God sends songs of lamentation, and swords cry in reply. Gentlemen, look at the young man in coarse cloth and white clothes who walks out from the flying flowers in the sky. He carries a pot of sake, sings to the horizon, and waves his sword towards the distant mountains.
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So far it's okay. The lyrical preparation in the front is delicate. The first one or two chapters, the inheritance scenes and the description of the battle scenes are very enjoyable. Moreover, the descriptions of the characters mentioned so far are very full and lifelike, and the ability settings are also quite thoughtful. I hope you can read it carefully. Of course, all readers will participate in the decision-making of the subsequent plot and the appearance of the characters. , Please put forward any deficiencies in time, and be sure to change it in time [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute], I will work hard.
So far it's okay. The lyrical preparation in the front is delicate. The first one or two chapters, the inheritance scenes and the description of the battle scenes are very enjoyable. Moreover, the descriptions of the characters mentioned so far are very full and lifelike, and the ability settings are also quite thoughtful. I hope you can read it carefully. Of course, all readers will participate in the decision-making of the subsequent plot and the appearance of the characters. , Please put forward any deficiencies in time, and be sure to change it in time [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute], I will work hard.