They Were All Reborn After Being Deceived by My Acting Skills.

Remember when writing this kind of article. If it is less green, it will die suddenly. It is best for the protagonist to be calm and objective, not to make his views too clear until later stages, and to write a few more to make the whole ending perfect. This kind of book is just for fun to read, and it will almost collapse if it gets too long. Write it carefully and don't be greedy for it. A highly rated book can bring benefits in the long run. It can also bring confidence and flow to future writing, so keep going.

Meng Tianxin is considered a heroine just because she has never harmed the protagonist. So you can understand the gold content of this book, right?

The narrative is narrated in the form of interludes, and although the connecting paragraphs of memories have to be admitted to be a bit fragmented, they are not extremely abrupt at all. It is good to use a routine to start the chapter but not completely rely on the routine. It doesn't even deny that the entire novel is unpalatable, as some people in the comment section said. It's hard to agree with everyone, but personally I still like this novel that I haven't seen in a long time and makes me want to continue reading it. Come on. (`･ω･´)ゞ By the way, one person petitioned Tianxin to be the real heroine, please, other book friends will do anything (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

One Hundred Ashes has released another tomato book, it's so invincible. I have read countless crematoria books, and this one ranks first in my mind. The plot is detailed and almost all types of crematoriums are included. For people like me who like to watch crematoriums, it's so satisfying to watch it all at once! ! ! But there are so many comments, I only want five words, the author will update soon [angry] [angry] [angry]

I feel like the author is a female author. Although she doesn't have many words, she describes the emotions very well and I felt very comfortable reading it. Moreover, it seems that the male protagonist is just a bit warm and masculine, but not to the level of a girl. I hope the follow-up will be more decisive and not get involved too much with some unworthy heroines. Speaking of which, I have to say something. How could life be smooth sailing? How could it be possible that the so-called heroines we meet must be loyal to their feelings and value their kindness? Therefore, although a character like Ji is very annoying, it is entirely possible to appear. When I saw the character Ji, I immediately thought of some of Liu Ruyan's short female videos... The general plot is that Liu's Bai Yueguang left Liu, and then Liu found a substitute. During this period, Liu has been in love with Bai Yueguang. Afterwards, seeing the opportunity, Liu immediately ignored the substitute and kept looking for Bai Yueguang until the substitute left... Of course, after leaving, Liu will feel that it is better to be a substitute... I feel like the author also referred to those short articles (smirk)… … Finally, let me tell you what I think of the current female protagonists. There are currently four female protagonists in total, Junior Sister, Ji, Tianxin, and Saint. I won't talk about the one in the sea, as I haven't finished writing it yet. In my mind, in order of liking, it should be Tianxin - Saint - Junior Sister - Ji. First of all, Tianxin has nothing to say, my wife. Secondly, the Saint has been brainwashed by PUA since she was a child, so some so-called poisonous points are actually not responsible for her, or even very small. In addition, she took the initiative to reject the emperor and the Holy Son's touch, which can be said to be very good. In my opinion, this is forgivable, but of course, it does not mean that it must be forgiven... Next is the junior sister. Her behavior, to put it simply, is that she is young and does not understand love, so she was deceived and bewitched. But at a more serious level, it means being irresponsible, ungrateful, or even, it can be said, always treating the protagonist as a backup... It was written in the article that some people had always said that the two would become Taoist couples and become husband and wife, but she never refuted it and was even happy to hear it. As a result, after being spoken to by someone he had just met and talking sweetly, he immediately scorned him, whether he was his brother, his father, or someone he once admired. This kind of character can be imagined. Therefore, in my opinion, Junior Sister is unforgivable. Finally, it's Ji. In fact, there's no need to talk about this. It's typical to have both... In the eyes of normal people, such people are disgusting and disgusting. Finally, I want to say something: hurry up and update, no one in the production team is as good as you.

One of the few articles on Tomato that seems comfortable from a male perspective. It seems more comfortable to not have so many fragile characters, but I suggest not to give the male protagonist a good ending. After all, to put it bluntly, the male protagonist is also a scumbag who plays with emotions, and his purpose is to run away in order to gain regrets after receiving the goods. He himself also knows that he is quite a scumbag, so I hope that the ending will be that the male protagonist returns home and lives a good life by himself instead of collecting a lot of harems to enjoy the blessings of others. Don't forget about the business and remember the theme. Don't fall into the trap of women. Do things well and then go home to achieve a few small goals and live happily.

For the first heroine, the protagonist just needs to show off her cards and say that she likes the junior sister before she got married in her previous life. She is pure and clean. What comes after rebirth is an illusion, unreal, making the heroine unable to love her, carving out her heart and flesh, and scattering her soul. To be honest, the author's way of handling it is not very good. All the heroines can have a limited showdown, explain the psychological reasons why they can't be together, express that they like the clean and pure one in their memory, say that they feel sad when they see them, and ensure that these heroines only dare to secretly look at the protagonist.

