HP: Wizard Content Is Too High

Unpopular cps, especially the original Petunia. I watched "Harry" when I was a child and disliked Aunt Petunia's family. Recently I read the original novel again when I had time. What position does Harry have to criticize his aunt? In the original novel, the relationship between his aunt and Lily was not good. He lived under the light of his sister, his parents died, and his wife took care of the children at home. Now her sister's children have to take care of themselves. One child is driving people crazy, and two of them can't control magic. It's a disaster.

I have read a novel where Penny is the heroine before. Penny also has magic and her personality has become considerate. This feeling conflicts with Lily's character, and there is no shadow of Penny herself. This book made me feel that there is no OOC. My wife wrote it very well, but it is too short.

Fans of Si Jiao must read this. Si Jiao and Penny have no relationship at present, but they have a child, but Si Jiao loves children. Compared with other articles that write Si Jiao as a rotten person and a man who hates his children, this makes me feel comforted. He will never be willing to become a father like his father Tobia, who hates his children. In fact, I don't like the CP of Si Jiao and Penny very much. I like the teacher-student love between generations, the age difference, the sense of taboo, the sense of pull, and the sense of fate. My father is my boyfriend. I gave this article a thumbs up because the author's writing style is so good.

The writing is quite good, but Petunia, who is very sad, doesn't get what she wants. When she was a child, she envied Lily for wanting to learn magic but she didn't have the luck. When she grew up, her boyfriend cheated on her and her mother forced her to get married. Her parents passed away and she wanted a family and she gave birth to a daughter. However, her daughter actually tended to choose Snape among the choices. It's really sad. I hated her at first, but now I sympathize with her [facepalm] [facepalm]

I've read a book about Petunia and Severus before, and I thought it was quite interesting. I didn't expect to read another book about the characters. I didn't think it was too OOC. Some of them were more in line with Severus's character, and I also quite liked the scene where they were fighting. I don't know how to describe it, but sometimes when the two of them are together, there is a sense of desire that comes over them. The author's writing style is also very good, and the fleshy writing is fragrant. It's really good for a new author to write like this.

I finished reading it in one go. It's very interesting. The characters of the male and female protagonists are well grasped. There are no OOCs. Reading fan fiction is the most important thing! Moreover, the sexual tension was full and I was so excited watching it. I hope the professor can be tempted before the heroine~

In fact, this book is quite good, and the author's characters are very detailed and realistic. I can only say that Snape and Petunia are beautified in other articles, but this book is very real, like a real event, expressed objectively. In fact, the first few chapters are quite confusing, but the character's personality is portrayed, and everyone is right. I think Lily is also very cute in her portrayal. No one did anything wrong and did not deliberately vilify anyone. Petunia is not perfect, and Snape is not perfect either. Everyone has shortcomings and their own shining points. It makes me think that if there are these little accidents in the original work, maybe it will develop like the author wrote. (Please don't comment on your personal opinions.)

It looks good. In fact, I've seen this with Penny before, but the characters were all broken. Only this author's writing fits the characters very well.

Author, your writing is so beautiful. I like it so much. Your writing style is so good! ! ! I rarely read fan fiction about Penny Evans and Snape, but yours is the best and most interesting fan fiction I have read so far! ! ! ! Your update volume is also very good, almost two every day, or three. I can get into the novel you write just by reading it. It allows me to deeply feel the plot and imagination. It is really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! (*˘˘*). .:*♡

The most awesome thing about this book is that I want to believe that this is HP's parallel time and space, because Petunia is still the same Penny, and Snape is still the same Snape, they just have different choices.

It's a very magical article, it's a rare writing method [laughing] The HP version of "Pride and Prejudice", and the writing style is also a standard true foreign romance literature, even too "classic", it aroused the fear of being dizzy when I was a child reading classics and writing my thoughts after reading it [laughing] Although there are some elements that I personally don't like, such as Such as this with narration, storytelling-like style, and the setting of time-travelers as supporting characters, but it is undeniable that the author's plot and story line are well written, basically not following the main HP line at all, and telling a story from the perspective of Muggles who are surrounded by wizards. Even if everyone has despicableness or shortcomings, they can still have happiness. An imperfect but good novel.

