Junior Sister Said There Are Hundreds of Millions of Ways to Ruin the Plot

It's good, it's very refreshing. It's not the kind where a group pet is having an affair with a senior brother. The heroine grew up in the sect since she was a child. She has a good relationship with the senior brother. They can cheat each other, but they also have a deep friendship. She will consider her own people and will not take it for granted and not reciprocate the kindness of her own people. There are few other heroines who have not shown a flexible mind and have many novel ideas.

This book is really good. Although the heroine Jiang Yuan is a heroine, she is not as awesome as other heroines in other novels. She can learn everything and is proficient in everything. But she also has things that she is good at, and she is not like others who just fail at things that they are good at. She will also have failures and work very hard. Refining alchemy and drawing talismans will also take many, many times before success. The senior brothers and sisters and the sect are all quite normal. When foreign enemies attack, everyone on the mainland is united. Now let's talk about the shortcomings I feel. I was attracted by the introduction. I think the author can make the stories of the brothers and sisters into branches, and then make the main plot of the attack of foreign enemies. Branches can be written slower and more detailed. Because there are a lot of holes that have not been filled in, I saw that the sixth senior brother smelled a familiar fragrance and the little junior sister felt that something was very familiar, but there was no explanation later. Some of the brothers' stories were written too quickly and were a bit sloppy. I dislike the character of the second senior brother the least, because he really did something wrong, and he really captured a living person for his Bai Yueguang. And his punishment was too light, just being in solitary confinement and turning into a girl. This way he won't have a long memory, and later on he will feel like he already likes to be a girl. All in all I think it's pretty good. The story line is also complete, but the author finished it too quickly, with too few chapters, which resulted in a lot of things being shortened. Many stories were not explained clearly and detailed. I hope to see a better and longer work from the author next time. Come on, come on! ! !

I think it's okay. It's a non-CP novel. The protagonist is not a brainless gangster, nor is he invincible. He is very cautious, and he is not trying to have ambiguities with his senior brothers under the guise of a non-CP novel. Overall, it's good. At least there's nothing wrong with his logical thinking. He's not a brainless braggadocio. It feels okay.

It's really very good-looking. The heroine really knows a little bit about everything except serious spiritual practice. She has an affair with her senior brother. She has a tacit understanding with the senior brother to trick his fiancée into breaking the engagement, turns the love-minded second senior brother into a woman, and deceives the younger junior brother into lameness.

It's beautiful~ It's a different kind of fairy-cultivation text. The formations and talismans in it are very interesting. I like it!

But where is the third senior brother who was reborn and still lost his mind as promised? All other points have been written down, except for the third senior brother. And why does the third senior brother have two names?

It looks good, I don't know why, no one likes to see it

Good health, good health, good health

I think it's really good. Why are there so few ratings? ? ? ?

There's nothing special to complain about. Overall it's pretty good. The four stars are because the ending felt like it could have ended more perfectly and it shouldn't have ended so quickly.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Sixth Senior Brother's ignorant behavior in the secret realm is annoying.

It's interesting, but why is there no one there? Not a single comment along the way! Did I make a bug? It's quite interesting.

Nice looking, I like it very much.

Surprisingly good article [laughing]

Nice looking, very interesting

Looks good, but I still have more to say

Okay, pretty good-looking

Just one less planting space

The book is very good, why is there no rating?

It was okay, but the ending was very rushed.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Interesting, good-looking, and very good from beginning to end. Can the author write some extra chapters about senior brothers and sisters?

Give me four points of encouragement. You must have just started writing a book. Come on! !

Highly recommended, dear friends, the different talisman formations are so interesting. I haven't finished watching it yet. Why did you end it? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Not bad. As an old bookworm, I can read it.

It's very interesting and funny. It's the first time I've read this type of fairy tale. I can't help but feel excited.

Beautiful! The heroine has brains and a good personality. The symbols and formation pills in it are also very interesting. I can't get enough of it. I want to watch the extra extra extra [Blow Kiss]

It's very nice. It's been a long time since I've read a story about something other than fast wear. This one is really good.

I like it. Even in tense moments, there is some invisible humor. I like this kind of setting that I have grown up with since childhood.

It's very beautiful, the writing is smooth and vivid, and the heroine is very strong