The plot is quite satisfactory and not too sluggish, but the torture is a little bit fun. Many people in the comment area said it was awesome, but they actually introduced themselves to the male lead. Overall it looks pretty good. Writing is also online

Meng Tianxin is the real heroine. I really hope they can be together. Alas, the author returned my tears.

It's a pity that the ending is too hasty. You say you are afraid of being scolded, but in fact, there is really no need to look at our feelings when writing novels. It is impossible to satisfy everyone by changing it according to users. On the contrary, it will disappoint the people who support you. I particularly like this novel. After coming out of the demon clan, the writing is very heart-wrenching, but being able to protect what you want to protect under such extreme pressure is the real charm. This book and its author are just like the protagonist, who was defeated under this overwhelming pressure and fabricated a good illusion to comfort himself. This is a wonderful book, but also a broken book. Author, you have to believe in your ability, your writing style is still very good. My dream is also to write a novel of my own for others to read, no matter what the evaluation is, just to fulfill an obsession. However, the writing is not good, and I don't want the bad writing to taint my original intention. But you have this condition, I hope you can write the next book for yourself.

I can only say that there is something wrong with the evaluation system. Such a good book only has a score of more than 8 points. It has a very novel theme and each story is vivid, lively and interesting. Just listen to my words and it will be over. The more you read, the more amazing it becomes.

It's well written, every story is not a routine, the characters are quite profound, and each has its own new ideas in it. The writing style is also very good. It can be regarded as the best in the current husband-chasing novels that are all routines. It's very good. Meng Tianxin, hurry up and win the Easter match!

The author's conception is exquisite, his writing is excellent, the plot is connected and transformed, and the use of narrative and flashback techniques is natural. The storyline and regret of each female character are logically self-consistent and clear in thinking. Although the switching of male and female perspectives and their respective mental processes are a bit exaggerated, they are not abrupt. But the inevitable contradiction in the later stages of writing the book is that because it is so well written, every female character can be the heroine, but if these people are included in the harem and written as a happy ending, it will be difficult for people to accept it, or it will be difficult for the author to accept it, and it will end with a very poor ending. If you separate the stories of each female character and write several medium-length novels, you will inevitably fall into a cliche, losing the conflicts and emotional entanglements of multiple female protagonists, and losing the fun of stock trading. I think this is an issue that should be considered during the outline conception stage. This way of writing is very good, but it doesn't end well. Perhaps the author himself has thought about this problem, but each character is so well written that it is difficult to let go of it in the end. The original outline is invalidated and hastily switched to modern society, leaving readers to fantasize about the ending they should have when they are confused. Anyway, thank you to the author for this novel.

The author actually writes well, with many types of stories, and he doesn't actually put too much emotion into it. After all, it's just for the return and ten small goals. The most criticized story in this book is probably the third story. I happened to see it there, the copy of Ji Yuebai, and I just saw the sixth chapter of the copy. I also want to say something. In fact, the story is really good. It is a bit similar to a TV series "I Want to Marry You" that I watched when I was a child. The dungeon is divided into two parts, the first entry dungeon and the rebirth dungeon. Now let me personally analyze the first few chapters I have seen. Let me explain first: Chen Anyun is the protagonist of this book; Ji Yuebai is the heroine who first entered the dungeon; Li Xiyuan is the male protagonist of the dungeon; Meng Tianxin is the heroine of the reborn dungeon. In my opinion, it is very simple. The very beginning of Chen Anyun and Ji Yuebai's rebirth was the day Ji Yuebai and Li Xiyuan met. The background is that Chen Anyun, as the protagonist, was reborn with memories. Without knowing why, he took a peek at Ji Yuebai's situation, but did not find that Ji Yuebai had retained his memory. Then he sealed the memories before his rebirth, and prepared to play it again according to the plot of the first entry, in order to successfully complete the copy. Ji Yuebai actually has memories here, and the book shows that Ji Yuebai had a psychological burden before his rebirth, and just couldn't let go of Li Xiyuan, so he secretly took a look at Li Xiyuan's life, only to find that Li Xiyuan had passed away long ago and was not with Meng Tianxin. He searched for him everywhere to no avail, and finally died in depression. In other words, Ji Yuebai first misunderstood his first love Li Xiyuan, and then left without saying goodbye. This was Ji Yuebai's regret with Li Xiyuan and confusion about why the two did not get together. Later, when he was the saddest and helpless, he met Chen Anyun and was attracted by Chen Anyun. Touched, and finally fell in love, now reborn and returned to the day when I first met my first love, the regret in my heart burst out completely, full of feelings of compensation for Li Xiyuan. This is understandable, after all, Bai Yueguang is really powerful. At this time, from Ji Yuebai's perspective, she recognized Because she was the only one who was reborn with memories, she now loves two people in her heart, one is Bai Yueguang, who is full of guilt for her, and the other is Chen Anyun who was warm and accompanying her in her previous life. However, in Ji Yuebai's view, both Li Xiyuan and Chen Anyun are not with her at this moment. There was an intersection, and she met Li Xiyuan first, so she wanted to make up for Li Xiyuan first. After Li Xiyuan died of old age like his previous life, she would go to Chen Anyun, get acquainted with him again, and spend the rest of her life accompanying Chen Anyun. I think this idea is understandable. Most readers complained about Ji Yuebai eating from a bowl and looking at the pot before rebirth, and eating from the pot and looking at the bowl after rebirth. In fact, as I said above, in Ji Yuebai's heart, it is normal for her to choose whoever she chooses after rebirth. In her opinion, whoever she chooses will not hurt another person. The reason why she has the idea of ​​accompanying Li Xiyuan first, and then Chen Anyun, mainly The reason is that she has memories of her previous life. When she chose Li Xiyuan, she felt guilty about Chen Anyun. But for Chen Anyun, he was originally here to do the task. Ji Yuebai's current approach is completely in line with the normal development of the dungeon plot. Seriously speaking, even if there is a cow, it is Chen Anyun and Ji Yuebai who bullish Li Xiyuan. There is no such thing as Chen Anyun being bullied. My comments may be a bit messy. I don't know if you can understand what I mean. It doesn't matter. This is just my personal opinion. I wrote my own rebuttal to the trolls and felt comfortable [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

