My Wife, Nie Moqi

The writing is good, but the pace of the copy is a bit fast. People who have never played the game will be a little confused after reading it, and they can't remember so many people's names. It would be better to polish and shape the image of each person so that people can remember it, otherwise people who have never played the game will really not know who it is. The plot can also be written more delicately. The plot of the paper wedding dress is still very good, come on. I hope the author will not finish it hastily due to external factors. As long as the author keeps writing, I will keep reading. I hope it can be completed. I give you my best cheers to the author.

It's very interesting and in line with my taste. I went to play "Paper Wedding Dress" because of this book [laughing], and now I have successfully been captured by "Paper Wedding Dress" [face covering]

Come on, come on! Paper Wedding Dress 7 has come out. 1: Ning Zifu, Nie Moqi, Nie Moli 2: Liang Shaoping, Zhu Xiaohong 3: Shen Moqing, Wang Jiaotong 4: Zhang Chenrui, Cui Wanying 5: Xun Yuanfeng, Tao Mengyan, Zhong Ziping 6: Xiao Chi, Xi Yueyao 7: Liu (Li) Fengze, Du Yan, she rather convinced: "Because of my deep love and righteousness, I will lead you back to the world." Liang Shaoping: "I will work hard to protect your safety in both your lifetimes." Shen Moqing: "I will exchange my three souls and six souls for your soul to return to life." Zhang Chenrui: "As long as I leave without saying goodbye, I will keep you safe and sound." Xun Yuanfeng: "I will sacrifice my life to protect you and keep you safe and sound." Xiao Chi: "I am the one who makes my own decision, and I don't care about you for the rest of your life." Li Fengze: "You will sacrifice your life in exchange for my integrity."

That's great, come on, come on, come on, come on Can time go faster? How hard you worked before Come on come on come on come on

Very good, thank you to the author

I'm still waiting to watch, the subject matter is relatively niche. I have played the first two parts of Paper Wedding Dress, but I haven't played it because it was too difficult. The writing of this book is okay, but there are a lot of typos. However, many of the typos I read have been corrected. There are still some problems with sentence segmentation, but in other aspects it is okay. Make another comment

Come on, I like the heroine who wears paper wedding dresses the most.

Not bad, pretty good, but I always felt that the protagonist's emotional line was too drawn out. But there are also advantages, and the writing is also very detailed.

The main character can be given some more cheats. I still feel like I don't know what I'm doing when playing a horror game.

Author, please strengthen the male protagonist. @Rabbit author, please revise and revise the previous content. Many of the previous sentences are not fluent, plus typos and missing words. I hope the author will make corrections in the future. I still like reading this book. [Sending my heart] By the way, I can strengthen the male protagonist. I beg the author [Sending my heart]