1V2+Single ending heroine+Slow-paced plot+Not a cool story
[The pace in the early stage is slow and the martial arts style is strong. The story line in the early and middle stages has begun to fully unfold. I hope all readers can read it patiently. Thank you!
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I thought I was going to rot in the mud.
But the demon sect woman who caused me to fall into this situation suddenly appeared in front of me and handed me a candy.
"Idiot, your senior sister doesn't want you anymore, this girl does."
She taught me to cultivate immortality, fought for me, and even chased me from Dali to the Central Plains for me.
Later, the sect was destroyed, and the senior sister who had abandoned me begged me to turn back with red eyes.
Before I could say anything, the enchantress had already grabbed my waist and turned back to glare at her:
"He's mine, you're late."
Reader comments
The word banishment and separation. Relegation means to be demoted, and can also be understood as reproach. Li means to leave and separate. Just two words, but it already points out the main content of the novel's opening chapter. What's more interesting - (relegated) five elements, belongs to (fire). (Li) Five Elements, belongs to (Fire). One of these can be related to Bai Fengying's extremely yang body in the article, and the other is that the author wants to be popular too much [laughs evilly]. But this book is beautiful, the plot is novel, interlocking, and breathtaking
Only after reading Tomato did I realize that there is a word called sending a girl away. After reading a few novels, I did understand some of the meaning. It is really awkward.
But there is indeed a kind of regretful beauty in the kind of love that you seek but cannot receive.
Personally, I feel that the difference between the two lies in the author's control of the plot and characters?
I hope the author can give a good answer
The author's writing is very good. It feels like reading martial arts novels in magazines before. It can be regarded as a return to nature.
It's very beautiful, and each character is very distinctive. Within the framework of a single heroine, two female characters with completely different personalities appear to accompany the protagonist, adding to the protagonist's understanding of the word "love" on his journey to immortality. Of course, in slow-paced novels, the protagonist is naturally not as knowledgeable as in Shuangwen. This is why I think this book is not popular. After all, in the fast-paced life, who is willing to chew words in Tomato to taste the flowing writing style? Of course, no matter what style of novel, I will not let it go as long as it is good enough. At present, I personally think that the content gradually becomes interesting starting from the third volume of "Looking for the Tianshu Stone". The various ruins passed by make me recall the adventure experience of watching Charles IX. All in all, the book focuses on the characters' emotions rather than the cultivation of immortality. It is worth reading. At the same time, I also hope that this novel will get out of the unpopular ranks and be noticed by everyone as soon as possible [Please update]
The one who rides on the horse is really beautiful, don't stop, don't kill me, give me more, more, more, I love you to death, slow-paced, emotional, and detailed. If the heroine was not her, I would really vomit blood, please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry], I will follow up on the review. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I feel that the relationship between the male protagonist and Baek is not interesting. I really hope that Bai is the female protagonist. There is still a lack of an opportunity between them, an opportunity for the male protagonist to recognize his own feelings. It is like the amnesia car accident in Korean dramas and other bloody plots. It would be better if it can be more cruel. As for the senior sister, I can only say that it is a bit regretful.
I hope it will be a single heroine, no matter which one is fine, don't accept both, otherwise it will be really boring.
It seems like I have gone back to the first time I read the novel. I was very immersed in it, a bit like watching Sword. I hope the author will not give the knife [send heart] and the team a good [air kiss].
Great book, good luck to the author. Will firefly.
It looks pretty good. Please support me.
Come on, author, there are one of the few ancient style novels in Tomato that I'm really interested in [smile]
If there is a single heroine, I would vote for Senior Sister [laughing and crying], although I still hope that there will be two heroines.
I hope the heroine is a senior sister
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that no one has read it. Please give it a try, the author, it will get better [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
How come no one reads this good book? ! !
Is the heroine Bai Fengying?
Come on author, it's okay
The writing is really good. If the author keeps working hard, he may become more popular in the future.
It's a very good book, but the author doesn't stop updating it. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel like I'm watching Fairy Sword. I hope the author will update it if you read it. I will give you gifts and other things, just don't stop updating it.
The writing is very good. Compared with the current impetuous trend of online writing, it is a breath of fresh air. Come on, author.
I like reading it. The girl's author's writing about emotions is really delicate and beautiful. I recommend reading it.
Beautiful! ! !
Is this really a single female protagonist?
