HP: I Sprinkle Industrial Orange Candies on Hog

Look good, Ka • Language master • Luo • Very slow in some things • Er and Na • I hate him to death in the early stage • west • I love you in the later stage • Sha's interaction is very interesting, I have begun to look forward to the appearance of Master Ma Tianlong (Draco) of the next generation [smile] Who supports crying bag 1 like me? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly], and Sissi doesn't look like the kind of person who would make Carol cry [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I hope the protagonist is the one below [laughs] Sissi Hao 1, this book is so good

It's really, really beautiful! ! ! I read it all in one go. The author would like to give me more encouragement. The only thing I regret a little bit is that James and Sirius were not killed or reduced to mediocrity, and James was allowed to marry Lily. I really feel that he is not worthy. I have always felt that Severus is very affectionate. If he and Lily are together, it may be a very good choice. It is better than James who bullies others every day. This is quite annoying [facepalm] [facepalm] Author, please write a side story about Hermione and Hera. If you don't write it, I will cry for you [fear][cry][cry]

I caught up to more than 200 chapters in one go, and then I found out that when I had a daughter, I gave birth to twins. Do boys have to appear in Lily novels? Can't you have a second baby and have a sister? Why does a boy have to appear? (Personally, I find it a bit unbearable that the two female protagonists in Baihe give birth to a boy)

Very nice. I didn't really like the comments that were all biased towards the Lions before. The James quartet really couldn't be said to be kind, loving, and heroes before? Tsk tsk. . . . A matter of opinion

This book is worth reading. It describes the innocence and good times of the two heroines👩‍❤️‍👩[Blowing Kiss] and also tells us about the persistence of some purebloods in their bloodlines😚Let us look forward to the follow-up plot [Cool] Kid, I am A 999-year-old old woman, now has a long life. I am even more willing to see this article to make fifty thousand a day. Please [admiration] [admiration] (abstract, please update it soon!! I said all this for it - update)

Hurry up, it looks good. I hope the heroine is a master and can't let down her uncle, right? [Sneaky smile], it's silly, sweet, white, and black. The heroine has long hair, she's already been dressed as a man, so short hair is not too much. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] In short, update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Nothing, just came back to take a look

I encourage myself every time [laughing evilly]

To be honest, this article really surprised me. The story line is complete and novel. The two protagonists are very three-dimensional and have distinctive personalities. They combine daily life and plot very well. I mostly read it from the Gryffindor perspective. This time I learned about the nobility and elegance of the Snake House from Slytherin. It is pure Blood is supreme, and I think it is very charming to judge the situation. Are there the author's thoughts in parentheses in the article? Although it is very cute, it is also very dramatic, as if you are immersed in the magical world. The narrator suddenly tells you that this is just a book. Maybe you can write it in the commentary or at the end? There are many advantages and some shortcomings that I personally feel are possible. The flaws are not hidden, but I won't go into details. Generally speaking, I thank the author for presenting a good work. I fell in love with Malfoy and Black all at once. I hope Cassie's family will always be happy in the magical world.

I am really envious of this kind of sweet and intelligent wife-wife love. Carol and Sissy really made me smile all night long when I watched them.

I want to see Narcissa counterattack ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah [crying] [crying] [crying]

I've read a third of the article, and overall it's pretty good. It's just that the emotional line comes too fast, and the two protagonists are really too young [facepalm]… While the emotional line develops at a high speed, the timeline is too slow. I'm a third of the article, and I've just finished the first grade… Relatively speaking, the author's latest update is much better (or is it because he's an adult?)

It's very nice, Malfoy is happy, Black has inherited, but it's a pity that his uncle is destined to die. Compared to the main plot of plots and plots, I personally prefer daily stories that just stick to the main plot, super sweet! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] But Draco is no longer Narcissa's son. (Go into my bookshelf and wait for me to love you again and again, Jie Jie Jie [cool])

I was looking for a book at random, but it turned out that the one by Pula was finished. When I clicked on the author's homepage, I realized that the one I was following was written by the author! Really nice

The writing is quite good, the cp is very novel, but very interesting. The writing style is generally good (except for some car exhausts that are slightly oily), and the characters are also maintained. The behavior of the characters before and after is in line with the setting, and there is no drama (yes, these are the little snakes (proud faces)). The plot is smooth and makes up for some regrets in the original work. I hope they can have a happy ending.

All you need to know is that this book is very good [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I believe I'm not wrong. Anyway, I was fascinated by it. I read more than 90 chapters in one breath. I'm still reading it. I'll review it after I finish it [Chigua]

Ooc, but then again, the protagonist's character is very cool, with a god-given learning talent, huge magic capacity, charming angelic face... Plus some daily cookie elements, it can be used to relax and entertain. Finally---Lily my God!!!

I have read the author's three novels, and each of them is very well written. Will the author continue to write HP fan fiction? If the next novel is still a hp fanfic, should you consider the original heroine x Professor McGonagall?

Come on, author, it's so beautiful. I have read all three of your books [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I think the most beautiful of the two hp heroines [thoughts]

Nice! Finally there is a fanfic that doesn't follow the plot of a robot

It's really good-looking and interesting. I wish the Malfoys and Blacks peace and happiness forever. (But I really want to read Bella's double heroine fanfic!) -2025.6.6 21:10

Looks good!!!!!!! CP is so novel, come on [learn it] I'm so happy after reading it. I hope I can also see other hp Lily articles written by the author. It's really good [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

The ending was unexpected. I finished reading it patiently. I feel like there is still a lot that I can expand on and write about, although I kind of skipped it later. The character creation is very interesting. Wouldn't the author consider breaking out of the fan framework and writing something of his own?

HP's double heroine is such a great novel that I stayed up for two days to read it! (It's just a little long) Highly recommended! The original story of Malfoy and Narcissa, although the final generation of Harry Potter is relatively dull compared to the previous ones, it is also a concrete representation of the future life of a family of five. The process of getting rid of Voldemort is also great, and the battle is resolved quickly.

It's quite interesting, but I have a question because I haven't read the original work. Who is this Voldemort? Those nobles are too good at it. He was actually bewitched by a person. If Voldemort wins, won't he become emperor? Thanks to the author for clarifying the confusion

It's so beautiful, hahahahahahahahaha, Carol is so cute

(*/∇＼*) Some places are not satisfactory, but overall it is good (✪▽✪).

It's very beautiful. I like Carol's character design [love] (PS: Offline reading does not display the duration. I feel like the story line is quite long (in a romance), and I feel very good about it so far. I hope the author can stick to it (it's 170,000 words and I'm still in the first grade. I think I'll have to finish it for 1 million no matter what).

Beautiful, rare HP double heroine