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Another one who has never seen a woman before. Qin Huairu's breath smells fragrant! Is that because modern girls use oral sprays, mouthwash, etc., Or are you cultivators who have seen too much that everyone is free from dirt and smells naturally?

So far, it's well written and quite interesting. You can read it in your spare time. The choice of words and sentences needs to be improved, and the understanding of the character's personality is still a bit shallow, and there is a little bit of wit, but it doesn't hurt. Let's see how to deal with various disputes if the layout is followed...

I was originally full of stars. I wanted to trick people all day long without being cruel. Now I almost got tricked by someone. I will deduct one point. I look forward to the author's subsequent performance.

That's all? . . . . .