Dragon Clan******

The description and plot control are quite good. If it were a fanfic that didn't fit so closely with the original text, it would undoubtedly be a masterpiece. If you look at it according to the original text, the character image is not very satisfactory. The first is Lu Mingfei, who is a bit too inferior and cowardly. In my imagination, Lu Mingfei is the kind of character with a lot of inner drama. Of course, if he is only described as a supporting role, then there is nothing wrong with deleting some of his psychological description. Secondly, Lu Mingfei's uncle, aunt and little fat man Lu Mingze. The ancient city of Shushu Road is a strict housewife and there is nothing wrong with it. But in my understanding of the original work, Lu Gucheng should be the kind of person who taught Lu Mingfei a lesson at his aunt, failed to help Lu Mingfei, and made amends afterwards because of his inner guilt. The aunt's image as a mean and mean person in the market is vividly reflected, but in fact she is not a completely negative character. She still has principles of life. It is not that she doesn't care about Lu Mingfei, but because of her inner jealousy, she rarely shows a good face towards Lu Mingfei. When encountering big events, she will still worry about Lu Mingfei. The little fat Lu Mingze only described a few words, but it gave people the image of a villain who shamelessly took advantage of Lu Mingfei's alimony. In my impression, the little fat Lu Mingze was not the kind of person who cared about the alimony. He had a heartless character. Finally, there is the issue of Lu Mingze's family conditions and his relationship with Lu Mingfei. Based on her personality, her aunt would not spend money lavishly. She was a diligent and thrifty person who managed her family, and it was impossible for her to waste Lu Mingfei's child support to improve the family's conditions. The relationship between Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze's family should be the kind of relationship that is not harmonious but still warm, but in this fanfic, it seems that Lu Mingfei is a useless burden other than providing them with a stable income. The above are some of my opinions, for reference only. (I heard that there are several versions of Dragon Clan, but I have only seen one version, and I don't know which version it is. Maybe the characters based on my understanding are different in different versions. No offense, just expressing my own thoughts.)

I hope that the heroine will not be Lily (male CPs are also acceptable) or she will die without having a CP. Ambiguous friendships are okay, but I will refuse anything else. I really, really like big writing. I haven't been this excited for a long time, but don't become a loser. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry ][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying]

Oh, that's good, looking forward to the update More, love to read Although I prefer no CP, Lily is also good [blowing kiss] [laughs] Actually, there is no rush. The author has two or three chapters a day which is really good. Come on~~~keep the quality and quantity~~~

The writing in the Dragon Clan fanfic is excellent and the characters are very fleshed out. The writing has a Jiangnan flavor, which is the kind of Dragon Clan fanfic I want to read. In current Dragon Clan fanfiction, the male protagonist is either reborn as Lu Mingfei or is focused on falling in love. None of them has the feeling of being ordinary but a little mysterious, mysterious but philosophical, and philosophical but a little silly. But this article does it.

I saw that it was Lily in the early hours of the morning. I'm not saying it's not possible, but I'd like to introduce it as a reminder. I feel mixed emotions when I see it now [Petrochemical]

It's very interesting. I've been reading this book since I found it and saw the latest plot. But I really want to know what the relationship plan of this book is [crying] It's really important [love]

It's super good-looking, and I can keep watching it, but the emotional line is unclear and feels weird. After watching Dragons, I feel that Caesar's writing is a bit too flat and has no highlights. I hope Chu Zihang's writing is more complete.

What should I say? The positioning of the protagonist is quite confusing. It seems like there is no CP but also contains elements of a girl. But I like the character of the protagonist. She is emotional but not soft-hearted. It feels much better than the Virgin Mary or the hyperthyroid sister who kills people without brains. It is recommended to try it, it looks good [shy]

Hundred or single? As long as you're not getting married, that's fine

It fits my impression of the Dragon Clan very well. The index of the first few chapters, the depressing beginning, pave the way for the dazzling things to come, and write a sad world with its own characteristics. It is a very good Dragon Clan novel. I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I hope the results can be maintained! Come on! Not having a knife would be disrespectful to the Dragon Clan, and the sad theme should not be glossed over. Looking forward to the knife, no knife can penetrate deeper into my hot-blooded heart than Ellie's knife!

If you like it, you will also like to read Feng Aotian's refreshing novels. But is cp fixed? Can it be done without cp? Can it be done?

I added it to my bookshelf before, but I checked it out yesterday and saw that it was interrupted. [What] [cry] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

The books written by our author are so beautiful [Blowing Kiss]. It is still my favorite style of writing. It is the most thoughtful Dragon Clan fanfiction I have read so far. I really like the character of the protagonist. It is very similar to the character of the protagonist in the previous book. I love it to death. Moreover, the two books also have interactive geese. Please read more about the author. I love you. [Blowing Kiss]

It's pretty^ω^, but not enough. Does the heroine have any CP?

Very beautiful. Dragon clan and curse return. Very thoughtful setting.

Author, tell me the truth, is there a male protagonist? Why does Caesar look more and more like a male protagonist? [Shocked]

It's pretty good. I didn't know he was the author of the previous book until I saw the review of Zen Yuan Yuan. It's equally good, but it hasn't been updated for as long as the previous one. I haven't finished the last book yet... ʕ≧ᴥ≦ʔ

I think this is the only Dragon Clan fanfic I've read so far, it's really good! Looking forward to it! The author is so dry!

There are a few minor issues, but overall it looks pretty good, but is this book about singles, hundreds, or marriages? ?

It's beautiful, especially the kiss with Shia, which really touched my heart. Although we kissed, we were not together. I am still a simple little girl (?)

It seems to be very good. Why not give it five stars? That is, does the author's heroine have a cp? If so, who is it? It can't really be Lily, right?

This is a good-looking book [Top post][Top post][Top post] The author is great! I hope the CP is not a woman [sending my heart]

Good-looking [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][shy] But why are there so few! ! , The author updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good to read, it's my favorite among the Dragon Clan fanfics [Chigua] [Like]

It's pretty cool, but I feel like the character's personality is a little different from the original Dragon Clan.

By the way, does this have C P? [Exploration][Exploration] It can't really be senior sister, right?

Can you update it soon? I stand for Chu Zihang, Caesar, Ming Fei, hee hee hee [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It looks good. If you like it, just buy more.

Not bad, worth watching

Super pretty! ! ! Love it, love it! ! ! !