Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from the Depths of Hell

How could a monster who had lived for who knows how long care about an ordinary person so easily? It would only become a burden. Your emotional line problem is too big. If you can't write the emotional line well, it's better not to write it and let the protagonist be beautiful alone!

It has some flavor, but a weird smell. The characters are divided. Not to mention how inhuman the Nine Hell Champion Demon is, but there is no one in the Legendary Destiny who is not hard-hearted. Moreover, the writing and the tone of the characters' dialogues are all a model play, without their own appropriate styles.

As a dragon fanfic, I think this book is relatively good. Next, I will talk about a few advantages and disadvantages. 1. As a Dragon Clan fan, cleverly use content from other worldviews to connect to the Dragon Clan worldview. 2. The content is compact and the writing style is unique. The protagonist of this book is still Lu Mingfei, but the two important events that Lu Mingfei had to experience, the graduation scene and the day of freedom, have been downplayed. 3. The Lusu line is a novelty. If you continue writing, don't emphasize Eri's clothing. If you must emphasize it, write Eri's clothing as that of your younger sister. 4. As a dragon fanfic, the writing style is still very good, but it is still inferior to those of older fanfics. But the choice of the heroine is an advantage. Compared with other authors who blindly choose to make up for regrets and choose Hui Liyi or Nono as the heroine, it is rare and unique. Summary: Although the content is a fan of the dragon clan, it already has its own world view of the dragon clan. For the future plot of this book, Su Xiaoqiang's role can be downplayed. After all, it is about Lu Mingfei, not about falling in love. Of course, the emotional scenes of the male and female protagonists can also be increased appropriately but not too much. Secondly, regarding which force Lu Mingfei should choose, he should choose the Lion Heart Club as much as possible. It's not that the student union is bad, but it's not very easy to manage for Lu Mingfei. The student union is essentially a merger of scattered societies with money from Caesar. If it has no foundation, its strength relies on Caesar, and it's not as good as the Lion Heart Society. Then about Eri Yi, this character is not actually a heroine in the true sense. This is also Jiang Nan's fault. Lu Mingfei, the original dragon clan, used Eliyi as a substitute. Even if Eiliyi was not dead, Lu Mingfei only treated her as a sister, and Eiliyi didn't understand true love. Therefore, the content of Long San can also be regarded as a test for the author. If it succeeds, it will occupy a place in the tomato dragon circle. If it fails, it will be a second-rate novel. All that needs to be said has been said, so I wish the author success in this book. Come on.

Personally, I am an old dragon fan. I have devoured the original five, plus the first three resets and the newly written fourth. I have also read a lot of other dragon fandoms, but basically failed them. This subject matter is very novel, and I hope I can finish it.

Who is the heroine of this book?

Come on, come on, Jiangnan knows a hammer dragon clan, Just think of it as writing it for yourself and be sure to finish it. Don't worry too much about the reviews. Just finish the story you want to write first! You can even use the setting of reincarnation of dragons introduced by Jiangnan.

The writing is so messy, it often seems like I skipped a section of the plot.