Love Combines with Movie Viewing Body

Overall, it's pretty good. I don't know if the author will read my book review, but I still really want to make some suggestions for this book. After the author sees it, he can make slight corrections in the subsequent plots of the book. Of course, if the author feels offended, he can just think that I am farting. First, the segmentation is unreasonable. Of course, it is not a bad thing to describe too much inner thoughts of the characters, but it can be divided into appropriate paragraphs, so that it does not look too boring and makes readers want to abandon the book. Second, describe the characters in a large space. This is a taboo in writing. In my personal opinion, it is not necessary to describe the character's clothing, relationship, and introduction in too detail. It is unnecessary to describe the character in a large space. Many novice authors will use a lot of adjectives to describe the character to highlight a certain characteristic of the character. However, this will make the readers feel boring and cannot help but skip it. The author usually makes this mistake. Appropriate character description allows readers to fully use their imagination, and it also requires appropriate paragraphing. Third, background introduction. In fact, the background introduction does not need to be completely spoken. The protagonist group is a group of people with brains. If you leak a little bit appropriately, the protagonist group will think and ask questions. At this time, you can leak a little background introduction on the basis of answering the protagonist group's questions, and slowly complete the background. This is also a good way of writing. The above is just my personal suggestion. I'm sorry if it offends you, the author, but I still hope it can play a small role in your future coding journey. Thank you.

After all, this is my own book.

It's really super pretty 😁

Suddenly I felt like the teacher was Sen Tui.

Nice! Why is no one watching?