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The first dozens of chapters can be said to be perfect among perfections, whether it is the integration of memes or the description of characters, they are perfect, and the characters stand out immediately. The heroine's unconscious help to Obito, the contradictions in her character, and the underlying psychological struggles are revealed so naturally. Even the strategizing that was expected after getting the eyes is very well written. The author's writing is particularly smart. However, there are a few plots in the back that affect my perception a little, but it does not affect the overall reading. The best thing about this article is that the previous plot and text have a sense of depth. The crazy entanglement with Obito when they meet again is so invincible. The scenes with other supporting characters are also very tense. The heroine's senses are like Gintoki's free and easy nonsense and the crazy feeling caused by pressure, coupled with Dior's That kind of villain psychology and personality charm, but since I started writing the protagonist's female imp attributes, everything has become a bit subtle. It's okay to make a joke once, but it will appear from time to time later, which weakens the crazy shock that was foreshadowed in the early stage too much. It can be a drama where the heroine scolds her subordinates and is very excited when they are scolded. Love, but with a series of lines about a bitch, it gave people a bookish feel. The heroine turned into a fuming cat. She was angry, and others only thought it was cute. It was separated from the simple and honest feeling in the previous dozens of chapters. Later, when there were similar comments and comments, it started to sound like a bitch. This kind of labeling gag hits the female audience. It's a pity for the heroine. The struggle of the heroine in the previous article and her self-rescue in the later period plus the fact that there is no such sign in the previous dozens of chapters are really a bit painful to put on this attribute. Maybe it's because I liked the heroine too much in the previous chapter and felt that she was described so well that I couldn't help but think about it after reading this! If you don't ignore this point, it also belongs to the Shinbun Nakai. Among all the Naruto novels, it is unique in being able to write such crazy and tense emotions.

Addicted. Fiery women should watch it. It is as abstract as it gets, with a lot of jokes but perfectly interspersed (you guys, this is too abstract, I laughed out loud). The plot is quite interesting and novel. (Old routine but interesting character changes) (Nagato, the chuunibyou scientist, is really cute and Amegakure Sankomoe) Although Ruby's character design is classic, it fits perfectly with Obito. It's crazy cool. It's only chapter thirty-eight so far, but it's enough to reflect Ruby's "crazyness" as I see it. The three-dimensional character is crazy but humane, insane but firm in faith, arrogant and perverse but in contrast to the previous life where she was a little pitiful. Obito has nothing to say. His setting is just like that. The original work is already the ceiling. I look forward to the follow-up work. Addicted. .

Very nice! ! ! A Naruto story that is enough to make you a god! ! ! The heroine has the feeling of a fourth-day schadenfreude, so this is the tone! ! ! I can't survive a day in this world without Ruby! ! ! Show the door! ! ! !

It's good-looking. It's been a long time since I've had such a pure villain protagonist. It can be seen that Lao Lu really wants to play Bai Mian. It's really good-looking, especially the reunion part. It can be said that the unique gravity of the coconut cake family is written out. The part where the flesh is cut is also full of ghost smell (Lou Lu: Brother, I'm talking about pieces, why do you want to cut the meat). It's a very good book. I completely forgot how many times I swiped it, but it still looks good. Laolu, I miss you...

It's both crazy and good-looking. As the first person to read this book, how can I say it, I would like to give you five stars to encourage it. The author is very [shy][shy][shy]

It looks good. The protagonist has a strong sense of belief and can be called a hero. He will never be shaken by anyone in what he wants to achieve. In terms of becoming a villain, he can be said to be very perfect. He is like a persevering grass, growing up in the storm, trying to become a big tree in the sky. When the truth was revealed later on, I was really moved. Everything in the early stage has been responded to, the timeline has been closed, and two-way redemption has been truly realized. The relationship between Ruby and Obito is really pulling. They are the people who know each other best, and sometimes they want to kill each other, but they both save each other. Both sides push each other into the abyss, but they also lend a helping hand to each other, just because no matter what they do, their ultimate wish is just to hope that the other can get the happiness they dream of. I like showing off the most, not for love. I don't think Ruby's feelings for Obito can be called love. As for Obito, I think he still loves Ruby (I personally think that the greatest love is just hoping that the other person can be happy.) Or it can be said to be an obsession. Both people have a strong feeling for each other. They are the puzzle pieces that can complement each other. They are destined to be attracted to each other. No matter what the reason is, whether it is murderous intention, love, possessiveness or protectiveness, because it is for you, it is the strongest and most irreplaceable.