I haven't finished reading it yet, so let me rate it first. I have read more than 50 chapters so far, and the quality is very good. It can be said that my impressions on Tomato are among the top ones. As long as it doesn't fall apart at the end, it will become a great book. If there are emotional issues, I may be inclined to linger a little longer, and then accept most of them [laughing] But as for the author's introduction... I don't care, Tianxin, you must keep it for me. [Pouts] Why did Chapter 183 change to writing about the city? Are you out of fantasy and inspiration? To be honest, this story has been told to the end and can be finished, but if it is to extend it, it feels a bit strange to write such a thing. Third comment: There is no problem with the author's quality. The characters in these cities are also very defiant. Next, we should arrange more roles for Tian Xin. These defiant characters should be dealt with as soon as possible. They are too defiant. Don't let them be so arrogant. [Pause face] By the way, the original role of the group's favorite heroine in this article is too small. Although this book is still worthy of five stars in my heart, the rating remains unchanged. The main reason is that it is a bit abrupt to move to the city.

This book is very well written. Each heroine has her own independent thoughts and character portrayal. She is not just like a Muggle. I prefer Liuli and Tianxin. Unfortunately, the ending is really too sloppy. Personally, I can't say that any of the female protagonists are unworthy of the male protagonists. There was a dialogue in the male protagonist system where the author pointed out that the ending of the novel without rebirth was destined to be like this. It also introduces that after they are reborn, they belong to the free world and are not restricted by the author's writing. After rebirth, they do not feel sorry for the protagonist. I think each character is well drawn in writing. Like it.

A pretty good book, better than those who regret for the sake of regret. As an online article, the writing style has surpassed that of many authors on the same platform. I have read every story. It can be said that the image design of each heroine is very vivid, with clear love and hatred. The heroine is not perfect, but has her own flaws and advantages. It is these differences that make up these stories. When I read it earlier, I could see that there were a lot of foreshadowings. Every time I saw these foreshadowings, I would imagine the plot that would follow. It's a pity that the author didn't write it out in the end, probably because of the traffic and some of the reviews. If you look at the individual plot alone, the writing is actually very good. If you come here to see the various stories, it's worth a look. Although this book ends hastily, it is understandable that motivation is needed to write a book. I hope the author's next book can be more exciting, come on! In addition, changing the cover might attract more people [face covering] [laughing evilly]

Given time, it will be a masterpiece with a score of 9.5 After all. The story is very interesting and the emotional line is great, but it's a pity that there are so few readers. The heroines in several stories are all great, without any poisonous points, no poisonous points at all. You are so good at writing, you can write more!

I came across the animation video of this book while browsing videos, so I downloaded Pomodoro to watch it. After reading it in three days, I can feel that the author has made some descriptions of the heroines who are not worthy of the male protagonist's love to the end. This can also be used as proof to determine the final winner. Except for the bad ending due to being trolled, overall I liked it very much. It would be great if the ending could be that the heroine and Tian Xin hide to recuperate their strength because of their injuries, and meet the male protagonist to fight back against the monsters together. I hope the author can re-write a good ending as the book is seen by more people and becomes more popular.

