Nagato Uzumaki of Konoha

To be honest, I really don't like splitting up the original characters. I suggest that you try to write as close to the original work as possible. It's easy to write the plot yourself and don't affect the main line. Based on my experience of reading more than ten Naruto fanfics, those who write their own plots without the main line will, without exception, become unsatisfied after halfway through. The best way to write a fanfic is to be the main character without affecting the main character of the original work. Also, splitting up the original characters is really not good. It's easy to get bored. Originally, I came to read the fanfic to make up for the regrets in the original work, but the author himself was creating all kinds of regrets. To be honest, I was speechless. I hope the author can take a good look at it. The overall setting of this book is good, so I hope it won't be a disaster. If possible, it would be better to change the heroine.

If you have any suggestions, you can put them forward and I will make changes. I hope you can comment more. I will try my best to reply to every comment. I have read and replied to all comments today. I'm taking a day off. I have some things to do today and I haven't written anything at all.

Yes, the plot is reasonable, but the timeline is a bit crooked, but it's not a big problem. There are too many modifiers, which is a bit wordy. It feels like I'm trying to make up the word count, just like when I write an essay 🤦 [OK] But overall it's quite high quality. The author must keep writing well 👍

I think it's pretty good. Come on, author. (Quick question: Is Kushina the heroine?)

To be honest, I personally don't like splitting up the original partner. I split up the original partner. How did the protagonist Naruto and Boruto appear? There is no need to write the subsequent story. If you really want a heroine, you can use Konan as the heroine. Anyway, Yahiko will die sooner or later. Also, Nagato appears in Konoha Madara's Eye of the Moon plan. How to realize Black Zetsu's plan and how to save his mother.

The plot is okay, but I don't know why it always seems a little weird. I always feel that the way the article is written is weird. The article seems to be a little lacking. It feels like reading a novel, as if it has been narrating all the time. I really can't get used to it.

Does the author plan to write a Boruto biography? 🧐

I hope the plot is richer and there are fewer modifiers. When I read more than 80 chapters, I almost vomited because they were all modifiers. I hope the author can continue to write more. (Support the author)

I feel like I am writing a Chinese composition

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