Dragon Raja: But I'm a Jujutsu Sorcerer

The description and plot control are quite good. If it were a fanfic that didn't fit so closely with the original text, it would undoubtedly be a masterpiece. If you look at it according to the original text, the character image is not very satisfactory. The first is Lu Mingfei, who is a bit too inferior and cowardly. In my imagination, Lu Mingfei is the kind of character with a lot of inner drama. Of course, if he is only described as a supporting role, then there is nothing wrong with deleting some of his psychological description. Secondly, Lu Mingfei's uncle, aunt and little fat man Lu Mingze. The ancient city of Shushu Road is a strict housewife and there is nothing wrong with it. But in my understanding of the original work, Lu Gucheng should be the kind of person who taught Lu Mingfei a lesson at his aunt, failed to help Lu Mingfei, and made amends afterwards because of his inner guilt. The aunt's image as a mean and mean person in the market is vividly reflected, but in fact she is not a completely negative character. She still has principles of life. It is not that she doesn't care about Lu Mingfei, but because of her inner jealousy, she rarely shows a good face towards Lu Mingfei. When encountering big events, she will still worry about Lu Mingfei. The little fat Lu Mingze only described a few words, but it gave people the image of a villain who shamelessly took advantage of Lu Mingfei's alimony. In my impression, the little fat Lu Mingze was not the kind of person who cared about the alimony. He had a heartless character. Finally, there is the issue of Lu Mingze's family conditions and his relationship with Lu Mingfei. Based on her personality, her aunt would not spend money lavishly. She was a diligent and thrifty person who managed her family, and it was impossible for her to waste Lu Mingfei's child support to improve the family's conditions. The relationship between Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze's family should be the kind of relationship that is not harmonious but still warm, but in this fanfic, it seems that Lu Mingfei is a useless burden other than providing them with a stable income. The above are some of my opinions, for reference only. (I heard that there are several versions of Dragon Clan, but I have only seen one version, and I don't know which version it is. Maybe the characters based on my understanding are different in different versions. No offense, just expressing my own thoughts.)

Regarding the issue between the Ten Shadows of Curse and the combat power of the dragon clan. First of all, some people say that Moxu Luo can exchange one with the Black King, which is simply nonsense. Any world-destroying word spirit is not as good as the expansion of the Su Nuo domain. Even the actual expressive power is not a mere 200m in radius. The candle dragon in the Three Gorges Reservoir can boil all the water in its forward stage. Moxuluo's ability to defeat the Dragon King is probably due to poor information (it started with a Dragon King like Fenrir who gave birth to a dragon body). He used ordinary word spirits or elemental effects to grind out the corresponding elemental resistance, and then the World-Destroying Word Spirit was ineffective. But ordinary dragon kings have the ability to use other low-level word spirits, let alone the black king, the composite word spirit nine infants, etc. Can easily drink a pot. As for the protagonist and Ange, to be honest, the speed of Ange Time Zero is not something that can be hit by a curse, unless the field is expanded and the blessing effect is sure to hit. It took 299 seconds for Gojo Satoru, who was blessed with Cang acceleration, to get rid of the cyborg in the subway station. Just take Angers for a few seconds after the roller coaster derailed. Cooperating with Chu Zihang and the others, they saved a whole car of people, and this was just because they needed to share the effect of the spirit spirit. It took a few tenths of a second for normal people to trim a beard, but it was not easy for Moxuluo. Adaptation is one thing, and the main reason is that the self-healing ability is also exaggerated. However, if the protagonist is pure physical skills, it should be considered the ceiling if compared to the special level. Apart from the Dragon King with a complete dragon body, he is the first person. But again, Angers is too partial to the subject, and the points are all about speed. Do you want to cancel the effect of the word spirit, or do you want to be faster than him?

There is no CP in the title. It's Baihewen. The content is quite good and the heroine is very strong.

I hope that the heroine will not be Lily (male CPs are also acceptable) or she will die without having a CP. Ambiguous friendships are okay, but I will refuse anything else. I really, really like big writing. I haven't been this excited for a long time, but don't become a loser. 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺[Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying]

It's similar to "I don't have money to go to college, so I have to slay dragons"

Well, how should I put it? When reading Chapter 34, she kissed her beautiful employer. This part is written in great detail and they exchanged saliva. It felt like a lily style. Obviously what I originally said was no CP, we are all brothers, we are just posting, what is going on now? Couldn't he have given advance warning? ! ! ! ! ! ! It's not that it's unacceptable, but this is too sudden, my God! ! ! ! ! If he had said in advance that this was a female bronze novel, I think I would still be able to read it, but when he did it so suddenly, I felt like I wasn't particularly good? ? ? Whose good brother kisses you when he comes up? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The writing in the Dragon Clan fanfic is excellent and the characters are very fleshed out. The writing has a Jiangnan flavor, which is the kind of Dragon Clan fanfic I want to read. In current Dragon Clan fanfiction, the male protagonist is either reborn as Lu Mingfei or is focused on falling in love. None of them has the feeling of being ordinary but a little mysterious, mysterious but philosophical, and philosophical but a little silly. But this article does it.

Oh, that's good, looking forward to the update More, love to read Although I prefer no CP, Lily is also good 😘 😄 Actually, there is no rush. The author has two or three chapters a day which is really good. Come on~~~keep the quality and quantity

I saw that it was Lily in the early hours of the morning. I'm not saying it's not possible, but I'd like to introduce it as a reminder. I feel mixed emotions when I see it now [Petrochemical]

How can I say it, it's not bad, Dragon King Shuangwen But it's a bit uncomfortable for readers of the Original Dragon Clan. After all, the characters who appear in the first five chapters are basically OOC. The characterization is average among all the Dragon Clan novels. The plot is okay, at least it doesn't forcefully suppress or demoralize the plot just for the sake of discovery. Evaluated as "love yourself"