[Double male protagonists + rebirth + dual heroes + horror copy + ghost king's doting wife]
In He Yang's eyes, Ghost King Xie Chuci was just a clingy puppy. But when he saw Xie Chuci's crazy criticizing side, he remembered, this! He is the Ghost King!
Just pretending to be good in front of him.
Finally, the ghost king thanked Chuci and accompanied his little Taoist priest, He Yang, to start the real record of ghost investigation.
Article introduction
In the family, as an adopted son, He Yang could not feel any warmth from the family.
In order to repay the so-called upbringing, he died of exhaustion in a rental house of only ten square meters.
God finally gave him a chance to be reborn.
Because of Xie Chuci (King of Ghosts)! Just one more glance at him in the crowd caused He Yang to be involved in a huge turmoil that cost his life.
He Yang: "In this life, I just want to live well."
Xie Chuci: "Can you believe me again?"
He Yang: "Is there really someone who will treat you well without asking for anything from you?"
Xie Chuci: "I originally wanted to protect you!"
He Yang: "At least this time my choice makes sense."
Xie Chuci: "I am... The person who loves you the most. Please, please let me stay with you. Don't push me away, okay?"
He Yang: "Let me introduce to you, this is my boyfriend, thank you Chuci."
Reader comments
I haven't read a few chapters, so I may not be qualified to comment, but I read what you said in the comment section, so I'll share my own thoughts.
1. I can't grasp the key points in my writing. I wrote a lot but couldn't get to the plot, "My parents in my previous life…, this life I…, and from now on I…" It's such a long paragraph, but I just waved my hand and walked away. You wrote three short paragraphs, and so on and so on…. More than this, I only read the first five chapters or so, but I couldn't see a single thing you wanted to express.
2. The introduction is very important. You can be careful about it, because I relied on the introduction to get in. It was really just average and I had no desire to read it.
3. Soul travel and rebirth, the previous background was not explained clearly, and I didn't pay enough attention to see that I look the same as "me"? Can't you tell if you're wearing a mask?
4. The character setting does not support the character. I cannot see what kind of character the protagonist is.
5. The content and conception of the story. As mentioned earlier, the key points cannot be grasped. In the Chinese language, it is said that setting up suspense will attract readers, but there is nothing
6. "Beauty Gege", hey! I don't really want to say this. Just from this, it conveys to me weakness.
7. Regarding this book, I suggest you read "I Killed the God of Science in a Mental Hospital" to learn the descriptions in it (fighting type), as well as the character "Zhao Kongcheng" in it. Although his appearance time is short, he can be established by others; there is a comic called "Sweet Scandal", Taoist priests and zombies (Ghost King?), It has only 568 chapters, but the plot is really attractive
I said that I am not a glass-hearted person, but I agreed to ask for an evaluation, and I was not allowed to secretly hide under the covers to feel sad. I also wrote down my evaluation carefully.
It looks good, especially the test part
It looks great. When I tested it, I was granted the title of God. It was great.
I haven't read a few chapters, so I may not be qualified to comment, but I read what you said in the comment section, so I'll share my own thoughts. 1. I can't grasp the key points in my writing. I wrote a lot but couldn't get to the plot, "My parents in my previous life…, this life I…, and from now on I…" It's such a long paragraph, but I just waved my hand and walked away. You wrote three short paragraphs, and so on and so on…. More than this, I only read the first five chapters or so, but I couldn't see a single thing you wanted to express. 2. The introduction is very important. You can be careful about it, because I relied on the introduction to get in. It was really just average and I had no desire to read it. 3. Soul travel and rebirth, the previous background was not explained clearly, and I didn't pay enough attention to see that I look the same as "me"? Can't you tell if you're wearing a mask? 4. The character setting does not support the character. I cannot see what kind of character the protagonist is. 5. The content and conception of the story. As mentioned earlier, the key points cannot be grasped. In the Chinese language, it is said that setting up suspense will attract readers, but there is nothing 6. "Beauty Gege", hey! I don't really want to say this. Just from this, it conveys to me weakness. 7. Regarding this book, I suggest you read "I Killed the God of Science in a Mental Hospital" to learn the descriptions in it (fighting type), as well as the character "Zhao Kongcheng" in it. Although his appearance time is short, he can be established by others; there is a comic called "Sweet Scandal", Taoist priests and zombies (Ghost King?), It has only 568 chapters, but the plot is really attractive I said that I am not a glass-hearted person, but I agreed to ask for an evaluation, and I was not allowed to secretly hide under the covers to feel sad. I also wrote down my evaluation carefully.
It looks good, especially the test part
It looks great. When I tested it, I was granted the title of God. It was great.