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It's really good
It would be better if there is a foreshadowing in the previous chapter. How to deal with the peripheral languages when Shu Han comes to the country. In the previous chapter, it is said that different languages can be communicated with thoughts. It would be better to create more timelines. The second chapter tells how Chao found Pang Tong's Huiyilu to lay a foreshadowing for the future. Shu The Han Dynasty divided into two groups to attack India and the other to attack the Middle East. Two world lines. Add more female characters who can promote the plot. For the same plot, you can search for samurai ninjas on the Internet in every cultural circle. It is somewhat different from China's war theory. I hope it can be written vividly.
Very good, keep writing