You Were Asked to Write a Heartbreaking Story, but You Wrote About the Heroes of Shu Han

It's good to watch. I've written a lot about this subject recently, but this is the first time I've seen one about the Three Kingdoms. I'm so excited to watch it😁😁😁 I hope there won't be a female protagonist as much as possible. I came here for this subject. I hope the protagonist can focus on his career and not watch any emotional drama😏😏😏

Chapter 9: Where Lu Bu killed the three young generals, let's not talk about anything else. I remember, didn't Hulao Prison belong to Dong Zhuo at this time? The 18 princes jointly attacked Hulao Pass under the Hulao Pass. In the article, Lu Bu called "the princes in the pass"? What happened?

The Three Kingdoms is really too charming, and there are too many regrets and feelings that are difficult to reconcile.

The brotherly love between Ji and Han is so touching. Although it is suspected of being a cliché, but now that the Three Kingdoms ip is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, stories such as Guan Yu's careless loss of Jingzhou and Zhuge Liang's straw boat borrowing arrows are familiar to me, and the characters in it have long been difficult to make me feel emotional. The author made me feel moved, heroic, and uneasy when I first read The Three Kingdoms. So many things in ancient and modern times are all discussed in a joke Hope to update soon

It is a very good book, but I actually feel that there is still some room for subsidy. Let's be honest here. The Romance of the Three Kingdoms is actually written about the struggle for hegemony between three parts of the world. Therefore, although there are many difficulties, most of them are not obvious. Um. Now that the author has written it all, let me make some suggestions. 1. In the original work, Ma Chao died of illness after Zhuge Liang captured Meng Huo seven times, but the scene before Ma Chao's death was not actually mentioned. Maybe classical novels are not suitable for changing scenes, but I think you can add a little bit about the scene before Ma Chao's death, such as "Remember, remember, come back to Xiliang!" 2. When Zhao Yun died, his two sons came out to report to Zhuge Liang, and it did not reflect the scene before Zhao Yun's death. If I write it according to my idea, then before starting, I must first describe Zhao Yun's actions to highlight Zhao Yun's vitality at this time, and then transition to describe Zhuge Liang and the generals watching the wind break the flagpole, which foreshadows Zhao Yun's death, and then let Zhao Guang and Zhao Tong come out to report Zhao Yun's death. The pace must be fast to highlight Zhao Yun's unpreparedness. It should not only make the audience in the book feel the same, but also make the readers feel the charm of history. 3. There are no generals in Shu, so Liao Hua becomes the vanguard Then here you can describe Liao Hua's old appearance at that time. I don't know why I have to write it like this, but my intuition tells me that I have to write it like this. I think it is probably to stick to the theme, recall the glory of the Han Dynasty Emperor Zhaoli period, and deepen the meaning. ↑The above are all my suggestions, but to be honest, this book is very well written. (High moral praise) Again, you can't just make the audience of the book feel the same, you also have to make the readers feel the same, and then... Cough!

The endings of Liu Bei, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei really make people cry just thinking about it.

It's cool. It's refreshing to see the reality of the Three Kingdoms from this perspective.

It's rare to see this kind of writing about the Three Kingdoms, and overall it's pretty good. I just hope that I can write a good book and not write messy emotional lines. One star was deducted because a certain actress named Yang had to appear in the book.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", every time I watch one more episode, there will be one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, saying that I had no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers

I'm really going to be driven crazy by Luo Guanzhong's geography knowledge.