Although the logic and emotion were a bit abrupt at first, the more I watched, the more I became addicted to it. [Admiration] Ruby's personality charm really captivated me across the screen. She kept moving forward just for her own goal, sacrificing many people in the process, including her companions who had gone through ups and downs along the way. She never stopped, never looked back, and kept moving towards her goal. Ruby who is moving forward is really charming, and she also has her own tenderness towards her companions, especially Nagato [almost crying] every time I see the interaction between them, I feel warm in my heart. The part where I helped Ruby kill Madara really made my heart tighten. I really hope that Ruby can get what she wants, and all these efforts will not be in vain [crying]

Damn those beautiful seedlings! ! ! ! ! The heroine's player mentality is so crazy, I suddenly feel that Naruto players, both male and female, are very abstract [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Very thoughtful! It has a lot of laughs and incorporates a variety of jokes (music) to create characters so far no OOC! Awesome, including Motou Village's jokes inserted into the text, I recommend adding it directly to the collection bookshelf [face covering] [OK]

This is from the author's first book. I like the heroine's character and her beautiful mental state. It must be five stars.

✧Good ending: He: Obito, Nagato, and Ruby achieved the final happiness. (I finally finished reading it. I'm so touched. Everyone has their own perfect ending at the end. It's so delicious [crying][crying][crying] Ruby also has her own happy ending.

The heroine is so cool! ! An eye-catching, high-quality protagonist. She is not a virgin at all. She has courage, strength and her own ideas. She is a real witch. I love her so much! The content is not laggy and very novel. The author loves you so much (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

It's delicious, I love it. The author must finish writing this article (tears of dissatisfaction flowed from the corner of his mouth). This article is really good. The heroine's character is super interesting. To be honest, she has a sense of déjà vu like Tanya. The emotional line (crossed out) Konoha's friendship is also really sweet and fragrant - please the author, please don't give up -

Very well written! Taking Ruby's eighteenth birthday as the node, two completely different lives began. The world's great malice towards her did not make Ruby "die". She still lived hard in such a desperate situation. With this amazing willpower, you will succeed in everything you do! The one constant in both lives is pain. Ruby is just a "weak" young female high school student. Her experience is so sad that those who hear it will cry when they see it. It's the beginning of hell... But even so, the exposure is not crooked (applause should be given here) This novel is undoubtedly a heroine story, and Ruby is the absolute center. Let us shout: Long live Lumen≧▽≦! ! ! Ps. The only people with CP lines in Helaolu are Obito and Nagato (should they?) Pps. Looking forward to the extra episode! ! !

This is a book that cannot be studied in detail. The plot development is author-driven. I thought this was too coooooool, so I wrote it like this, but the author tried hard to be logical, at least on the surface. The advantages are also obvious. I will like it very much when I am on the radio. The second feeling is explosive. This is really cool. Crazy criticism, struggle, pure love, I am willing to give up this world for you. The supporting characters are slightly more ink, giving a more interesting change. Those who know the original work are very happy to read it. Generally speaking, the writing is smooth, the logic is passable, and it is rich in humanistic spirit and crazy criticism aesthetics. As the highest praise from readers, it is quite interesting.

Finished spreading flowers! Thank you to the author for bringing such a story, creating this charming and well-rounded protagonist Ruby, and giving everyone a slightly regretful but warm and satisfying ending. It really makes people cry hard [crying][crying][crying][crying] Ruby... My distant and beautiful electronic butterfly, where are you going to fly to? Fly away, fly towards your dreams, and leave all the love, hate, happiness, and pain behind. Although some malicious black mud occasionally spills out in the middle of the article, I will still be amused by the author's jokes for a second. The author's ability to portray Uchiha male ghosts is simply superb, which made me go down the strange xp path forever (sad). A healthy love relationship is certainly pleasurable, but a love that is twisted, unfortunate, dirty, violent, symbiotic, tormenting each other, haunting, and having to be dug up to make sure it is dead is too delicious. Damn it, where can I find such delicious food? The author of Dream writes a super invincible long if line and a peaceful extra (creeping away in darkness).

