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Well written, wonderfully written. Such a long emotional tug is like constantly stroking the petals but refusing to collect the nectar. There is a kind of pleasure of wanting to be masterful but never being able to master it! Cool! Send me your home address and send me some souvenirs.

The general framework and characters of the early stage plot are a bit like I Love Amy, and the sense of déjà vu is a bit too strong. One star deducted. It would be better if there is different content at the end. The author's writing style is still good, and the delicacy of youth is well grasped. However, the realistic details are dealt with in the same way as I Love Amy, which avoids talking about it. However, I Love Amy is more fairy tale style, so the overall look and feel is okay. This novel is a bit more realistic and anti-realistic at times. For example, the description of Ning Zhizhi's reaction and founding a school does not seem so coordinated, but the writing is really good.

For the first time, I had the feeling of falling in love with a character in a novel, falling in love with Ning Zhizhi. For the first time, I felt like my heart was being tickled by a character in a novel, it was itching, and it even brought me a little pleasure. This is something I haven't seen in other novels. It's very well written. I like it very much.

Wuhu, it's just the time to confess, it's the best time to get into the trap [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I really don't understand why a group of people are shouting for be. To be honest, Cheng said it was just Xu's talk, and it basically never happened. There is no emotional line with Xu, and they are not She is a yellow-haired person. She just said that it made Bai sad and inferior. Except for the last party where she wanted Cheng to be her dance partner, she didn't really abandon Bai. It's just that Bai was inferior and didn't dare to go. Xu was just a little stupid, as if she didn't know that Bai liked her, so in the end she was a bit sadistic, and she didn't shout that she wanted to be.

Give the author a five-star review! Although it is a short article, it is small and well-organized. There is nothing bloody or top-notch in this article. It is a story about recognizing and confirming feelings, and there is no procrastination. When the point of recognition is reached, the author does not hesitate to open the floodgates, which is good; the emotional description is meticulous, and the characters' twitching psychology is expressed through some actions, giving a comfortable reading experience. It is several grades higher than those wholesale-like white-sheets that only have high scores. In addition, this is also the first time I have read such a novel with childlike dialogue. I found it really interesting. Even though it has some shortcomings, the flaws cannot be concealed. It is a good article worth reading. This book will be upgraded to ing, and there will be no problem if it scores 9 or above (the quality of the articles above 9 is also uneven, and there are also many novice articles). You can rest assured that he and sugar are guaranteed. Supplement: This book is indeed rated 9 points [thoughts]

It is one of the few short stories with two heroines in the domestic online literature that has the feeling of falling in love. The interaction between the girls can feel that they are really talking rather than just a few buffs to follow the plot. Except for Niqing, it is rare to see domestic pure yuri novels.

Lily is so beautiful. There are about three couples in this book, Bai Mo x Ning Zhizhi, Bai Mu x Ning Qingyan, two college roommates. From high school to college, there is a two-way redemption, from the awkwardness in the early stage to the two sides facing their emotions in the later stage. The final HD is not in vain for me to follow it for several months. The author's pitfalls have been filled in as much as possible, including the truth about the Ning family tragedy and the reasons for its madness. But I could tell at a glance that Bai Mu had something to hide. Even though there are some imperfections, this is still a very good book. [Sinister smile]

In my more than a year of reading lily novels, this book can be ranked in the top ten on my bookshelf. The writing is good, the plot is compact, and the characters are well drawn. I stayed up all night to read it. I really recommend it!

It's a nice, very nice, sweet book, but I personally feel it's a bit like the comic I read before, the I love Amy. But it's really great to watch. I followed it every day until about three o'clock in the morning until it was finished. I really like this character setting. It's very interesting and the plot is also very sweet. I watched it a long time ago. I was sorting out my bookshelf and suddenly saw it. So I came back and gave it a five-star rating.

Although, I think I've seen this setting before, and the plot is exactly the same, but I forgot who the author is [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] The one I read is a comic and this one is a novel, and I can't help but pretend to be a comic character (it seems to be from an external network, and what I read was uploaded by someone else) [Chigua]

Maybe not many people have read the first book. I feel that some places in the book are a little rushed but it is just right. The content of the text is also explained. If you don't read it carefully and ignore it, you may feel that you don't understand it. The book is very good. I hope the author will work hard.

The writing style is really good, delicate and dreamy, and the clever metaphors are like a love letter collected by a girl. The abnormal girl brings a novel perspective, like the footnotes of a fairy tale, but it reflects the two defective souls who mend each other. At first I was attracted by the writing and setting, but as I read, I became fascinated by the author's thoughts. The astringent feeling of youth is vividly expressed, and the old fairy tale unfolds in a different way. One of the few good works in Tomato

A good story, not dramatic, just as plain as the stones on the ground and fallen leaves everywhere, ordinary but unique. Each character has its own characteristics and a unique soul. Thank you for allowing me to meet Bai Mo, Ning Zhizhi and them, so that I am qualified to listen to their stories, and this story will be sung by more people. Goodbye, my journey will not end here. I will write down every story on the journey with my heart. Finally, the flowers are finished.

