Brother-In-Law, Take Me to Become an Immortal!

The author does not distinguish between martial arts and martial arts. Practicing martial arts can also improve your cultivation.

The book is very good. But I wish the pace could be faster. There is also a heroine, I hope she can be portrayed with more personality. I feel that of the current heroines, Lin Ruobing is slightly better, but the other heroines are a little worse.

On the top of the immortal world, proud of the world, there will be heaven with me, Li Lan. The myth is revealed, the universe is recorded, and the emperor is established in heaven. The fearful emperor's way will be engraved for eternity, and he is not weak to Emperor Li Tian.

Not bad, the writing ideas are very strange. I look forward to the performance of the chapters in the future.

After watching 80 episodes, I was attracted by the title of the book, thinking it was the only pretend story about cultivating immortality in the world of martial arts, but it turned out that it was not, it was just a traditional story about cultivating immortality! Everyone is cultivating immortality, and having a system is of no use!

Early stage son-in-law, panel system flow, the rhythm is okay Transition map in the mid-term (sense of seeing the sky) from the underworld to the yang world in the mid-late period (feeling of the emperor in the jar) The overall review is okay. It has its own plot design and the reference style is normal. It can be read. You can read it if you are short of books. At least I can't write it, even if I have read a lot of novels.

The protagonist crushes his opponents with all his intelligence and force. It's a rare and refreshing story, but it's a pity that the map changes too quickly. I hope that when the demon world invades there, the protagonist will lead the human destiny of the abyss to block the two worlds of immortals and demons, and then use planting as the foundation to develop spiritual objects and create a prosperous dynasty, conquering the immortals and slaying the demons below. But after changing the map, the story is not over yet, but it feels like it is over to me. Five stars, that's it.

In fact, the writing is okay. Except for being too forbearing in the early stage, and the things my sister did were too ungrateful, but the different positions are acceptable, but if you come clean, she will give you 1 star [pinch]

It's a very good book, why is it rated so low? Although it feels a bit like having a son-in-law, it's not completely true. I think the rating could be higher.

I have read dozens of them, and the writing, plot, and characterization are all absolutely top-notch. It only scored 6.9, Which is incredible. I came here to give it a perfect score! When I saw the fairy world, I felt it was a bit too confusing. The human world was really well written. Many things in the fairy world were confusing and mysterious. There were too many pretense of hatred and resentment, so I stopped reading.

I stayed up all night to read it. It was okay. I remember reading the content before. This dog is also called Black Emperor or Gray Emperor, and it brings Gray Mist. Does anyone know anything about it? Let me know.

Good article, very well written. I have read several chapters. Why is the rating so low, 6.9? 9.6 Is about right.

The author is very clever and quick. I hope that later on he can write about the improvement of cultivation as he is now. It is not very fast, but it does not drag the pace. The characters are well drawn and their personalities have their own merits. Keep up the good work

It's so well written, logical reasoning, the mastermind behind the scenes, battle of wits, benevolence, bravery, wisdom and trust.

This book gets more and more exciting as it goes on. At first I just thought it was a refreshing read, but after I read it it felt enlightening. Damn it. After reading it, it felt like it reflected reality. I was really stumped, especially the last part. It felt like you and I were being sucked by the capitalists and looking forward to a savior. In fact, we only have to think independently, everyone fights for their rights, and spontaneously unites the organization. There is no need for a savior. The capitalists can't bully us. If we can unite and stop working, Nor will they be exploited by Meituan's algorithm

A writer who is not afraid of being banned has the courage to write the truth about the world. It is very rare.

Ten years ago, I read many wonderful online novels, and I have been in a book shortage since then. The reason is that most of the online novels now have ordinary plots and the same routines, and it is difficult to be interested in reading them. This novel can be said to be the most exciting online novel I have read in the past ten years and I am willing to read it. I rated it four and a half stars. I did not give half a star because the update is a bit slow and it is difficult to satisfy my appetite [laughing]

Either I have to fight with my sister later, or I want my sister to die alone and unhappy.

It's not my sister who is worshiping. . There's nothing wrong with it

The content is novel and the plot is compact, worth collecting

The story is novel and much better than the traditional system of mindless monster killing and upgrading. Just updates slowly.

The imagination is magnificent, the plot is twists and turns, the characters are full-bodied, and the three views are correct. It is worth recommending!

The male protagonist has clear logic, decisive killing, and passionate passion. It is not a predictable plot. The writing is good and it is enjoyable to watch.

It has something to do with martial arts but not much

Chen Dong: Those who learn from me will live, those who resemble me will die.

This novel has a little bit of the old demon Chen Dong, For example, the gambling stone in the source refers to "Shading the Sky", the black sea is like the boundary sea, refer to "Perfect World", and the underworld of the underworld refers to the big and small underworlds in "Holy Ruins".

I also think the real book is very beautiful, but why does it have such a low rating?

It's at the level of a master. I still want to watch it after watching it.

This book is very good, I recommend reading it

It's a book that I won't know until I read it, but I'll be shocked when I read it, and I'll stick with it for a long time.