The Outcast: Discussing Xiao Zizai's Condition from the Start

It's too early to start, it's only chapter 14... The setting of the protagonist really pokes me, and overall it gives me the feeling of a gentle and reliable handsome uncle (although from the description, the protagonist seems to have just graduated 🤦). There is a little ambiguity with Xia He, Sha Yan, etc., But the protagonist seems to have clearly rejected it? 🤔 In short, as long as the plot and characters are not broken and the supervision is not too high, this book is good! Come on, author! It's only a dozen chapters now!! Update quickly!!! [Please update]

Super pretty!!!! The character of the protagonist is amazing!! Moreover, the emotional line is very delicate. If you, the author, write this book well, you can have a female protagonist!! It's really hard to describe the heroines of other authors, so is there a heroine?

It's good to watch, more updates, and no cp would be better. I hope the male protagonist's character will not be ruined in the next plot. There are too many harem stories at present, and there are relatively few characters like the male protagonist, which is quite rare.

This is so well written, better than anything I've ever seen before. It's my favorite. Brother Zhuo is so damn in line with my ideal character. Not only has it changed the original plot of Tian Lao, it is simply the best in my opinion. It's just a bit lacking and not enough for me to watch!!!

Breaking away from the framework of ordinary fans following the crowd, I feel like I have a little bit of my own flavor. Although there are some private goods mixed in, the protagonist is really well portrayed and the plot is compact. It can be regarded as a good source of one-person fan works.

1. The protagonist is very upright, and he is upright when he is evil. I really want to say that he has exerted his full power. . . . Too righteous 2. The single heroine is Xia He, but there is not so much presence and emotional drama. When the presence is strongest, it is only at the beginning and the end. In a blink of an eye, the chase was finally over. . . . I feel like time flies by very quickly, and I feel like I have been chasing for a long time. At first, I simply wanted to watch a fanfic, but then I fell in love with it, and then I fell in love with it. What impressed me the most was the male protagonist's car 🤦. A car came to the rescue at the beginning, and also came to the rescue in the middle. . . . Although the car is not the same, it feels like the male protagonist cannot do without the car every time he saves the scene. Maybe this is due to the advancement of technology? (Just kidding)

You deserve 9 points. I don't blame you for the shortness, I can only blame the manga for being slow to come out. The ending is really good. Finally, it's not a formulaic novel anymore. Suddenly I feel like I'm returning to nature when I read this. The character of the protagonist is very good and has a strong character. He's a real character👍

The protagonist does have a feeling of being rootless in the new era, a full-sex succubus hahaha. It really makes up for the regrets in the text. The process and method of saving Tian Lao, Chen Duo and Head Tang are the most natural among the many one-person fanfics I have seen. I skipped the Nathan's Island comic. Only after reading this book did I realize that there is also the development of "Alien Weapons" in Waiguo. Good guy, I have really been focusing on the demographic red line mentioned by the company before. That is to say, we can not use it, but we can't live without it, right? I don't know if it is the expression of the comic or the author's thinking that aroused my interest in reading the comic.

It's pretty good, and the logic is reasonable, but, well, it's too short, but that's also the fault of the original work. This book is not that hot-blooded. In fact, it has lost the flavor of the old-age hot-blooded series. It is a bit bland but the protagonist's character design is very thorough. It is rare to see a rational and thoughtful male protagonist in this kind of novel. In the end, he has achieved it. I, the leader of the Merlin Cult, am very pleased 😄

This fan work completes the gentle repayment of the original work with amazing literary consciousness. It does not tamper with the genes of the original work, but uses a microscope-like approach to magnify a certain fold of the soul that had been ignored - when the supporting character who always stood in the shadows was finally given the details of breathing, readers were shocked to find that under his harsh words was the hand holding an umbrella for a stray cat, and the cold eyes reflected the curled-up shoulders of a child crying. The most amazing thing is the mirror reconstruction of the classic scene: under the same moonlight, the feud in the original work was cut off with a sword, here it is transformed into the warmth of the palm of the hand picking up the letters left by the enemy. This is not a betrayal of the original work, but a higher dimension of loyalty achieved through affectionate deconstruction, allowing those regrets that were fixed by the original work to finally transform into eternity in the alchemy of words.