Behind the Scenes, I Watch the World

It's okay. Behind-the-scenes writing in Tomato is a rare species.

What looks good is unfair. Compared to other countries, the Dragon Kingdom where the protagonist lives has more superpowers than other countries.

Come on, author! Don't mess up 🍉

After reading a few chapters, it is in line with my expectations. The reasons are as follows: Quick update! Quick update! Quick update! 1. First of all, the protagonist is behind the scenes. He hardly participates in the actual activities. He just watches the operations of those people behind the scenes. I hope that the scenes of the protagonist should not appear in front of too many viewers, or appear secretly or mysteriously without revealing his identity, just like the person behind the curtain observing the changes in the world. 2. The creation of good and bad villains is not just about being decent, but also about actual casualties. This is very good, and promotes the survival of the fittest and the development process before complete spiritual recovery. 3. The plot process is not procrastinating, there are not too many irrelevant plots, there are contexts that promote the development of the plot or connect the content to the past, and there are enough details and comprehensive content. After watching it, the next thing I worry about is the situation. Most of the Reiki Resurrection books state: 1. The development in the middle and late stages is too fast, so that there are many outrageous phenomena and the collapse of combat power. Some secret realms or struggles between various organizations and countries can be added. 2. Due to the rapid development and the collapse of combat power, there was no content or theme to write about. After all, behind the scenes, I watched the world's movements and watched the readers feel happy. In the later period, boring situations appeared, which reduced the readers' interest. 3. In the later stage, if the combat power collapses and enters the universe, will there be various unpopular and disruptive forces? You can write that some cult beliefs are the invasion from other gods or planetary cultures or even "gods" in the universe. In fact, the most important of these questions is whether the plot can be developed around this behind-the-scenes flow, to what extent the power behind the scenes can be achieved, and what will happen to the people behind the scenes themselves. After all, ending with an elegant gesture at the end can make readers have endless aftertaste in the future. "Have you seen it? This is the posture of my king." - "Raising All Humanity" (Author: Three Hundred Catties of Smile) Also, if the author updates it quickly, this book will become a hit. Quick update! Quick update! Quick update! What I want to ask is what the overall proportion of ability users will be. Will everyone become ability users, or will it be a small number, about half, or the majority? There is also the issue of developing offspring. In my opinion, the children of ability users and superpowers are inherited. Each has a certain probability or small ability mutation. The next point to focus on is that one of the parents is not an ability user. If the lineage is an ability user, then it can be passed on. If the father's lineage is an ability user, the probability of inheritance will be greatly reduced (even if he is not an ability user, his physical fitness will be greatly improved, comparable to the peak of ordinary human physical fitness [laughing]), but there will be a certain increase in mutation probability. This is the way to balance the proportion of ability users, but it still depends on the overall proportion. It feels too complicated for everyone to become an esper, so I think about 40% of them are espers. If this is the way to screen, they must all be of high-level quality or above. I am just talking about the meaning here 🤔

No, does anyone really read this book?

I persisted until Chapter 86 and finally saw the author's improvement.

It's pretty good, but the writing style needs to be improved 👍