Star Dome Railway, Ship Girl but Stars

How to say it? Does this really have a stellar element? It's that kind of space opera, with a long time span, grand narrative, the development of civilization from the main perspective, hostility between civilizations with different ideas, humiliation, war, technological progress, ascension talent, some ideal city, Project Colossus, Guardians of the Galaxy, Starry Sea and Heavenly Punishment, Creation of the Universe, Mega Project, etc. I didn't see it. I only saw the scientific research space station. It was a star barrier plus a scientific research station at best, with a combat power of less than 10k. The focus was on those few people. Just like the story of the ice planet at the beginning, in the words of the stars, the origin is post-apocalyptic and the crisis planet starts, and it is a pre-space age native. Normally speaking, it should be landed and accepted as a vassal, and then the environment will be transformed into a livable planet, and humans will be given citizenship or residency rights.

After watching it for a long time, I wanted to ask who the protagonist is?

It's okay, but the update is a bit slow. The main character is not behind the scenes. It's okay to create your own. It's best not to fall into the common problem of most authors, which is to follow the plot. It's too cliche. If you read it for a long time, you will have to leave a group. The only thing we can see in the novel and pictures is fresh and resonate with the characters in your works. It will be stupid to read for a long time. You have relatively few materials and it is not easy to repeat. Again, you have to think about where the protagonist will come from. Otherwise, if you just write a ship girl and go it alone, without finding a big event to introduce the protagonist or force, it will feel very abrupt. You have already written about the character Beng Tie who does not understand the protagonist's force. You have to think of a way to introduce the protagonist's force from Xianzhou. It is too late. People have already run away and no one will watch. This is my idea.

After reading Chapter 23, I was very confused about the protagonist? Except for the beginning, you can't see it later, and there are very few star elements (I want to see the space cleaner).

The identity of the protagonist is not as good as the chief flagship. He can go to the front of the scene and retire as a slut. The ship girl is civilized and does not need to manage the nature of the ship girl. She can obey it independently. The protagonist is the general flagship. I personally think it is better than the commander. It's weird that all the remaining men in the entire civilization are women.

I have ignored the original protagonist and automatically regarded Tianhe as the protagonist.

When will you reach the later stage and call me from the tomb? The character design is completely ruined, so who is the protagonist? Is this still Blue Commander? He looks like an NPC.

The stars are just a little bit, and the ship girl doesn't show much.

Not bad, not bad. If it becomes popular, I will be the veteran.

It's quite interesting, but I'm more curious about who the protagonist is?

It's very good. The subject matter is also very imaginative. Even I didn't expect it. Moreover, this book has just started and 3,000 people have read it and it has a promising future. Come on, author, and try to update it.

Come on, come on, come on!

Update quickly and clarify the main plot outline. It's 22 photos and I haven't seen the protagonist yet. I still don't know the gender of the protagonist, male or female.

It's okay. Just correct the typo. Oh, don't change it

Big cheers for the author!

This novel is very good. It has both Stars and Falling Iron, Azur Lane Ship Girl, etc.

Shouldn't this be completely behind the scenes [Thinking]

When writing about Kanji, at least it should be written around Kanji.

If the stars are not flying, the combat power is still too weak. In addition, Bengtie has subspace crystal walls and no super-light channels, so the speed is greatly reduced. There is no abnormal MOD in Bengtie. It really can't walk sideways in Bengtie. Just those fairy boats, each is equivalent to a star system spaceship, and they are compressed using space collapse technology. Do you think it is appropriate not to use a luminous man? [Sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

If it becomes popular, I will be the great elder!

Playing games and reading novels! Cool

Very nice, support it

Gives me the feeling of reading a history book

Well, it looks okay but a little lacking.

It's rare to see a book about a ship girl's battle in the sea of ​​stars! ! !

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good, but the updates are too slow [Like]

One of the few Azur Lane fanfics Let the commander appear more and have some daily life.

It's so boring behind the scenes [laughs awkwardly]

Okay, it's very beautifully written.

It's not enough. It's not enough. It's not enough.