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I've read a lot of mindless ghost stories that give the protagonist a very awesome skill or endless money. I'm tired of reading this book and it made me fall in love with ghost stories again.

The logic is clear, and a lot of folk taboos are used in the book, which is what I am very interested in. I like the character of the protagonist Su Bai very much. He is calm and calm, and has a little occupational disease. I love it^ω^. I hope the author will update it soon~[Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's not a big problem. It's a regular ghost story. That's good enough. Nowadays, a lot of ghost stories have mutated. It's really unflattering [face covering] A suggestion: I feel that the emotional output can be reduced, and more time should be spent on refining the text of the rules. The story does not need to be small to see the big, but reflects the group portrait and is meaningful. After all, this software is for entertainment and leisure. If you write too much truth, readers will only feel that you are very reasonable. The focus should be on the fun of reading (it does not mean that you cannot be unreasonable, there is no problem if you write a little appropriately). I feel that the rules and ghosts in this book could have fewer ghosts, refine the weirdness of the rules, and make the mysteries more confusing. After all, the core of the rules and ghosts is violation and confusion, which indirectly induces fear. If you create too many ghosts and directly output fear, the effect will not be achieved.

I think this book is smarter than many books I have read, and the plot is also very good, but it is a bit lacking. The author should do a better job and update it. I still like the wise and calm Teacher Su (◦˙▽˙◦)

It's okay for the time being. Neither of those. A strange story about an invincible protagonist. The settings are also slightly more stable. Although there are some minor changes in the characters' personalities, that's probably because the author was changed halfway through (there's no need for the whole family to share anything. Ghostwriting is not ghostwriting). In addition, there is another point about settings that I think is more important. That's the country's cue. What exactly is the form? More than once I've seen calls hang up and calls end. I also saw the word prompt more than once. Calling and prompting do not mean the same thing. The specific setting still needs to be written down. This is also a setting that is very needed in thrillers. Or you can make a call. How long is the restriction? What are the restrictions on what can be communicated? Because I saw the protagonist hanging up the call with the state. It was too simple, as if they could control the call time. Or can you give me a hint on the word limit? Limit what information can be exchanged? Since it is a prompt, it should not be possible to communicate with people outside the game.

I really like [blowing kiss] author, keep up your hard work

What happened? How could he die after being raised for two months?

It's okay. I personally think that he can appear more in the dungeon giving lectures. After changing the author, the number has been significantly reduced. And I guess the original author also wants to show more of him lecturing in the dungeon. Then, he wants to make each rule more important and have more chapters in each dungeon, so that readers can better understand the deep meaning in the dungeon. The writing is quite good.

I have seen the tolling bells of Jerusalem, I have seen the bright moon in Florence, I have seen the flying flowers in Rome, I have seen the man of Constantine's destiny chasing the setting sun, I have seen the stormy waves of the Caribbean, I have seen the sky falling apart in Lisbon, I have I have seen North America declare independence, I have seen the people of Paris rise up in song, I have seen the steam age in London, I have seen the reversal of doomsday in the temple, I have become a demigod in Greece, I have found that nothing in the world seems to be good, until I see this novel

I read Chapter 28 and skipped to the bottom page to click on the update. Let me give my personal suggestions for rules-based novels. If you take the hegemonic route, feel free to do so. If you take the serious rule-based route, I personally feel that the attraction of this genre is not how gloomy the environment is or how ferocious the characters are, but how the characters dig holes and hide in them. Creating a tense atmosphere through this kind of game is far more interesting than those endless blood and darkness. [Eat melon]

Come on! The subject matter is very good, but I just hope that the author will put some things that need to be explained (words that have nothing to do with the plot) in the author's story, because when I read the content, I saw words that have nothing to do with the plot. It was really funny [I almost cried], I hope the author can change it a lot [send my heart]

It's very interesting. I was caught by the plot at the beginning. The author changed later and it's also very good from another perspective. I've caught up to the latest point. Great support for the author. I have a small suggestion that you can adopt or not, that is, can you make the copy a little longer or make it more difficult? After reading a copy, I always feel like I still have something to say.

I like this book very much, and the character setting as a teacher is also very novel. The author has never asked for small gifts. Those who are so passionate about love must support him [love][love][like][like][like]

This is really good-looking, I hope the author will update it more often, and the protagonist is also very smart, and sometimes it is really good-looking. Although I have been following it for a short time, the author also wrote it carefully.

It made me laugh so hard, the author simply accepted his fate in danger out of love. Five-star support. Come on, the author. Write this book and slap your boyfriend in the face. Ask him to write something about Audebiao. This is wrong.

The plot behind it is very good, very logical, and very immersive. It is a very good novel.

It's still ok. The author has a very deep understanding and must have done research on this aspect himself. The logic is clear, the sentences are not confusing, and it reads well, that is. When you want to use famous quotes, it is recommended to understand them in advance. The context and social environment at the time. And how the author said that. Otherwise, it will be easy to think that others are setting it up, otherwise many people will return the card, and it is not good for you to do so. Eh? Twenty one

Come on, compared to other books of the same type, the subject matter of this book is relatively new [Adoration] [Adoration] and it is still more beautiful [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Although the book is very interesting, it is a male channel. How can I put it, I can't accept it. It is a male channel. I thought it was a female channel and I stopped watching it at first. Moreover, the update is a bit slow, but the story is interesting. I highly recommend it [][][][Please be updated][Ask for more updates]

Why is the score so low, only 5.7? It shouldn't be?

It's so good. Su Bai really made me cry to death. He will never forget his students even when he enters the ghost story.

The beginning is very good, at least watch the beginning. Please remind everyone that the author will change later. It depends on whether you like it or not? I personally like it. The author is very obedient. She may be too lazy to go back and revise it again, but the problems provided will be revised later and will not appear. I'll keep watching. Just read in detail what the author said about substitutions at the end of Chapter 24.

After reading it, there is nothing wrong with it except that the update is too slow. But the change of author also shocked me greatly [Chigua]

It's super good-looking, and the plot is not cliché. Compared with zoos in other novels, this zoo feels quite novel.

The writing is very good, and it is also very interesting among the many rules and strange stories. The protagonist's personality is also quite good. It is quite rare to explain it while clearing the level, but it is a bit short. I hope the author will work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง Remember to add more and more

It would look better if I changed the author. . I give a low score because I don't understand the change of author. I like the current author, but this is Tomato. I feel relieved when I think of the 26-year-old female tenant with a score of 9.7.

I still want to support it, I personally think it's pretty good

The work is very interesting and full of laughs, the protagonist is described very vividly, and the plot makes my heart go up and down. The whole book is definitely one of the few good books about rules and ghost stories.

A good book, not too brain-burning, the writing is a bit tender, but very suitable for consumption

The writing is good, but it has not been updated yet. I wonder what will happen next? The male protagonist has a high IQ, but if the male protagonist is blindly successful, it will make people feel monotonous. Looking forward to the next plot!