Transmigrating Across the Heavens: My Cheat Is Myself

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older brother has a weak body and needs more exercise. The younger brother is urging the elder brother like this. For example, it is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the older brother's body, which also makes the younger brother feel distressed. But whether the older brother is injured or not has anything to do with the younger brother? ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

Such a familiar plot, now wearing the same clothes is like looking in the mirror

The martial arts chapter was really a failure.

Overall, it's pretty good, but it's a bit troublesome to always divide the worlds. In fact, the best way is to only write about one world, and just summarize the other worlds casually, and then share skills and abilities from time to time. It looks very awkward like this. One world, one world, another world, etc. For example, the Naruto world is the main body, or the Pirate world is the main body, and the others are all clones. If the main body wants to go to other worlds, the individuals in other worlds will disappear. It is best to have one understanding, just like the shadow clones. Unfortunately, I just read it, and the author has almost finished writing it, so there is no way to change it.

Every world written about is defective. If it is written half-heartedly, I will change it to another person. It feels uncomfortable to watch, so I say goodbye.

I can't stand any scrutiny at all.

Forget it, I still don't like this kind of writing. It always feels disorganized, with hammers here and there, and writing about other worlds before finishing one world. There are too many worlds and they are too fragmented. It is better to read a quick-travel novel. At least it has a beginning and an end, even if it is read as a small unit.

Sometimes it looks really frustrating.

Can you finish it one by one? It's a different world in just a few chapters. It makes my brain smoke.

The author's writing is good, but if you write a little bit about each world and then jump to the next world, it will be very bad for the readers. It is recommended to write a small ending for each world first, and then use the space to jump to introduce the protagonist of the next world. This will be better. @Preserved egg lean meat porridge 9527 😄😄