Zerg: I ​​Am an Old-Fashioned Person, This Is Really Not Okay for the Female Monarch.

Of course I should give my book a five-star review! I hope everyone will like it. [Love] If you have any problems, you can point them out. I will read slowly, learn slowly, and change slowly. I am a novice. Although I have read a lot of articles, my eyes are black when I take pictures.

I like this article very much. It is different from the settings of some Zerg articles. The setting can show the author's intention. Each character has its own unique charm. Ian, Green, each character has its own charm. But there is one shortcoming. It may be the first time I try this style full of Machiavellian charm. The description and processing of transitions and organization give people a feeling of fragmentation and incoherence. It feels like there are many things that are not explained clearly and it starts in a confused manner. And when the plots collide, it's a bit chaotic. There are many villains in the traditional sense, which gives me the feeling that the whole world is against the protagonist and them. Then there is the robbery, which I think is too compact even for a growth story. There is also a protagonist who has almost no ability to fight back and will definitely be hurt. The long-term tension and similar endings will give people a sense of exhaustion. But I must admit that the author's high level of knowledge and what he wanted to express, including some descriptions, made me take screenshots and take notes.

I finished the game in one go. When I saw the Zerg setting, I thought it was about love or ordinary farming. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be a plot about business. It has an exciting main line. It is very interesting to watch. It is just this secret poke and fun. The supporting roles are also good. I like to watch this kind of game between smart people. It is not like the scenes where they stand on the street and have a brainless quarrel. It is really painful to watch. I can't tell from the writing style and logic that it's a new author. Teacher, please believe that you can write well, and please be sure to work harder to update!

If you like watching, come on⸜૮* ॑^꒳^* ა⋆*Five stars for encouragement It's just that the transitions need to be improved. Every transition is like a hit on my head, it goes blank, and then it goes to the next one. Can't connect. [Laughing and crying]

Suddenly it occurred to me that the author of a novel that I like would indicate on the book cover what he borrowed from it.

Precious objects, noble people [worm] •The plot is exciting, the logic is reasonable [referring to the reaction in another world], and the characters are quite fleshed out •Highlights: Language barrier, struggling in a different world, social contradictions of the Zerg Small shortcomings: some passages are unclear and some scene jumps are a bit abrupt. Come on [like]

It's actually a Machiavellian novel [laughing and crying], which is not very friendly to my brain. I was stunned for a while while reading it. I had to listen to the book to make it less strenuous. It would be a bit tiring to read. The emotional line between attack and reception seems to be a bit lacking. They are not married yet, which makes me feel sad.

Among Tomato's Zerg novels, it's quite good. In terms of world background and details, it's a bit similar to JJ's live broadcast about pure love (the plot is completely different x3, there is no c, just like writing a post-apocalyptic novel, zombies in the world background will have the same meaning as crystal nuclei) [face covering] Special species, male worms are raised by Saint Laurent, etc. The author can dig deeper. The end of more than 100 chapters will be rushed, and if it is written more carefully, it can definitely explode. No, it will become more and more fragmented as you read the next ten chapters. Author, it is okay for you to borrow the setting, but don't just use a word suddenly. For example, the coat of arms for identification, planet setting, fluorescent species, etc., Suddenly appear, with no foreshadowing in the front, and no introduction in the back. It only appears once, without beginning or end. I have read that article, and even if I can borrow it, I feel it is very fragmented and abrupt, let alone readers who have never read it.

It is a very clever book, with good conception and some emotional expressions. However, it lacks coherence in sentences and paragraphs. It needs to be read by someone who is good at association, so that the picture will be better. Just looking at the words and sentences will make it confusing. Overall, it should be said that this is an article with potential and spirituality. I look forward to the author's subsequent development (refill)

It's okay, the story is quite interesting and interesting. Moreover, it is a rare Zerg novel that does not rely heavily on male insects, and both male protagonists are relatively strong. Unlike the common Zerg literature, although the female Zerg is very powerful, she is powerless in many things, and in the end it needs a powerful male Zerg to solve the problem. It's just that there are inconsistencies in content in many places. It makes readers feel like they missed a chapter. It was so sudden that I had to go back and check it several times 😂

Well... No twist, no exposition. That's it Climb to the reserve and then wake up directly in your house? I found a female insect outside (the main character suffered it), then I jumped to something with treatment and got an injection. Then how did I bring it back? Can it be pulled? I didn't say anything.