Ruby's beautiful mental state is completely on the level of a master and a female ghost. The author's writing is good, and the rhythm is just right. It looks very interesting. I read it in one day, but it's the kind of book that I read 4 or 5 times. The whole book has a sick feeling, and all the characters are villains (everyone in the book seems to be in a bad mental state, plus Ichi Minato was beaten badly by Ruby, and Itachi is as calm and gentle as usual, a little childish and very cute in his rebellious stage.) I like showing off very much. The tug and pull between them was so exciting, and my aunt laughed the whole time. Ruby treated Obito like a dog and was very energetic and beautiful. The interaction between the two of them was very enjoyable and touching. Ruby's mental state is very contradictory, but she is also a fragile and restless little girl. What a tragic article🈶🔪I feel so bad for Ruby. Everyone, come and read it, you won't regret it, and the author will update it soon -.-

Very exciting to watch. The heroine is a little lunatic, which really relieved my stress when I came back from work. The female ghost Uchiha was also very happy with it. Distortion! Cool!

The background of the heroine in this book is very sad and contains strength. She is really a very good person. She has been deceived and insulted by the world, and the despair that comes after giving hope. Fortunately, there is still a bond. But I really want Shisui Obito and Lulu to be together.

This book made me understand the character of Obito a lot more. I really like the revealing style. I read dozens of chapters before but put them aside. I recently finished reading it in one go. The protagonist who implements his personal philosophy is very cool and handsome... The writing style is quite humorous, with many jokes interspersed in it. Although the other ending that reveals the real world is perfect, I always have a feeling of utopia. In any case, the setting of this book is novel, and the relationship between the characters is very interesting. Show the door! Os: Both the white noodles and the broken noodles have been peeled, and the white noodles really can't be steamed now,,, I am an obito, Nagato is good, but not as powerful as Obito

Nice. (To the point, to the point, correct, objective, reasonable, clear, true, dialectical, profound, accessible, graceful, ingenious, incisive, elegant, witty, Comprehensive, clear, important, urgent, impartial, appropriate, watertight, beyond doubt, to the point, to the point, incisive, well versed, Those who have true knowledge and insight, those who enlighten and inspire, those who speak in small words, those who are inspiring, those who see the essence through phenomena, those who know what they are and why they are, those who can be imitated by the world, those who are militarized, those who take the initiative to defend, those who attack at targeted points. Attack, mechanization. Dual-stream transmission, high-definition thermal imaging, laser ranging, third-generation fire control, hunter-killer system, reactive armor, automatic loading, invincible, correct, pertinent)

I finished reading it, it was very exciting and I liked it very much. Generally speaking, I don't like this kind of novel that is tied at the beginning, and I used to think that it was a woman wearing a man or a man wearing a woman and I immediately ruled it out. However, this is a story with a female protagonist. After reading it, it was like skating and I couldn't stop at all. Basically, the plot is full of jokes. If you want to watch it, if you are curious, you will keep watching it. In addition, the female protagonist is really a heroine. In fact, she is quite different from the original world, but so what, she is much different from her in the game. In fact, is it considered an alternative fourth natural disaster? Very nice, Amway. And towards the end, some people said it was abstract... I can only say that it should be easier to understand after watching the part about fgo's mother... Personal thoughts

Nice! The plot is very organized, step by step The language is also used very appropriately, and the lines of understanding and emotion are clear and clear (although I say I don't understand it very well), but the energy of falling in love (Obito's unrequited love) and killing each other (Yandere Obito vs Fuuma Mizukage's idol Ruby), I can only say that it's so to my liking. Although there are some places where I really want the protagonist to get involved directly, but the emotional line is like this. Ruby has never loved anyone. Although there are some parts that made me feel a little heartbroken, this is definitely a good book. I sincerely recommend it!

The best Naruto fanfic I have read on Tomato at the moment. The author is very interesting. The writing is above average on Tomato. The heroine is also very interesting (she has no morals, but she is confused about herself and the world's existence, and she is also changing). It is not recommended for people with high moral bottom lines. Although I think the book is good, it does not mean that I approve of the heroine's behavior. It is good because the characters and plot are well created, not because the three views are in line with my wishes.

