This is my first time writing a book. I just write casually. I plan to give up and write hard and then publish it after finishing it. New works are released. Welcome to Tomato Novel to read my works. I hope you all like them. Your attention is the motivation for my writing. I will try my best to tell every story!
Reader comments
There are too many inner descriptions, which are all nonsense.
It looks too awkward from the first perspective. The mecha battle is written like a romance novel. There are no details in the battle. It always depicts other people's expressions and inner thoughts.
The first person is a bit strange, especially when you see the self-introduction of the spiritual boy.
It was okay when I was a kid. Come on, author.
Generally, like a running account
It's all a naive and obscene imagination! It makes me sick to my stomach.
There are too many inner descriptions, which are all nonsense.
It looks too awkward from the first perspective. The mecha battle is written like a romance novel. There are no details in the battle. It always depicts other people's expressions and inner thoughts.
The first person is a bit strange, especially when you see the self-introduction of the spiritual boy.
It was okay when I was a kid. Come on, author.
Generally, like a running account
It's all a naive and obscene imagination! It makes me sick to my stomach.