Twilight: Surrender

I think this is one of the better stories I've read in a fanfic. The heroine is not the kind of person who has a big golden finger and can protect the hero and his family and can challenge carnivorous vampires. Her personality is not all beautiful either. In this way, there are some flaws in every aspect, which makes it more real! Also, when I was in a dilemma when saving people before, I didn't think that Holy Mother, human hearts are made of flesh. Originally, when I first traveled through time, I might have thought that I was surrounded by paper people, but as we spent more and more time together, Uncle Will has become a kind elder, and Bella is also a good best friend. Knowing that they are in danger, it is impossible to just watch them go to be insulted and die. So I think the heroine has a very good character. Rather than saying it is the Virgin, it is better to say that it is the kindness and sincerity of the heroine as a Chinese child!

It's good to watch, and the plot is rigorous. I also like this kind of long-term love that defeats the sky. Moreover, the author is really gentle. There is no Black Bella. I once read an article, and the author was very outrageous. He wrote about strong women with the pair of Black Bella and Edward. They have a condescending attitude, which is very disgusting. The author's writing is very good.

It's very sweet, and any misunderstandings will be clarified quickly. I like male and female protagonists with long mouths. There is no awkward and pretentious pulling, and there is no black Bella. I like this! Bella and Jacob are together. The heroine has been transformed into a vampire, but she can also switch between humans and vampires. Her venom can also turn other vampires into humans. This plug-in is a bit powerful. All in all, it's a sweet article, nothing too interesting.

The plot is not slow at all. In Chapter 9, the heroine confesses that Edward is a vampire. In Chapter 10, the heroine also confesses her love. Later, she was a little hesitant because Bella is a singer, but she quickly figured it out. There were no misunderstandings, no nonsense, and the male and female protagonists had their mouths from the beginning to the end. It made me feel comfortable physically and mentally! (｡>∀<｡) Edward in the article has a bit of low self-esteem and a cute love brain🥰The heroine Lin Na has a very good personality and handles rewriting the plot very well, which is logical₍₍Ϡ(੭•̀ω•́)੭✧⃛Looking forward to the post-marriage extra episode 💕

It's very interesting to watch, and there aren't that many entanglements. The male protagonist has always chosen the female protagonist from the beginning to the end. It's quite suitable for Bella and Jacob to be together. After all, I couldn't say whether I liked or disliked Bella when I watched the movie. It's okay. They don't have much scenes in the book, so it's good to be with Jacob. Also, the heroine was really funny at the beginning🤦🤦, and her skills were pretty awesome after she transformed her later on. Anyway, I think it's the one I've seen in the Twilight fanfics, and it's pretty cool. After all, there are very few Twilight fandoms and Edward CPs, but I really think this one looks good.

The logic is still very good, and Bella is also written very well, and it also gives a good ending. There is no female rivalry at all, which I think is the best part. The special nature of the heroine also made Luo's dream of having a child come true, which was also a big surprise. It's just that the garbled chapter in the middle is really a bit awkward 🤦

It's a very good-looking, very different heroine, closer to reality than a Mary Sue heroine. The heroine was still entangled in the original plot at the beginning, but later she really fell in love with the hero. The whole text is sweet and has no regrets. Even Bella has her own cp Jacob.

I've already watched half of it. The heroine is very realistic, not pretentious or a virgin, and can play the guzheng. Edward and the heroine have been in love for a long time and are not abusive. Bella is also with Jacob. It's very interesting, a very interesting fanfic.

I really like watching Twilight movies. I have watched it no less than five times and found out that there is a Twilight fanfic. I started reading it out of curiosity. The heroine Lin Na is very smart and will directly complain when she encounters any injustice. Both the male and female protagonists have long mouths. There is a little bit of abuse🤏, but the rest is pure and sweet. I don't blame the original heroine (original heroine and Jacob). I look forward to the author's other works.

The rhythm of the plot is tight, and the image of the protagonist is also well created. Edward's love brain is really portrayed very well 🤭 Sometimes I find it quite interesting when watching it. It can be regarded as completing the cp line of my Bella and 🐺 hahahaha