We have caught up with the good times, and I read it in one sitting. I must say that this book is indeed a masterpiece. It was a great read! The foreshadowing is recycled and the male ghost is awesome! I was a little nervous reading this because I thought I had to wait for the update, but it turned out to be just in time for the finale. Brother Tuzi's intense and twisted emotions are worthy of being the number one male ghost. I like to show them off the most! I like the fierce collision of emotions. The emotional entanglement between male ghosts and female ghosts is so to my liking! If there are words to describe it, the relationship between the two is like a hot pepper. It is so spicy that it bursts the mouth, makes the taste buds tremble, and the extreme pain awakens the ultimate pleasure. It is an existence that makes people unable to help but taste it again! Should I say that he is worthy of being an Uchiha... Such twisted and turbulent feelings? Changlu is also very good, she is a long-lasting and tolerant person. Nagato will tolerate everything about Ruby because he was once saved by her. The two-way redemption is also great! As for the plot, I almost got goosebumps when I saw Bai Zetsu's official identity later on, and the same was true for Ruby's conversation with Madara later on. I have to sigh, it was so exciting to see the end of it in one go! ! ! This kind of feeling of not having to wait in pain is something that even hitting the opponent with three blasts cannot give you! ! ! ! !

It's so cool, brother, the heroine and the local brother are both so black and love lolita, and they are indeed the best! It makes up for a lot of regrets. Kazi grew up in love, and the three little ones are so cute. They tied it all at once. You must not be a eunuch. I will always follow you🥺

Very good! At first, because of Ruby's stubborn brain circuit, I would question Lady Ruby, but the particularly interesting and awkward enemies are really addictive, and the good dogs are so good... Everyone at Akatsuki, everyone in the Kingdom of Water is really loyal and exciting🌹 (Obito is crazy, sometimes it is crazy, it's delicious, but crazy, but it's so delicious) Although Ruby is actually a bit crazy in the eyes of everyone, the good dogs are truly grateful for what Ruby has done for them and offer their fiery hearts to the best Ruby. Everyone except Ruby has gained a wonderful life like a monthly reading. Ruby's epilepsy also has a reason. After reading several Naruto fics, I feel that this one is the most novel and the most interesting to read. Dog pie god! Pack something delicious!

It is a very shocking novel. The heroine's early stage epilepsy and later stage are very beautiful. The heroine's character creation is also very successful, and there is no collapse of the character. The heroine's goal has always been very clear, and she is willing to sacrifice everything to achieve her goal. This novel may seem like a crazy article in the early stages, but it actually tells the story of the bond and mutual redemption between the heroine and Naruto. (No matter what others think, I watched it from beginning to end in one day:) Of course, the above only represents my personal perception and understanding. If you have different opinions, please forgive me (◕ˇ∀ˇ◕)

The Uchiha male ghost and the gentle and carefree Nagato are both good. What I like most is the portrayal of Ruby, who is crazy and complicated. Her behavior is neither correct nor just. It is selfish to destroy the beauty of the world of this book for the sake of one's own truth. As a reader, we can expect that the author will give a good ending to those who followed her and sacrificed her life, but from the perspective of the book, she did sacrifice them. Her tragic experience actually struck me as cliche and not convincing enough. But like the others in the original work (Madara, Obito, Black Zetsu), she is just living for obsession, and there is nothing to blame. Maybe the author didn't want to shape the relationship between the characters into pure love, and the effect presented was more delicious and enjoyable. The male ghost with a Dohara flavor is really enjoyable. But I don't know why, I still can't take it. Maybe it's because I, as a spectator, don't approve of Ruby's behavior pattern. But it is indeed a very complete Naruto novel that is rare on Tomato, and it is worth reading!

This book successfully made a person who has never written book reviews start writing book reviews. Belongs to the top echelon of descriptions of bonds in Naruto stories (personally I have always felt that the description of bonds is the most distinctive feature in Naruto), showing off his personal charm. The emotional tension between Lao Lu and Tu Zi Ge is too strong. Every time they pull each other, I wish they would hate each other quickly. I often wonder if there is really no wife to draw their books. This place is so suitable for publishing books [face covering] Articles are okay, I want to eat. That's great, Uchiha ghost! This is the love of old enemies! Evenly matched, knowing each other best, different paths, so delicious! Every time they fight, the fight is bloody and bloody, and the punches are hard to the flesh, and the image of them being held down and kissed together is always in my mind. Various imaginings of the madness of one party after the death of the other party. What a great author! Now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. It's a very good book for women, but men who read it will probably be strongly discouraged from reading it later. It was the description of the two men in the later period that made me dream back to the domineering male protagonist and the affectionate male protagonist in ancient romance novels [face covering], the sense of sight was too strong I feel that the description of the charm of some places is quite exaggerated, although it is indeed a very cool article. In the early stage, I felt that some of the characters were a bit OOC, which almost made me give up on this good article. However, it quickly improved in the middle and later stages.