I would like to call this fanfic the God of CP. As long as the author's writing skills are good, the character design is restored, and the plot logic is clear, no matter how unpopular the CP is, it will be able to justify itself. This book gave me such a feeling. It made me hold it from the beginning to see how this outrageous CP could be written, to warn me about the fragrance, and finally to stare at it. Friends who are interested must take a look! ! Absolutely five-star fanfiction [Salute] Thank you to the author for your great contribution.

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm really touched. I didn't expect that someone would like this pair of unpopular CPs as much as I do! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like Penny. In my heart, Penny is a bit like An Lingrong. Her shortcomings and advantages make people feel real. People always seek reconciliation with themselves as they grow up. It's just a pity that in many HP fanfics I have seen so far, "Penny" is not Penny. Many of them are just written under the identity of "Penny". She is Lily's sister, but not "Penny Evans".

A book that I read very carefully. This HP Pride and Prejudice is so on point! Petunia became the only Muggle in her circle of friends who laughed and got rich. Of course, this was a loving circle. It is rare to see fan works that are so consistent with the character style of the original work. The story is not bloody and the rhythm is very comfortable. When Voldemort was eliminated in advance, my blood was boiling. The original characters and original characters are all vivid, Harry Potter's childhood is full of love, Natasha's growth is not lacking in father's love, and the final ending is very simple! The extras are also interesting.

Oh, dear, I mean, dear author, I know that I like your writing very much. It's a wonderful feeling. When I saw the story of Snape and Petunia, I felt like a silent peeping into their world with dark thoughts. I was both excited and frightened. This is not consistent with my ordinary knowledge, but your writing is really touching. I am very happy and I like it. Huan, I feel confused but I can't stop my desire to know their future, like those glutinous desserts, stuck in my heart, I like it very much, I like it very much, I feel puzzled but I still like it very much, it's very special, it's a wonderful feeling [Adoration] This is the most interesting fan I have seen these days, I will always look forward to it [Shy] [Sending Hearts] Come on

Looks great (very loud)! ! I like it very much! ! The author is great, great, great, great! ! Penny is portrayed very well! ! When I first read the introduction, I thought it would be like what I had seen before, which meant that the character's personality would be drastically changed. The big letters were really amazing, and I could really feel the changes in attitudes and the expression of emotions between them. You could feel that the feelings between them did not arise suddenly, or were caused by longing for Lily because of their appearance. Especially what I'm seeing right now is that at the end Natasha told Penny that she would stay with her all day, which really made me feel like they were alive and touched. I hope it will be updated as soon as possible. I would like to know the follow-up. Big, come on! ! [Send heart][Send heart] Later, I discovered that I was reading the article that DaDa had revised. I looked at some of the deleted content that DaDa mentioned in the discussion. I felt that the revised text would be better. The deleted content would make the entire article simpler, and the feelings between the two would be more clear, eh. Anyway, I really like the revised article, it's amazing. [Love][love]

Thanks to other readers for leaving comments that put my mind at ease. I have read the CP stories about Petunia and Snape very early on, and I accepted them well. However, unlike the image of a good aunt and good woman created by other authors, our Petunia has a lot of shortcomings and flaws, and our Snape is also not a thin and affectionate tool. It's very real. Although their relationship is not completely sweet, the pull is very consistent with their psychology and personality, just like the pride and prejudice mentioned at the beginning, so it seems particularly touching. The author didn't spend a lot of time writing about how to defeat Voldemort. I like it very much. Life is too miserable and the war is too cruel. I don't want to read it [face covering]. There were also many people who helped, and Voldemort was successfully eliminated in advance. The friendship between the three women is also very touching. I like and touch it very much. I also really want to raise cubs with my bestie. It feels so warm.

I saw it from the Tomato recommendation homepage, so I clicked in with the mentality of giving it a try, and ended up encountering a good book. I stayed up all night to catch up on the latest version, and saw the original 16-year-old version, and now the well-thought-out draft. It has obviously matured. I really like it. Looking forward to the next volume. Following up on the review, the author actually only has one book! God cannot tolerate it! How can I find good books while waiting for updates? (I love to read authors to find articles.)

