Sin and reality
All accidents are not coincidences
What is the reality we see?
No one knows
Doctor of the lower year×Writer of the upper year
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Schrödinger's Fantasy Forest (Completed)
Schrödinger hated boxes
Schrödinger thanked mankind
we are already dead
We are still Yukimura
Harvest Festival—Unfinished
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Reader comments
Luo Ji is chaotic and its composition is unclear. I couldn't understand what was said at all.
The introduction is inconsistent with reality, especially the character of the protagonist.
The writing style is not bad, but it all uses some graceful and luxurious words as a foreshadowing, which really makes it feel like a fast food.
And I don't know why, but I always feel like Jingfeng when I read it. Let me make it clear that I am not a fan of Jingfeng, I just read a few copies. The overall feeling is that the author is deliberately imitating Jingfeng. (This is my personal feeling)
Also, the author's dialogue is like a Japanese light novel. Although the dialogue I wrote myself is similar, it is better than the author's dialogue. I suggest that the author read more books that improve dialogue writing. Basically, all the characters speak in a similar tone, and when you line up, you have no idea who is speaking.
There is no character arc, and tens of thousands of words are written in vain.
Finally, I will continue to read this book. If the writing is good in the future, I will add a follow-up review.
Luo Ji is chaotic and its composition is unclear. I couldn't understand what was said at all. The introduction is inconsistent with reality, especially the character of the protagonist. The writing style is not bad, but it all uses some graceful and luxurious words as a foreshadowing, which really makes it feel like a fast food. And I don't know why, but I always feel like Jingfeng when I read it. Let me make it clear that I am not a fan of Jingfeng, I just read a few copies. The overall feeling is that the author is deliberately imitating Jingfeng. (This is my personal feeling) Also, the author's dialogue is like a Japanese light novel. Although the dialogue I wrote myself is similar, it is better than the author's dialogue. I suggest that the author read more books that improve dialogue writing. Basically, all the characters speak in a similar tone, and when you line up, you have no idea who is speaking. There is no character arc, and tens of thousands of words are written in vain. Finally, I will continue to read this book. If the writing is good in the future, I will add a follow-up review.