This is a very in-depth Zerg novel. Each character has his own shining point and fights for freedom and the continuation of the race. In the process of moving towards a better future, power struggles, tides of alien beasts, crazy experiments, familiar characters leaving one after another, it is really sad [crying]. The seeds of civilization/ideas were planted and sprouted, and fortunately the Zerg here eventually survived. Thank you to the author for the great story and the shock this story brings!

They stand at the crossroads of the times, and every life is actively looking for a way out. The highly praised male bugs are actually pets, and the female bugs are also divided into three, six or nine grades. Selvika and Su Zhenqing, Ian and Asa, Eugene and Hans, who were thought to be pure villains at first, made choices in the torrent of fate for the future, and Wei Wei En and Blewyn also fell on the eve of the future for their loved ones and the future, and went to the right, but why are they so cruel [crying][crying][crying]

Although, I feel that it is very similar to a book on the other side of the Green River [laughing and crying] I wonder if there are friends who have read both and feel the same as me.

It's very interesting, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are very distinctive. However, the names and identities of some supporting characters are easy to remember (my problem [shy]). Secondly, some settings are relatively new compared to the same Zerg novels nowadays. Finally, I hope the author will continue to write. After seeing the part where Zelan was taken away by the bad bugs, I am very curious how Zelan will break the situation when he wakes up [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

This Zerg story is really well written. I originally thought it would be a light love story, but then I found out that it is essentially a political battle with an interstellar background. The author's idea is very good, but the connection between the characters and the plot is a bit lacking. Flawed but worth seeing

Do you think your profile is suitable? I thought it was pure sweetness The writing is quite good.

It's pretty good, but I can't understand it a little bit. It jumps too fast.

The up and down links are indeed inappropriate, just like the comments in Chapter 6. It would be much better if there was an explanation and you could click on the content of the comments below.

The plot of this book is exciting, the writing is good, and the main idea is good The two protagonists really impressed me [laughing] The logic is clear and organized, and it's not brainless... Very sweet? [Send heart] The only small flaw is that the plot transition is a bit incoherent, which sometimes makes me confused [facepalm] Summary: A book I like very much [Blowing Kiss]

The author's writing is super good! The whole story is mainly based on the plot, and it's really sad that there aren't many emotional lines. (The protagonists and supporting characters are all workaholics, and they are always striving for their own ambitions. It's so respectable😭

It's a pretty good book. The plot of the article jumps slightly, and the rhythm is different from other books. The acquaintance of the protagonists is relatively simple, but the plot in the middle and later stages is very interesting, the description of the battle process is compact and intense, and the logic of the characters is also relatively strict. It is not a brainless romance.

When will the identity of the male be revealed?

It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low? The whole text is smooth and the writing is excellent. The best part is the part about escaping on the planet where the Eighth Legion belongs. It is particularly smooth. I haven't seen such a coherent text about the battle in a long time. Of course, some scene changes in the early stage were not well connected. But the author used his writing style and his strengths to cover up his shortcomings. And the writing becomes smoother and smoother. Really recommended!

Big cheers for the author! It's really beautifully written.

This book has a low rating, but I think the author wrote it well. The overall logic is very complete, the content and plot are relatively novel, and the settings of male insects are also very reasonable. They enjoy excellent treatment and are also regarded as advanced reproductive animals. The author's writing style is also very good, and there are some sentences that I particularly like. Thank you very much to the author. I give you five-star praise [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

The content and narrative are very good, but some plots are off-kilter and may make you confused for a while.

Okay, okay, the whole career line, the emotional line is pitiful, and the few pairs of deputy CPs are almost finished.

It's very interesting, but there are some parts that I can't understand and it's very annoying [facepalm] I hope it can be made into a TV series so that I can interpret it more easily, but I'm worried that the screenwriter's lack of understanding will ruin the book [facepalm]

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