The Wandering Emperor: Sign-In from the Start for a Loader

After being besieged by officers and soldiers in the mountains, Liang Jue finds a giant panda and cooks it. The protagonist prevents his men from eating the meat, and angrily says that this is a national treasure and that it is a beast that sits in prison and cannot be eaten. Then he takes out a can of milk powder and feeds it to the panda. If you are concerned about river crabs, then don't write about pandas. The supplies that the protagonist system signed in these past few days were the first forklift on the first day, instant noodles on the second day, toilet paper or condoms in the next few days, and oh, there was also a can of milk powder. He was still in the mood to feed pandas after being surrounded for many days. It made me laugh to death. There is also a system of ninth-grade warriors in this world, a fantasy world.

A modern person doesn't know the dangers of aristocratic families. The landowner who did all the bad things killed so many of his own people and actually let them go. This is such a saucy move.

The author wants to write a novel, but doesn't want to write it well. It's just like a child playing house. It's not that the system doesn't provide the support, it's that the author doesn't want to provide it. Those who hide in Tibet are worse than bandits, and bandits still have a nest.

It needs to be improved, and there is a problem with the underlying logic. Unless Hu Landlord is killed, he cannot control the direction of public discussion in a town. Everything the protagonist has done before has been in vain, and it will be very harmful if he does not change for the better.

The writing so far is really good, a systematic ordinary person. If you don't see anyone, you'll kill anyone and if you see a woman, you'll go to her. Many novel writers create characters that are extremely stiff. This is very smooth.

It's okay, but what he says needs to be improved. For example, the protagonist sometimes speaks too official and orthodox, but the target audience is just ordinary people. Sometimes they don't even understand. And ordinary people can also use official words, which is a bit nonsense.

Water, you are like water. You have a gun, and the enemy is an ancient man who is ready to kill you. You spend a chapter thinking about the decision to fight with the gun, and then use a chapter to describe the process of killing the enemy with this bullet.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. Demining completed, alternate history + time travel + system + farming for hegemony + half-white cool article. Expect to grow. Xiao Langjun has something to say: "Looks like an ordinary person, but in fact he is a fun-loving person. Are you going to show me this in the third golden chapter?"

How to say it? Reward 50 taels of silver, how dare you write this

In some places, there is no basic logic.