There's Something Wrong with This Magician

There are definitely not many people who like this novel on Tomato. It is slow-burning, western fantasy, and has a grand world view, but some of the content is too long and difficult to read. But the overall novel is pretty good. If you are tired of reading cool novels, you can give it a try.

It's okay, after all, you don't need to use your brain to read this kind of article. At least it's more interesting than the Toilet Paper Series from Another World. I stopped reading after chapter 87. There are still too many mistakes. However, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard and improve his writing skills.

It is good-looking, with a clear structure, clear explanations, and the actions of the supporting characters are also logical. It is my favorite slow-burn farming novel. The only bad thing is that there are too many threats to the protagonist planted in the early stage, which makes it a bit stressful.

The writing was average at the beginning, but the further you read, the better it looks. It is not bloody, and there is no cliché. There are no breaks in reading before and after. It is just that there are only one knight, and not many people can use it. Overall, it should not be only 8 points.

The later part is great, especially the combination of modern electricity and magic is very interesting, especially the use of magic to liberate productivity, which is rare in other novels, but the early stage is too torturous. Even I, a fan of Western fantasy, can't read the first thirty chapters. It's too messy. If the author doesn't want to give up this book, I suggest you go to the front to optimize it, and there are some minor hairs. Sick, sometimes the chapters start to repeat the words of the previous chapter, and sometimes they continue to be written. There are also some plot contradictions, such as the part where the magician's identity is difficult to inherit as an earl. I wrote it once after killing him, and again when I visited later. The emotional scene with Melissa is also difficult to describe. It is obviously a good framework to write out the feeling of cheating. To sum it up, this book is highly recommended for bookworms who like Western fantasy, except for the strong dissuasion at the beginning and the slightly toxic emotional drama.

It's a very nice slow-burn Lord novel. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first time writing a book. Speaking of the Middle Ages, Kingdom Come 2 has just been released recently, and I just used it in my head [laughing and crying]

The pace is too slow, but the content is good. If you like a slow pace, you can follow it (I read the first hundred chapters and it was extremely slow)

The 3000-hour bookworm said that it is good-looking. The plot of the farming novel is slow and normal. However, when the update speed is slow, there is not much content in one or two chapters of the farming novel every day. It is suitable for reading if you want to read more.

I have read less than 200 chapters so far. The literary talent is very good, the plot is compact, and the writing progress is very slow. However, many plots are boring, and I feel like I am away from the refreshing writing. I can listen to the book, and the writing is not frivolous. I like it.

It is a slow-paced and clear novel, with a complete story structure. It is a refreshing addition to time travel novels. The characters have distinctive characteristics and the worldview structure should change as the protagonist grows. It is still very good and worth watching.

The overall description is okay, but it is recommended to learn more about ancient wars and cold weapons before writing. Come on [Like][Like][Like] I feel uncomfortable seeing some unreasonable things [laughing and crying]

Five stars ⭐ is just an encouragement to the author... I can't say it's super beautiful. I've read less than half of it so far. Overall, I feel that the ideas and writing are okay. When reading the book, I suggest you don't dwell on the details. After all, it's just a novel! ! ! Personally, I feel that chronic book lovers who are in a book shortage can fall into the trap, which is much more normal than those who are so boastful but unable to hold back [laughs]

The descriptions and characterizations are meticulous, the plot construction is thoughtful, and the plot advancement is smooth and clever. Except for sometimes it feels a bit watery, it is generally good. 8.5 Is a bit low, it should be 9.3 Or above. The more you read later, the more interesting it becomes. If you like fast and brainless novels, it is recommended to be cautious.

Great piece. It's not a fast-food novel, but it's really fascinating. The author seems to be trying to build a grand worldview. The first disadvantage is that the plot progression is a bit long-winded, and there are a lot of content describing the failure of various experiments. Of course, this can also be said to be delicate and true. Another thing is that the corresponding titles between the characters, the relationships and dialogues are a bit out of place, lacking the feeling of a medieval Western background, and more like modern Chinese people. All in all, it's definitely a good book!

I haven't read much of this book so far, but the rhythm is somewhat similar to another Lord novel I read. At least the author has the same general idea and direction in terms of developing the territory. They both use modern ideas to train soldiers, and then bring various things into the world (and both It is more reasonable that the protagonist proposes a framework and then develop it by capable people) I like this kind of opening, but the difference is that the Lord story is a bit similar to an RPG game. Extraordinary powers are very popular, but the magic in it seems to be less popular at present, so it is more hard-core. But I found it very comfortable to read, more comfortable than the other book, so I feel that the rating is a bit low, and I hope the author will get better and better. I will continue to watch. It is indeed very slow to gain momentum, but slow gain does not mean boring. It feels good to watch it getting stronger and better step by step and changing every day. (A small complaint about the Western fantasy novel I read. The author liked to use Internet slang, but when combined with Western fantasy, it felt inexplicably disconnected. I didn't like this one that much) There is a little problem at the back. There is a knife at the back. The author may want to add some hardships to the protagonist after all. After all, the protagonist has been smooth sailing, or it may be to pave the way for the next plot, but I don't think the effect is very good. Elite knights sneak attack the territory, and the territory is short of manpower. It seems very logical, but there are actually some problems in personnel arrangement and weapon distribution. I won't go into details. , And the little boy Lucien is not very lovable. The design of this character is all about describing how cute and lovable he is, and then he looks very sensible. There is no problem with the setting, but the problem lies in the description. Some words may seem fine to children, but from the reader's perspective, they are a bit "green tea". Am I too sensitive? I always feel that this little boy is trying to please. Maybe some people will say "too sensitive, he is just a kid", so this is just a personal opinion. I have read almost 600 chapters so far, and I feel that it is a bit bottlenecked. I can almost see the follow-up development. I will watch it again.

