Hungry******

The writing is good and the content is very novel. Come on [like]. I am very optimistic about this novel. I hope it will not die halfway [crying] (after all, I have already seen a "Hungry Death" fan novel with more than 100,000 words forced to be removed from the shelves, so I don't hope that this novel will collapse in the middle of the author's writing process [facepalm])

First of all, this rating is to encourage the author. I believe he has the ability to write a good story. In terms of the plot, there are some inconsistencies, or in other words, some unreasonable parts. It may be that it is too influenced by the original work. In terms of characters, the creation is not very good. In many cases, the content of the original work helps us position the characters. But the additional description of the three little ones is remarkable. The plot is a bit too bland, the psychological description of the characters is not enough, and it lacks the kind of eye-catching feeling, especially for those of us who have played the original game. At the same time, I feel that the graphics of the main plot (Episode of Sui is better) are lacking, and we need to make up for it based on the original work. This requires the author to create more scenes in the main line that are not in the original work, and then express the sense of the scene.

It looks good, but I just feel like the good guy here is too cute.

If something seems right and wrong, it is good writing. Come alive and continue the previous chapter. (Text) How can we break off the love before it is over? Read it and feel it in your heart. (Feeling) Fertile fields should be full of ears, and there should be no deaths from hunger in the world. This is her/their expectation, and it is also ours. Dear author, you don't want someone to send you a blade in the middle of the night. [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

Very good Wan Sui Ye, makes my good man spin

[Like] It's great, the if line that I haven't seen before is quite fresh. Why did Liang turn into a beggar and rely on Yuan Yuan? Liang's character exploded a bit in the chapters after Chapter 45. I hope the author can change it [love]

It's very interesting. If it weren't for this book, I would have been transformed into a Maitreya Buddha. The character design is similar to the original, and there aren't many swords that can be used

Please, please give me a good ending.

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more I feel like this book is one of the better ones among the Hungry Death fans I've read, but I just don't know why no one has read it (sad)

I came here to read it after finishing Hungry Death, and I saw the latest chapter. The plot changes are very good, and I feel like I have no place to call home, but I feel that I am home everywhere.

It looks good. Playing games for me, who is autistic, is just a good way to heal my wounds.

So cool, it makes my brain spin

My favorite fanfic about Starving to Death is the second creation between Ryo and Manho without the hatred of killing their father. Unfortunately, most of the fanfics have a continuation of the ending of the same life.

Is there any pre-plot? I didn't understand the first two chapters.

Good-looking, good-looking, just good-looking