Read this book carefully, it is about sadomasochism. Sit down and work hard to express it with delicate writing and plot. So when reading this book, try to read every plot, otherwise you may misunderstand the author's meaning due to the lack of certain details. But for now, the logic is self-consistent, sadomasochistic, but slightly sadistic. There is a slight irritation (much better than the disgusting plot in Japanese comics), so give the author some patience. I emphasize again and again that this is not a cool article. If it is a cool article, please go out and read the next one. ૮O(´^｀)o. In the end, we still want to eat something sweet. More sweetness.

This book takes memories as the core and is narrated from the perspective of narrative. The rhythm is relatively slow, but it does not lack thrilling plots. It is a masterpiece. In addition, I am a harem lover, pure [laughter]

The writing is so damn good. It's rare for Tomato to see such a detailed description of every story. The last time I looked at it so carefully was Snow Blades, but the updates are too slow. I have to wait half a month for a story, but slow work brings out fine work. I'm willing to wait.

A book that looks very comfortable, written in a sad style, I feel very comfortable, refreshing, and beautiful. The author should not stop updating it. Books with this kind of theme are most likely to be interrupted because of the small number of people. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's a very good novel. Unfortunately, the author was influenced by the comments and didn't want to write it anymore, so it ended unfinished. Whenever the author fills in the unfinished parts, I will add the last star [laughs awkwardly]

I like to read this kind of knife novels

At first I thought it was an ordinary invincible system novel, and the first chapter only had an average feeling, but later I found out that was not the case. The whole text is not a static character advancement and insertion of memories. The various contradictions and accidents at the end made this novel slightly amazing. Unlike other cool novels where you expected the ending after reading the beginning, this one can be said to be unexpected. It gave me a lot of unexpected conflicts. Although the characters and the plot are slightly similar in the later period, the ending as a short story is enough to cover up this small flaw. Moreover, the ending is a bit hasty and regretful, but the harem novel is the most test of writing skills. Rather than being disappointed and unfinished, it is better to end it here. It can be regarded as an excellent work in a short story, which suits my taste.

Tianxin Tianxin Tianxin! So the author's profile is single or none, but how come there are too many tags? Even so, let's give Tianxin more patches before the restart. Only the intentional fall and the follow-up have no intersection are still missing. Tianxin currently gives people innocence, white and flawless, and the male protagonist is the only one. Make a follow-up to retrieve the memory of the intentional fall before the restart and quickly after being seen. Push aside, is it better that the previous concern for the CS junior was just a deliberate act? Generally speaking, the characters and plots are not perfect, and it can definitely be avoided, but that is probably what the author wants to write, and it is hard to say anything. The writing feels good, at least it is more comfortable to read than other articles, and the expression is clear and clear.

How should I put it? In fact, from some perspectives, this book has more than five stars. The details are many and delicate, and the protagonist is very good in terms of IQ and time, not only does it not have that greasy harem plot. Personally, I prefer to read essays about invincible growth and layout similar to those of Emperor Huang Tian and Luo Wuji. I only occasionally read these sadistic essays on a whim. I have read many regretful themes, and this one can be regarded as the closest to perfection. Regardless of how it ends, regrets are common in life, so this book also made me profound. After this book, I probably can't stand other books on the same subject. I wish the author and all book friends good health and happiness.

I saw it very late. Fortunately, I saw the introduction of "Single heroine or no heroine" from the beginning and was not misled by the bad reviews in the comment area. I think it's quite interesting to watch later. The plots of most of the female characters are relatively cliche, and the female characters all have some brains. However, there are still special Liuli and Tianxin. In addition, the ending of the world of Chaos Clock and the process of the world are also well written in my opinion. I think the process of Chaos Clock World is also very slow. In fact, Li Sangyin is quite special, but I don't know why she has so few roles. Since coming to Tomato, I have read a lot of novels of the wife-chasing and crematorium type. Most of them I got addicted to after reading a hundred or two hundred chapters. I am still looking forward to updating this one. I feel that although there are some flaws, overall I still have to give it a five-point rating. In addition, Stud Tianxin!

It's a very good novel, but the narration is a bit unfamiliar, but once you get used to it, it's still very good, and the combination of several short stories is very smooth. Personally, I like the chapter about the bright moon rising over the sea the most, although other heroines may just regret it: Wadaxi killed the person she loved most with her own hands. Here is: Vadasi, killed the person he loved most with his own hands, and it was Bai Mao (White Hair Control) However, the beat was a bit loud at the end, but it was okay. It's good to read as a casual novel. I hope the author can write a better novel next time