It is a great work. It is a slow-burning work. It was written poorly in the early stage. However, as the world view of the work increases, different systems and secrets are displayed, and the strength and shortcomings of magicians are gradually revealed, the characters' personalities and cunning are gradually described in detail throughout the book. It is a rare high-quality work. I hope this novel can continue to be maintained. I dare say that if this book is spread abroad and translated, it can attract more foreign readers, and maybe it can become a domestically produced Western fantasy novel like Coiling Dragon. Come on, author.

I am an old bookworm, and I feel that the pace of the story is average, but the relationship between the characters is well portrayed, the characters are very distinct, and the group portraits are also well written. Each character at least has certain characteristics, but there are also many bad points, but the flaws are not hidden, it is a good book

I really like this kind of rhythm where there is no cheating and there is no golden finger. Whatever Lanny wants to do is not achieved in one leap. Whatever he wants to achieve, he will also experience many failures and keep groping in the failures. Many people say that this kind of plot is not exciting enough. I can only say that if you want to be happy, there are a lot of cool articles out there. The most rare thing about this article is the delicate portrayal, immersion and realism. I hope the author can keep it up.

The events are clearly organized and the protagonists' grievances are clear! Does the author have any misunderstanding about steam engines? The bath water can be boiled, but the boiler steam cannot be boiled? Do you still need magical structures? If the problem of pressurization cannot be met, it can be understood using magic explanation, but the description in the book is obviously about energy...

The world view is grand, the character growth lines are complete, and the foreshadowing is amazing. It can be called the most collectible masterpiece of the year!

Let me tell you my opinion first. This book is very well written. It restores the neutrality of the time traveler itself, which is in line with the author's own setting, and has the initial performance of the non-superior person. There are also reasons for the low rating due to the special wisdom of a modern person and the non-absolute rationality of an ordinary person (such as the emotional hesitation between two women around him). In fact, many people can think of it, that is, the protagonist is not invincible, cannot accurately think of the optimal solution to every problem, and is not as "smart" as the readers. This is what many people call poisonous points. No consideration is given to the time span and settings in the book. In addition, give some suggestions to the author, write a book on Tomato, and even now all the content can make people interested. It's nothing more than a few words: "relaxing", "funny", "crushing by force & crushing by intelligence (so cool)". Thank you for the wonderful world you have built, and I wish the author better and better.

Personally, I think the story is quite good, and the characters are well described. I think what attracts me the most is that it doesn't over-inflate its combat power in the context of Western fantasy. It's invincible at the beginning, and it's a Western fantasy time travel novel worth studying! [Laughing]

I really like reading it. I saved it for a month and will almost finish it [laughing]

I finally saw this unsystematic lord article! Wow ah ah ah! Finally I read an article that suits my needs! Wow ah ah ah! I've finally arrived! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)O (Crying)

It's good. Although it's not delicate enough. There are still many development elements that I haven't thought of. The villain game is not exciting enough. It will be better.

So far, I think it looks good overall. It starts with a typical little baron on the rundown border and then develops the territory in various ways. The storyline is smooth and slow to develop. I have read more than a hundred chapters. Although it is a lord story, the knights here currently do not have any training levels. There are no levels similar to silver or gold. They are just rigorously trained and fully equipped warriors. They are more like the knights in Game of Thrones. They are still ordinary people. There are magicians, but there are currently very few magic scenes. There will probably be more later!

In the book, the author uses delicate words to depict beautiful pictures, which seemed to bring me into another peaceful and poetic realm. Every page is full of surprises and fascinating.

This book still appeals to my taste. I prefer this kind of lord novels that snowball from scratch, unlike some novels where a genius comes here and a peerless treasure comes here, and then I randomly find a mine, and just turn the lord novel into a business simulation. It's quite good, watching the protagonist pull the territory from a weak state to a level where he can protect himself brick by brick.

I have read more than 200 chapters so far. The content is very detailed and the logic is clear. The protagonist has no special abilities. He has gradually deepened from the field of technological development to magic. There is nothing particularly bloated. It is a refreshing stream in the Western Fantasy Lord novels. Book lovers who like a slow pace can try it.

It is one of the better Lord novels I have read this year. It is very slow-burning and suitable for those who are patient. However, the quality is guaranteed and it is still very good [please read carefully]