Reborn, Immortal Lord, Stop Flirting with Me!

First of all, you can pick and drop the emotional line between Yue Hongji and Liu Hu, right? How about the flirtation? Draw out the desire to see but not write? (Like a heartless man) Second, as for the two eggs, I should write a few simple sentences. I thought they were a pair. Judging from the description, there is a high probability that they are two birds. For the species, please refer to "The Classic of Mountains and Seas". During the battle, you can write a few sentences to express your feelings. (You have become a heartless man again) Thirdly, Qing Yan should not be the only one to play in the battle, he feels a bit like the male protagonist Long Aotian. Fourth, at least wait until Yeyang Yuanying is fighting, and then there will be writing again. Fifth, we also need to write two sentences about the past lives of Qing Yan and Ye Yang. (You have become a heartless man again) Also, what about the pitfall that Qing Yan cannot ascend? I thought it was a bit of abuse, but it turned out not to be the case? (You have become a heartless man again) Sixth, the meaning of the moon rope was written as if Qing Yan knew it before, but later said he didn't know it, which is a bit contradictory. Seventh, what about the story of Mrs. Qing and the Qing officials? (You have become a heartless man again) Seventh, where are Ye Yang's mother and sister? Should Nightingale get married or marry Song Yu? Is the emperor dead? (You have become a heartless man again) Eighth, the love line progresses too slowly. Some people may like the ambiguous period, but I like the fast pace (love is super pleasure, neat and simple, and not tiring~) Ninth, what happened to Mo Yunyao and Guadan? Are they a couple? After Gua Dan found out that Mo Yunyao was his father-killing enemy, did he turn to hate out of love and turn into sadomasochism, or did he figure out the mystery and stay with her for a long time? And what is the name of melon egg? (You have become a heartless man again) Tenth, what is the ending of Zhao Huan and Pan He? How come such a big villain doesn't have tragic consequences? At the same time, author, you need to open up your game and don't let those trivial things trouble Qing Yan. Qing Yan's vision is much broader than that of Zhao Huan, Ye Yang and others. When dealing with these two villains, Ye Yang should be the main one and Qing Yan the supplement. This is also a kind of exercise. You can also let Granny Snake join the battle. Whether it's the villain or the righteous, she will always appear. Let me make it clear that I like this book very much, which makes me want it to be good, so I wrote down these suggestions, so I don't want to make mistakes. As for why I am a heartless man, it's because, the author, you are a beam of light that saved me in my book drought, but you threw me back into the darkness!! Ahhhhhhhh!

The author's writing is very good. Keep writing. I support you. Come on! Come on! I hope the author will write better and better in the future The content of the story is quite good. I feel that the description could be more detailed and the character creation is not bad. Keep writing! I hope more people will read this book I hope everyone in the book is well, May everything the author encounters be filled with warm spring and blooming flowers. May the author do everything he wishes.

Very interesting, the plot is very exciting

It's very beautiful, I like it very much, but it's too little, and the ending is a bit sloppy. I'm looking forward to the author's new work ꉂ ೭(˵¯̴͒ꇴ¯̴͒˵)౨"

Okay, let's have some extras…

Overall it's good to watch, but the ending is a bit too fast

Can you please open a book about Young Master Yue and Liu Hu? I really want to read it 🥰

It's okay, but there are eighty chapters and fifty chapters of misunderstanding, and there is no talk. They only come together in the last chapter, and it ends quite suddenly.

What's nice is that the ending is a bit hasty

It's good to watch, the author is looking forward to the author's extras, hehe😀