[Not brought into reality + single female protagonist] [Small family workshop, gold-making team]
The world's largest game company [Dream Chaser] has created a large-scale online game [Sweep the World] with real experience for the first time. Gu Liangchen accidentally came into contact with this game and started the crazy gold-making mode!
I just want to earn a few small goals from him, I love you, come and become my super VVVIP!
Gold coins, rare equipment, affordable medicines, special materials...
This is the only one, no other semicolon!
Reader comments
The writing is smooth and the plot is quite smooth.
Tell me what you find personally boring.
1: The problem of special equipment, the protagonist is not a system, the gems are not unique, and the base number in the world is a bit outrageous. The main thing is this setting of sputtering 500m. Maybe the loophole is a bit big? This is considered a plug-in for the protagonist, but it feels a bit awkward, but it's not a big problem.
2: The completion of several tasks taken by the protagonist was a bit too slow! Maybe there will be a series of missions later, or the plot delayed too long in that sentence.
3: The protagonist's wife and brother! Teammates should at least show some value, right? It doesn't matter here with your wife, but with your brother? Whether it is divided equally or paid, there is a problem, because you are the only one who has been paying. You can set up a small studio, pay your salary, and have people handle everything for you. You just need to buy equipment and level up. If you don't want your wife to be tired, you should let your brother do it according to the share, not equally.
4: 1,000 Copper coins = 1 silver coin, 1,000 silver coins equals 1 gold coin. This setting is fine, but the appearance of tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of copper coins is really uncomfortable. The base 100 system is actually the most comfortable to look at.
5: Equipment settings, this is actually a small issue. I have seen quite a few settings for mages wearing leather deck armor, but they have attribute differences and there are no career restrictions. Yours is different. Leather armor can only be worn by assassins, archers, wizards and priests. Well, that's a bit outrageous.
There is nothing else particularly impressive about it. That's it. Sneak away first as a courtesy
Come on, come on, come on
Come on
Come on
It looks pretty good, but I guess the data is bad! The author ran away.
The writing is smooth and the plot is quite smooth. Tell me what you find personally boring. 1: The problem of special equipment, the protagonist is not a system, the gems are not unique, and the base number in the world is a bit outrageous. The main thing is this setting of sputtering 500m. Maybe the loophole is a bit big? This is considered a plug-in for the protagonist, but it feels a bit awkward, but it's not a big problem. 2: The completion of several tasks taken by the protagonist was a bit too slow! Maybe there will be a series of missions later, or the plot delayed too long in that sentence. 3: The protagonist's wife and brother! Teammates should at least show some value, right? It doesn't matter here with your wife, but with your brother? Whether it is divided equally or paid, there is a problem, because you are the only one who has been paying. You can set up a small studio, pay your salary, and have people handle everything for you. You just need to buy equipment and level up. If you don't want your wife to be tired, you should let your brother do it according to the share, not equally. 4: 1,000 Copper coins = 1 silver coin, 1,000 silver coins equals 1 gold coin. This setting is fine, but the appearance of tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of copper coins is really uncomfortable. The base 100 system is actually the most comfortable to look at. 5: Equipment settings, this is actually a small issue. I have seen quite a few settings for mages wearing leather deck armor, but they have attribute differences and there are no career restrictions. Yours is different. Leather armor can only be worn by assassins, archers, wizards and priests. Well, that's a bit outrageous. There is nothing else particularly impressive about it. That's it. Sneak away first as a courtesy
Come on, come on, come on
Come on Come on
It looks pretty good, but I guess the data is bad! The author ran away.