[Fantasy imagination + time travel + invincibility + Lao Liu + single female protagonist + apprenticeship development]
Lin Fan died suddenly while working overtime and accidentally traveled to the world of immortality.
The system gave him invincible abilities, but he didn't know it.
Calling himself a mortal all day long, he lives in fear in the world of immortality.
He unexpectedly gained a beautiful apprentice who cultivated immortality, and from then on he reached the pinnacle of his life.
[Lai Xue, save me!
I, Lai Xue, am here, who dares to touch my master
Reader comments
I'll comment after reading Chapter 18. This is a very new subject to me. If I were to sum it up in one phrase, it would be "joining the Sidihua stream". The protagonist is not like the traditional Dihua-liu protagonist who sits in one place and watches the performances of various monsters, ghosts and snakes. Instead, he walks out of his sanctuary and travels around the world like the protagonist of the traditional fairy tale. It's really eye-catching.
If there are any shortcomings, I personally think that the male protagonist is set too "low self-esteem". No matter what he does, he is timid, and no matter what situation he encounters, he always thinks in the direction of inferiority. A little annoyed. I hope the author can make the male protagonist less humble in his next writing: he can be timid, but not cowardly.
I'll comment after reading Chapter 18. This is a very new subject to me. If I were to sum it up in one phrase, it would be "joining the Sidihua stream". The protagonist is not like the traditional Dihua-liu protagonist who sits in one place and watches the performances of various monsters, ghosts and snakes. Instead, he walks out of his sanctuary and travels around the world like the protagonist of the traditional fairy tale. It's really eye-catching. If there are any shortcomings, I personally think that the male protagonist is set too "low self-esteem". No matter what he does, he is timid, and no matter what situation he encounters, he always thinks in the direction of inferiority. A little annoyed. I hope the author can make the male protagonist less humble in his next writing: he can be timid, but not cowardly.
Good, good, good