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The plot is quite interesting, the characters have distinct characteristics, but the description feels light and airy, like a layer of fog. I feel like it's more appropriate to use the first person perspective for this perspective, unlike God's perspective. But there are too many words in each paragraph, which makes my eyes tired [face covering]

It's really beautiful, the emotions are very delicate and real, the feelings of Fa Xiao and his family towards Lu Lu are really gentle and tender, which makes people very happy, and the foreshadowing is also well written, which makes people curious. I am really curious about the world view and the story line. What secrets are there? Please tell me. Really, please come back and update soon. I can't help but fill in the holes [crying] [crying]

It is rare to see such a "quality" novel. I feel that the protagonist is still a little separated from the world. Mu has been with him for so long and has not completely eliminated it. I don't know how to eliminate it in the future. Come on ^_^

The protagonist seems to be isolated from the world, and there is a feeling of being shrouded in fog. There are also a lot of foreshadowings and expectations.

Is this going to be a trap? I'm a little scared I came back to see it after a few months, and it seems that I have entered a small dark room, and now I am alive.

The writing is delicate, but it always feels like there is a layer of fog when reading it. The segmentation is not good, and the characters are rich in personality. I quite like this style. Those who like a slow pace can try ω