Pet-Raising System: Earn Money and Raise Pets at the Same Time!

As a reader who reads novels all the year round and has read cool articles for several years, I would like to say the following, which may not be pleasant to the ears. First of all, it is true as the author said, he just started thinking when he got hot, and did not think about the direction of the plot, that is, there was no outline. The written plot was fragmented, and the characters and events gradually disappeared. Then there is the description of the variety show. My suggestion is to take a look at the live variety show and the editing effect, or learn from other articles. The description is relatively confusing. The last thing is the writing style. Maybe the author is suitable for writing? I feel like I can try to choose the kind of essay I would like to submit. The novel is not without a lot of rhetoric, but except for part of the dialogue and other plots, it really feels like writing an essay (when I was a kid, I read anthologies every day when I didn't have storybooks). This style is honestly more surprising than seeing childish writing in junior high school. I hope the author can work hard and realize his biggest dream!!! October 26, 2024 13:54

The pace is a bit fast, but the main idea conveyed by the article is good. If you like it, please support it~

Nice! It's rare to see a novel with this theme! 👍🏻