It's still to your liking, give me some encouragement [like]
Not bad, good, good-looking
It's very well written. Come on.
Come on author, it's great
It's so beautiful, why is there no one there?
Is it a single heroine? Is there any ambiguity?
The characters are well-developed
It feels a bit like Sword 3. Come on, author.
Can anyone tell me who the heroine is?
It's so awesome, I just like to see this kind of literary style.
The word banishment and separation. Relegation means to be demoted, and can also be understood as reproach. Li means to leave and separate. Just two words, but it already points out the main content of the novel's opening chapter. What's more interesting - (relegated) five elements, belongs to (fire). (Li) Five Elements, belongs to (Fire). One of these can be related to Bai Fengying's extremely yang body in the article, and the other is that the author wants to be popular too much [laughs evilly]. But this book is beautiful, the plot is novel, interlocking, and breathtaking
Only after reading Tomato did I realize that there is a word called sending a girl away. After reading a few novels, I did understand some of the meaning. It is really awkward. But there is indeed a kind of regretful beauty in the kind of love that you seek but cannot receive. Personally, I feel that the difference between the two lies in the author's control of the plot and characters? I hope the author can give a good answer The author's writing is very good. It feels like reading martial arts novels in magazines before. It can be regarded as a return to nature.
It's very beautiful, and each character is very distinctive. Within the framework of a single heroine, two female characters with completely different personalities appear to accompany the protagonist, adding to the protagonist's understanding of the word "love" on his journey to immortality. Of course, in slow-paced novels, the protagonist is naturally not as knowledgeable as in Shuangwen. This is why I think this book is not popular. After all, in the fast-paced life, who is willing to chew words in Tomato to taste the flowing writing style? Of course, no matter what style of novel, I will not let it go as long as it is good enough. At present, I personally think that the content gradually becomes interesting starting from the third volume of "Looking for the Tianshu Stone". The various ruins passed by make me recall the adventure experience of watching Charles IX. All in all, the book focuses on the characters' emotions rather than the cultivation of immortality. It is worth reading. At the same time, I also hope that this novel will get out of the unpopular ranks and be noticed by everyone as soon as possible [Please update]
The one who rides on the horse is really beautiful, don't stop, don't kill me, give me more, more, more, I love you to death, slow-paced, emotional, and detailed. If the heroine was not her, I would really vomit blood, please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry], I will follow up on the review. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I feel that the relationship between the male protagonist and Baek is not interesting. I really hope that Bai is the female protagonist. There is still a lack of an opportunity between them, an opportunity for the male protagonist to recognize his own feelings. It is like the amnesia car accident in Korean dramas and other bloody plots. It would be better if it can be more cruel. As for the senior sister, I can only say that it is a bit regretful. I hope it will be a single heroine, no matter which one is fine, don't accept both, otherwise it will be really boring.
It seems like I have gone back to the first time I read the novel. I was very immersed in it, a bit like watching Sword. I hope the author will not give the knife [send heart] and the team a good [air kiss].
Great book, good luck to the author. Will firefly.
It looks pretty good. Please support me.
Come on, author, there are one of the few ancient style novels in Tomato that I'm really interested in [smile]
If there is a single heroine, I would vote for Senior Sister [laughing and crying], although I still hope that there will be two heroines.
I hope the heroine is a senior sister
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that no one has read it. Please give it a try, the author, it will get better [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
How come no one reads this good book? ! !
Is the heroine Bai Fengying?
Come on author, it's okay
The writing is really good. If the author keeps working hard, he may become more popular in the future.
It's a very good book, but the author doesn't stop updating it. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel like I'm watching Fairy Sword. I hope the author will update it if you read it. I will give you gifts and other things, just don't stop updating it.
The writing is very good. Compared with the current impetuous trend of online writing, it is a breath of fresh air. Come on, author.
I like reading it. The girl's author's writing about emotions is really delicate and beautiful. I recommend reading it. Beautiful! ! !
Is this really a single female protagonist?
It's still to your liking, give me some encouragement [like]
Not bad, good, good-looking
It's very well written. Come on.
Come on author, it's great
It's so beautiful, why is there no one there?
Is it a single heroine? Is there any ambiguity?
The characters are well-developed
It feels a bit like Sword 3. Come on, author.
Can anyone tell me who the heroine is?
It's so awesome, I just like to see this kind of literary style.