The Fifth Master Huo’s Little Treasure

The novel is very good, I really like the male and female protagonists, Male protagonist: Mature and stable, domineering, cold, gentle, considerate, careful, strong, independent, very career-minded, very sinister, very coquettish, very lustful, very possessive, a bit paranoid, very tolerant, very patient, too soft-hearted, too emotional, jealous, clingy to the heroine, too many bad peaches, dotes on the heroine very much, cares about the heroine in everything, helps the heroine in everything, loves her to the core, Heroine: well-behaved and sensible, carefree, gentle, considerate, attentive, kind, naughty, cute, innocent, silly, weak and incompetent, very enterprising, snack food, loves to act coquettishly, loves to cling to the male protagonist, very insecure, always easily hurt, The love between the male and female protagonists goes from love at first sight to a long-term relationship. They both love each other very much, The male protagonist in this novel has too many rotten romances. They all come to hurt the heroine, always frame the heroine and cause her to get hurt. I hate Fang Qinxue the most. She is cruel, vicious, vain, jealous, and scheming. She is innocent and kind on the outside but very vicious on the inside, causing the heroine to lose her first child. I also like several supporting characters, including Huo Jingqi and Chu Qingqing, Zhou Yueyang and Lin Mowei.

Let's give it five stars... The male and female protagonists are too generous in dealing with people and don't handle them well... Over and over again... The same goes for the person named Fang, who later came back... The female protagonist is quite frustrated when she encounters bad people. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is still well written, with minor conflicts and sweet daily routines.

When Huo Beili saw her for the first time, his heart suddenly seemed to be filled with something that had always been empty. For the first time, a strange throbbing appeared. Luo Nanzhi seemed to like him when she first saw him. When she saw him for the first time just now, she felt an indescribable joy in her heart.

The article is good, but the paragraphs are too long. It could be divided into shorter ones. It does not mean that only when the expression is complete can it be segmented. Big, come on, come on!

The plot does not drag on, and there is no hiding from each other.

Love at first sight is sweet

The man is talented and the woman is good-looking, and the couple is made to look good.

Love at first sight runs both ways. There is no suspicion, just the male protagonist's endless doting on the female protagonist, and the lively and cheerful personality of the female protagonist is really beautiful.

The beginning is a straight-forward confession, I like it very much It looks good, but the bloody peach blossoms appear too often.

I like this very much, it's super pretty (♥∀♥)