lamas really dote on Naruto (//∇//) I like it so much, I like it so much (✪▽✪) The author updates it quickly |｡･㉨･)っ♡ I like you♪

This book is really worth recommending. The plot setting and description of the characters and environment are very detailed, real and novel. The author's control of the plot is very good, just right and unexpected. There are still some shortcomings in the character and image, but overall it is very good. It is full of real emotions, both relaxed and happy but also painful and lonely. This book presents a different Naruto from our perspective, which is a very new experience and worth reading. In short, the biggest problem is that the characters are slightly lacking. You can rush with confidence. I've finished watching it, but the plot is too rushed and a bit sudden. The subsequent plot moves forward too fast, which affects the viewing experience, but it's still okay.

Very good! ! ! It is very consistent with my expectations for Naruto, but the character dialogue is a bit inconsistent with Japanese style and very Western →_→

The overall writing is very good. Sakura can also be independent. She is more cheerful than the original novel. She is no longer a love-minded person who only likes Sasuke. In some places, Naruto and Sasuke's personalities have changed greatly. It's like they have been exchanged. It's more like souls have been exchanged. One thing is that the author easily writes wrong names [laughing]

The writing is very good, the logic of the story is okay, the ending is a bit rushed, but it is rare to see such a good Naruto fanfic. I like it very much, and the emotional lines are all logical. There are some minor flaws, but it is very interesting [Love]

There is a refreshing feeling of realizing a dream, author, cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง

Very good, very good. Living a good life is more important than anything else in Konoha Twelve Xiaoqiang [crazy]. The plot is very good and I like the characters very much.

It felt like it ended very suddenly. It ended in the Chunin Exam. But I liked the plot very much. The lonely people gathered together and became a family. Sasuke's heart was no longer filled with only revenge and hatred. Naruto didn't have to be alone in a cold house eating expired food. Kakashi wouldn't cling to the past. Sakura didn't know what to say. Everyone was lively together. One star is missing because I haven't seen many of the plots that follow and I'm worried about them being removed from the shelves.

It's really well written! ! ! And the writing is very gentle! The writing is really very good! I don't think the characters are ooC either. The feeling is that if things really happen like this in Naruto, they should indeed have this kind of character. It's really beautiful, highly recommended! In fact, I feel that what the author wrote is more reasonable than what was written in the original plot. Just like Kakashi. It feels like he is really Minato's apprentice. The master's son should be treated with great care as the author wrote, instead of being indifferent to Naruto when he was young like in the original plot. Anyway, I didn't see how much Kakashi cared about Naruto when he was a child in the original plot.

It's very interesting to watch, especially the interaction between Class 7 and Class 7. The three little cakes are very cute together. There is also Sakura's character. She is no longer a mindless nympho who likes Sasuke, nor does she hate Naruto because of Sasuke. She has her own opinions. One star is missing because the ending is a bit sloppy. Naruto and the others were only 12 years old when they took the chuunin exams. Although they are stronger than the original, they can't beat the Ten-Tails.

It's good, but sometimes I get the character names wrong.

Harry Potter-style Naruto, the story adds its own original details, and the writing is very Western-style.

No, what the hell are Iruka and Kakashi? Kakashi might be the same size or bigger than Iruka, right? ? ?

It looks good, but the part about saving Kyuubi is a bit cumbersome.

Hmm, actually I came here for this cover, even though the author wrote it very well, it was a dream come true. But, I still want to try CP, even though the content is very low. . (Very cute writing style. Some articles describe Naruto as very childish and not OOC at all! The Nine Lamas also dote on Naruto. He is a tsundere fox with a disdain for his integrity!

After reading it, it was all very good. Everyone's emotions were very delicate, but the ending was a bit unsatisfactory... I hope the author can come back and make changes if he has new ideas in the future.

Where did the pomegranate-haired Kazeying come from? Naruto and grandma? [Petrochemical]

I don't know how to say it, but this is really beautiful

Yes, it's just a little different from the original Naruto worldview, and it's more like an extended world of Naruto, with a slight gap in personality.

Routh's writing is very good.

Okay, it's a bit crappy, but it's pretty

Overall, it's pretty good. I just need to stop spelling the names wrong all the time.

Really nice. Very heart-warming plot, can't get enough of it🥰

It's very interesting and exciting to watch. I like it very much, and their futures have changed. I really like it (✪▽✪).

Very good, excellent American Chinese, it feels as exciting as watching "Harry Potter"! And it's super detailed! Well worth watching There's Ika in there! ! ! ! ! [Fear]

Nice looking, love watching ๑v๑

Well, it's really good-looking, and the author's writing is really good, but the ending is a bit hasty?

I feel that some of the characters in the front are not very consistent with the original work, and the result is a bit incomprehensible, but the overall structural framework is good and the plot is compact.

The affection between them is so delicately described.