American Comics: Trading for Valmont and the Twelve Talismans

Not bad, but there are too many worlds involved, I hope the author can hold it in

So far it's not bad, but why doesn't the protagonist ask Big Wolf and Tom Cat and Jerry Mouse to create brain development potions, so that the protagonist can simply create them himself? And why don't you let them integrate those spells into your body?

It's good to read, but it's just too few. The narration seems to be a bit of a cramming of words, but it can be written. After all, not everyone has seen it and remembers so many characters in the plot. Come on, code the words. This number of words won't make a difference. There should be less descriptions of women. It can't be less. I hope it can be separated without affecting the reading.

I like it very much. It's interesting. I recommend everyone to watch it. The author also updates it very quickly.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, come on, come on, come on

The early part of the plot was well written. [1] From Thanos's men coming to Earth to search for space gems, it started to feel like the protagonist was very incompetent, and had to rely on Odin to remind him that there was an alien invasion. The system is not powerful and the sense of presence is low! It shouldn't be difficult to use the protagonist and the abilities of all team members to scan the earth to detect alien invasion👽! [2] The protagonist cannot always rely on the system and plane friends to help cats, mice, gray wolves, etc. He must also have a strong heart in order to control his own destiny! If you rely too much on the system and help from your plane friends such as Big Big Wolf, you will lose your strong heart and lose your motivation! Come on, support!

Except for the water numbers that particularly affect the viewing experience, the plot is still awesome. I gave it five points because of the plot, and most importantly because I was afraid that the author would abandon the book.

Come on, the author is looking forward to it

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to be so casual and perfunctory? It seems that I am being sentimental. It's true that my brother is weak and needs to rest more. It's my fault for urging my brother so much. It hurts my brother's body, which makes me feel very sad. But what does it have to do with whether the elder brother is injured or not? Hurry up and add more!

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Jingji waited for Wei Wumei for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Zi Wentuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. Zuiyu smiled slightly. The year he stretched out trembled slightly, and his eyes sparkled with tears. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."