Seeking the Dao of Immortality, Starting with Zhu Xian

Although I haven't finished it yet, I have only read part of it, so I gave it four stars first. How should I say it? It's really good-looking, but it's not good-looking, so it's not bad. The protagonist seems to have become Wan Jianyi's disciple again, and even gave him some magic-enhancing pills. I don't think it's necessary. He and Daoxuan are known as the two geniuses of Qingyun! I personally still hope that he will die as per the original plot, but the only difference is that he can die more gloriously. Furthermore, I hope the author can make the protagonist a little more miserable. Before the war between good and evil begins, what kind of hole does the cheerful and lively girl fall into with Baguio and Zhang Xiaofan? After learning the first volume of the Book of Heaven with Zhang Xiaofan, he became good friends with Baguio 🤦, and then came the battle between good and evil, Baguio's death, and the destruction of Zhang Xiaofan's village. The protagonist had doubts about the right way (there is no need to discredit Daoxuan and the right way) and then left Qingyun Sect. Join the Demon Cult and work with Zhang Xiaofan to find a way to resurrect Baguio. After that, the protagonist becomes one of the four young masters of the Demon Cult. [Please take a closer look] The protagonist also needs to interact more with Jin Ping'er and Xiaobai during the Demon Cult. [Sneaky smile] Zhang Xiaofan, he only cares about Baguio when necessary and nothing else. Otherwise, those Baguio fans will be shouting everywhere again 🤦 practice Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao and Zhu Xian's first skill Heavenly Book, and the magic weapon will be given to the protagonist, of course Zhu Xian's first magic weapon Zhu Xian Sword [laughing] Then the protagonist will practice the five Heavenly Books, become the master of Zhu Xian Sword, and slash the ghost king with one sword, and then Living in seclusion in Xiaozhu Peak and living a shameless life with Lu Xueqi 😳 😳 😳 Don't travel to other worlds. I personally feel that this is really not good-looking. I travel to this world and then to that world. The above is my personal opinion 😄

It's pretty good, but every time I see a post, I want to click on it to see what everyone is discussing, but as soon as I enter it, there's that magic weapon in the bb. Alas, when will Tomato release a blocking function?

Nice. The reason why I didn't give it five stars is, first, that Baguio died inexplicably. You cut off Lu Xueqi and give Zhang Xiaofan a home, right? One of my biggest regrets when I first read Zhu Xian and Qing Yun Zhi was that Baguio died. Second, there are too few stickers. The protagonist and Lu have been together for more than ten years, and the number of times they have posted can be counted on one hand, and the scale is not as good as that of the protagonist and Jin Ping'er. The above two points are the reasons why I give 4 stars instead of 5 stars. They are purely subjective and not mixed with objective factors.

It's rare to see such an interesting article. I finished reading it in one sitting. The back part is a bit unsatisfactory.

It's a very good fanfic, and it's a lesbian. It's even better to read. The author's update speed is pretty good. It's like 8,000 words a day. It's not like other books I've read that have less than 2,000 words. You can catch up on it.

I said that we should arrange a Nine Heavens Divine Weapon for the protagonist. It doesn't need to be too good, it just needs to be no worse than the Zhuxian Sword.

You can try to avoid copyright issues by changing the title of the book. The main characters in the book can be replaced with homophones and abbreviations.

Good looking. Good in every way.

It looks good, but there are too few updates to make it interesting. Can you write less about daily life?

Five Stars hopes a new book will be released soon See how many hours it took