Being Spotted by the School Beauty and the Yandere Chaebol! She Loves Me to Death

To be honest, there is probably nothing wrong with this setting, but some details would be better to change. Also, why is this girl like this when she sees the male protagonist? It would be smoother to write that the male protagonist is very handsome, and the male protagonist is tied up, so the reaction of someone named Ji is not that they belong to a big family, so there should be some drama, and the male protagonist is the most slutty one I have ever read in a yandere novel. Like Playboy, a drama with a female supporting role is pretty good, but a taxi driver, oh, he has to stay at a taxi station even if he doesn't drive for him, or he knows he has a girlfriend. It would be better to change the plot. This is the first time there are so many comments, mainly because the background is okay. I also like the writing aspect, and I don't really want to delete this book from my bookshelf. Give it four stars to support it.

Not pretty at all.

Why is it so awkward for the male protagonist to call the female protagonist "baby"? Moreover, the setting of forced love ten mad batches already has the female protagonist being strong and the male being weak. Isn't it embarrassing to still call the female protagonist "baby"?

Please support me

It's also open to both men and women [vomit]

It's okay, but there are too many typos.

Then write, must

Xiangnu Zunwen, the plot development of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is blunt

The names of the characters can be mixed up. Every time I read it, I don't know the name in the front and the name in the back. Two people who are not in the same place can chat with each other. The author is so talented.

Female channel novels, it depends on your preference.

Generally speaking, it's good, but it's a bit weird.