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It looks good, but the number of words is too few. Please try to update it! [Like] I would like to make a suggestion. I feel that the protagonist's way of time-traveling is easy to be blocked. I hope the author can handle it better in the later stage. Also, the font style of the cover can be modified. Pinduoduo can make a cover with only three to five yuan. Come on author, most of those comments are trolls, don't be affected [Like][Like][Like]

Say, use this word as little as possible, it sounds like a primary school student's composition. , Xiaohong said: Have you eaten? Xiao Ming said: No Xiaohong said again: Come to my place and have some. Xiao Ming said: OK I said it would be better to change it to Tao, but if you don't change it, your experience of this book will get worse and worse. Go on and said, said displeasedly Looks like a policeman at the window said with raised eyebrows whisper say with a smile added He hesitated and said again Say with a happy face Said with extreme displeasure Lying on the sofa and saying … If you use 8 out of 10 cards once, nothing will happen to us. If you use 10 out of 10 cards 8 times, who the hell can stand it?

Some people say that the writing is poisonous. There are indeed a few points in the front, but the author handles it very well in the back. The overall content is very reasonable and interesting. As I read it slowly, I haven't read this kind of subject for a long time. I feel it is good. I support the author with five stars.

Please give me more updates. As long as you give them more updates, they can do anything you want them to do [Sending Hearts]

It's very good. Although there are some erotic plots, there are not many. Most of the plots are very imaginative and there are no brainless slap-in-the-face plots. The male characters such as Officer Dave who appear are also very charming, have personality, and I like it very much.

There are small flaws, but it's already very good

Well, some people feel that the first world was very toxic. But novices may be like this, focusing only on burying pits. The sensitivity to poisonous spots is not very great. But what I wrote later is okay. Uh, just carry it through. And the subject matter is quite attractive.

This, I'm afraid your score is too low and you have no motivation to write... The first punk world is still very good... It's just that the protagonist is a bit passive, the setting is too ordinary, and many details are not good... Come on, next time I write about the world, I suggest setting the logic better.

The logic is clear and reasonable, and the subject matter is good, but it is too short and not enough to read.

To be honest, compared to this book, I still prefer reading your "Five Parts of the Glue Wife"

Very good, at least in my opinion, I like this setting very much, interesting. If I understand correctly, Wings of Life now uses Xiao hope's original body, while Xiao hope uses the body of her new partner, right?

Yes, after watching it for so long, there is nothing poisonous about it.

It's much better than the traditional one where you just go in and compare the various outfits. I hope it will be updated soon.

I chased Cyberpunk first, and then came back to chase this one. Cyberpunk is written more smoothly and compactly. I also like this book. The only thing I don't like is that Xiao hope did not discuss it with the protagonist in advance before making a wish, so that readers can be vaccinated. Intellectually speaking, that wish is reasonable, but if it suddenly appears out of nowhere, it will still make you very unfavorable. Looking forward to the author's new work. Come on💪!

It's okay, I'll give it a five-star rating and recommend it ((*^∀^))👍🏻. It's a time-travel story. I've only traveled through one world now. I hope to be able to travel through various animation and TV series worlds in the future and become the king. The most basic thing is to travel through ancient times and rebel against the master. It can take a while to write it.

I don't know why this book has such a low rating.

I like it very much, a very creative novel. But for this kind of novel, it is recommended that there be fewer female companions. After all, if there are too many, you will often have to go to the comment area to ask who it is. No poisonous spots have been seen yet. Come on, author, the future is promising [laughter]

Dear masters, can you recommend a book? Going to different worlds is similar to this. The protagonist should not be too cowardly, similar to a cool novel. The kind that starts with a million words. Other software can also be used, but it must be able to listen to books. [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

There is no use in saying good things. See for yourself if interested. 7 Points is too low. Bottoming is also worth 9 points. I'll give it five stars first. Please be diligent and update the author.

Personally, I like it very much, and turning off comments is a good habit [Chigua]

It's pretty good and it's free, so don't ask too much.

I like this setting. I like this way of travel better than the crappy street system.

To be honest, this book is quite good. The plot, character descriptions, and plot are attractive. I hope to update more and stick with it.

The subject matter is novel, I hope it won't be cut in half

It's okay. The plot of Night City in the later stages is like a game, but I still like to see the perspective of the protagonist.

Personally I think it's good and worth watching.

I thought it was another fast-food novel when I read the title. Unexpectedly, I was attracted after reading a few chapters. The author has profound knowledge and smooth writing. It is a rare masterpiece. It's a pity that I was delayed by the title of the book.

Not bad. Unlike other books of the same type that only use templates, there are some eye-catching plots.

Although there are flaws, the subject matter is relatively broad, and I hope the writing will become more exciting👍

It's really fun to watch, it's good-looking, I'm a native dog and I like it