It's quite interesting~~ Very delicate description, but I think maybe s. S wouldn't have that kind of thing happen even when he was a young boy. What's more, that's her sister

I really like it. I didn't skip a chapter. The characters of Penny and Snape are very well written. It's as if they are themselves and they haven't made any changes. They are like another version of them in a parallel time and space, with a beautiful life. At the same time, other characters also use their wisdom and efforts to create a beautiful ending. The characters are all full-bodied, as if they can really see the lives of different people. I really love it.

It's not bad. Two tough-talking, avoidant, confrontational lovers are awkward most of the time. Maybe it's because I've read too many novels that purely revolve around the heroine. I feel that Penny's role is a bit less in this one, and there is even an illusion that the daughter interacts more. Of course, the two awkward people avoid each other for half of the time. This is also a big reason. In fact, I don't really like the setting of having children out of wedlock. I always feel that these two people get along together for the sake of their children. Maybe they don't have children as a breakthrough point, and neither party is too lazy to explore the true nature of each other. I quite like the description of Petunia's character. It's very real and awkward, but she's brave when she needs to be brave. To be honest, she's much more frank than Snape. Although she often breaks her guard and speaks unscrupulously, it's very consistent with her growth trajectory.

It's a rare cp, but the character portrayal matches the original work, and it comes to a perfect ending, as if the people in the original work really had such a perfect ending. And the author's ability to control the text is extremely strong. If the story content and plot direction can only get four and a half stars, then the author's control over the text is enough to bring the total score to five stars.

It can be seen that the influence of the original family on people cannot be eliminated by magic. It is very beautiful and the emotions are super delicate. Although I love Si Jiao very much, because the writing is so real, I really want to punch Si Jiao in the face when he is not honest [Petrified] Love the latest updates! ! ! ! It's really two naughty people who are quietly testing to get closer to each other! ! ! Love love

I really like the author's portrayal of Petunia and Snape. This is the first Snape book I've read, and it's also White Moonlight Forever. When I read Harry Potter fan fiction, I never thought that these two people could form a CP, but after the author explained the similarities and the complementary points in their personalities, I successfully became obsessed with them. In the past, when I read Harry Potter fan fiction, I was not very able to accept the original character × Snape, nor could I accept some original characters × Snape (such as Lily, Harry, Sirius, etc.), But for Petunia, I really accepted it well, even very well. However, I just can't accept Natasha and Draco's tendencies in that direction. Although I like both children, I really can't accept them being together.

The writing itself has no shortcomings. When it comes to giving it a 4 out of 10 just because of the sourness in the middle, Penny is slightly at a disadvantage, which does not suit my personal taste. The writing style and plot are definitely the best among Tomato's many Mary Sue Otome novels. Compared with those cookie-cutter hits, this one has a lot of flavor.

It is an unpopular cp, and the process of watching it is very heart-wrenching. It is obvious that the running-in of the two people is very painful. The characters have been maintained. They are not blindly love-minded, but have struggled and carefully considered the relationship. In the relationship, they are both cowardly and brave, and they are still easy to get along with.

Very good-looking, really, the heroine is not the perfect person in traditional medicine, and neither is Sif. The characters are all very consistent, super good-looking, really super good-looking [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It looks great, the pulling feeling is incredible, and Natasha has always been my mother's little cotton jacket! There is no bias at all or he is closer to Snape! ! ! Harry also had a wonderful childhood, and Snape also had a wonderful relationship. Poor Petunia had to raise her infant nephew alone after her parents and sister died one after another. She was still pregnant, but with the help of her two best friends, her life was pretty good.

Thank you, I really like this fanfic [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The pairing of Petunia and Snape, happy enemies, is so good, poisonous tongue x tsundere. Hahahaha (◍＞◡＜◍) Looking forward to the follow-up

Ah ah ah, it's so beautifully written, it really is! The characters without OOC seem to live completely different lives just because of that little change.