It's good to watch, but not enough. After a while, I ended up finishing it. Although, the author should probably not write a side story for Wu Yao. I feel that the end of the only male character with the most three-dimensional image in the book seems very abrupt (if not) I just wrote it myself [smile] Anyway, it's not the first time I've done this [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]) It feels like it's not finished, but it's pretty good, at least it's not too abrupt.

The subject matter is very good, the plot is very smooth, I like this book very much [please update][top post][top post][top post]

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. The character creation is really great, especially Ning Zhizhi's paranoia and calmness, the madness under the surface, Bai Mo's restraint, and the inferiority and self-esteem of being a disabled person. All of them make this story more flesh-and-blood [Love] [Love] [Love]

The writing is great, the plot is also very good, very reasonable, and the characters are well drawn. But when will Bai Mo be given a detailed description of her appearance? Highly recommended, but the number of words is a bit short. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's rare to see such great Lily articles.

I particularly like the writing style of this book. It's so well written [Love] The first one has been a little bit rough, but the second part is all sweet [blowing kisses] Overall, this book is definitely a good read. You won't lose money if you invest in it😎 I just hope that the author can write more extras [sending my heart] I'm looking forward to the author's next book. Come on [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Looks good, I like it, it's very sweet, I like it so much, especially the one who is unscrupulous but cares too much about her, my dear, I like it, I love it very much! And Mo's character is also okay, warm, soft, and good. They were so excited and liked it so much. There are also Qiqi and Ayun. I also like this pair and like them very much~ Their progress is much faster, maybe because of their good physical fitness~ Hehe. A very good book, I love it~

The plot is great, very compact, and the author's writing style is also good. It's also my favorite type. I see that there are basically no surprises so far. It's just that the title "honey" reminds me of a female classmate of mine who often calls me "eating melon". If I can keep writing like this to ensure that the plot and characters do not collapse, I feel that by the time the book is finished, it will probably have a score of 8.5 Or above.

The writing is very good, and the extra chapter is the finishing touch, but the character creation is a bit too paranoid. Of course, in terms of novels, the fantasy world is not that strange no matter how outrageous it is, but love requires both parties to work together to maintain it. In daily interactions, they need to understand each other, understand each other, tolerate each other, encourage each other, improve each other, get used to each other's existence, live in harmony, and meet each other to be together.

The book is very good, both the description and the characterization are very good, but when I read it, I always recall some things I don't want to recall..(╥╯^╰╥)

Ahhhhhh! ! Good looking! A state banquet. This is simply a state banquet! In my lifetime, I can see such a beautiful article on Tomato! !

All I can say is excellent, so fucking excellent. I haven't read this kind of book for a long time. It's really good. When this book first came out, I was waiting for it to be finished. I started reading it after I saw it finished yesterday. It was as expected. It's so good and so appetizing. Oh, this is simply great. It would be better if there were more extras [shy]

Not bad, highlights the character of the protagonist. I read another one today, and it's a world of difference. I understand how different other people's articles are from the author. Other people's articles are messy and fail to highlight human character, but yours, the author, can!

Judging from the writing style alone, this book can be regarded as a full score. The youthfulness and ignorance of the girl are vividly depicted (the two protagonists are super cute), but when it comes to madness, it is really crazy but very cute in front of Bai. I hope the author can write it into a sweet article.

The chase is over! It's still very sweet, whether it's before or after the awakening, some plots seem to have hidden knives, but in fact they are not. Lovers of sweet novels are ecstatic! Two-way redemption, smooth sailing, my sister and mother are also going well, and everyone has a happy ending [Sending Hearts]

It's really good, it's really good, the middle-aged love between Bai Mama and Sister Ning, the redemption literature between Zhi Zhi and Mo Mo, and the happy enemies of Xiao Mangzhu and A Yun are all quite complete. This is my favorite HE. The only thing that's a bit regretful is that the policeman, whose passion finally gave way to human sophistication. It's really beautiful, highly recommended!

Guys, I really recommend this book! The psychological descriptions and narrations of the characters are really good. It is very rare to find such a good book with detailed descriptions, especially the tangle of Bai Mo's low self-esteem and fear of facing her own feelings due to family reasons, and her confusion about liking and love. The writing is really good and detailed. Highly recommend +1

The writing is beautiful (I really love this writing), the plot is smooth (nothing is abrupt), there is a bit of abuse at the beginning, but the knife comes first and then the sugar. There is no bloody plot. If you like it, you can jump right in. It's really enjoyable (except it's a bit unreadable). I'm looking forward to the next book. And the author, where is my favorite meat dish (teaching and training session) [angry] How come no one reads such a good book?