I Took a Mortal as My Disciple, But He Seems a Little Too Powerful

The writing is very good, I don't know if it is a single girl or a harem, but I feel that there are at most two girls, Shizun and Qinghan. If so, it would be the best. However, I don't know whether it is a default relationship ending or an open relationship ending. There is a high possibility that the relationship line will not be disclosed. It is just not clear who it will be with and let everyone think about it. The plot is very well written, but the story about developing sects is not very well written. Many of them are system agents, so they are not very good to watch. The male protagonist doesn't know if he can cultivate immortality, but he should have a happy ending. He should be able to cultivate later, but he will definitely experience some serious things. Therefore, the characters are well written. This is the advantage of novels where most of the plots are developed through dialogue, which can better integrate into the characters. I have read a lot of novels with water characters that either have a lot of explanations in one sentence or a lot of narration. This one is very well written. There are also some plots that feel like they are too hard. For example, the actions of the male protagonist towards several female supporting characters are a bit deliberate, which feels like the author's power. But these are okay and don't feel poisonous. Guessing the method that the male protagonist can practice, it should be that the place where the sect has been guarding has this opportunity. It may not be the cultivation system of this world, because the author also wrote that people from other places are not from this continent, so there should be other cultivation systems that the male protagonist can come to. If it is not possible to achieve merit, demon cultivation, really demonic energy, and direct cultivation, that is, the method of enlightenment, not climbing the realm but climbing the state of mind, cultivation, the power of heaven and earth. You can still be a mortal but you can already use the power of Taoism, Heaven and Earth to bless yourself. If you want to become an immortal, it should be the foreshadowing of the place guarded by the sect.

It is real, it counts as a group portrait, the perspective is not always on the protagonist, the villains are also described in depth, each character is well-drawn, flesh and blood, the protagonist has a bottom line and principles, not brainless, not just a cool novel, the IQ is always online, I don't eat books, the main focus is the fight between immortals, there are few emotional scenes, daily funny humor, a rare and better book from Tomato

Seeing it so far, it is quite interesting, and the holes dug can be filled. Although there are many series with Big Brother Invincible, the mortal start is relatively innovative and attractive. It is expected that he can cultivate immortals later, and the need for plot development is also inevitable. It is a pity for Xiao Xiao. I hope Xiaoxiao can be online.

Why is such a good book rated so low?

This book is so good, why has no one read it? 😘[what]

It's okay. It's suitable for reading when you relax. I finished reading it in one day. Please update it quickly. However, there is still a problem. It's a bit unreasonable that almost all of the first righteous forces are bad. The characters around the protagonist are all well portrayed.

It's very interesting to read and can relieve your fatigue.

It's obviously a good book, why doesn't anyone read it? After reading the book, there are fewer and fewer people. Don't give up, the author. The book is really beautiful 😢

I feel that the writing is okay, and there are no disgusting plots or other things in this book, but why is the rating so low?

Very good, recommended by bookworms