Arknights: Soviet Commissar on Terra

Starting from July 2024, there will be 1~2 book reviews every month, but there are none this month, so I will make up for it myself. Along the way, there have been revisions and revisions, and the direction of this story has long been different from what was envisioned in the original outline. But fortunately, I didn't mess with the settings, and the political commissar is still the same political commissar, at least for now. Regarding updates, I can't figure out how I ended up with weekly updates, but I can really only write one or two hundred words a day... Overall, as my first attempt, I'm really happy that readers loved it, even though it wasn't a great piece of work. So be it, the road is still long and the story is far from over.

So far, the text quality seems to be okay, and I hope the author won't let the book end unfinished or stop updating.

It's very well written. I've seen too many of those that were completely crushed. I've seen too few of those that rely on hard work little by little.

So far, there are no signs of a breakdown in combat power. The writing is quite good, and the rhythm of the narrative is okay. It would be best if the ending is not unfinished. The character portrayal is also good.

People who read it with strict logic are very impressed. The doctor is finally great, but the emotional line is more confusing, because I mainly read the main line. I hope the author can add more.

Very cool! Very realistic writing. He is not as powerful as the protagonists in other fan fictions, but he has a special sense of resilience for mortals.

So in this book, are the political commissar and Yixu actually together? And the author, I will reward you with 10 yuan! Little care is not disrespectful! ! Thank you author for your reply! You are the first author to reply to me! ! And the author, please use your pen and ink! Otherwise, I won't give you small change! ! ! ! ! ! And author, I will read your book in the future! ! ! ! Not happy? (^ω^) Chapter 91 makes me feel so uncomfortable! Woohoo! Author, you are so bad!

Written from multiple perspectives and multiple timelines, anyway, I feel very strong

It's a very interesting book, but why are there so few people reading it?

Great, no need to say more

What a shame, come on, author

Okay, it's well written. I don't know why so few people rated it.

Good, good, good