Become a Strong Player in Sea Survival Game

The content is quite interesting, but the writing style feels weird, a bit like writing an essay. I feel like I use a lot of adjectives but the description is a bit dry [thinking]. Overall, it's still very interesting. Cheers to the author [send heartfelt thanks]

It's very good, but can you change or reduce the word "caution"? It's several times in one chapter, and more than ten times in several chapters, which will affect the reading experience.

I have caught up with the latest chapter. It is quite interesting. The heroine here does not get many first places like other survival games. She also gets many rewards through cooking. Overall, there is no surprise. There is only one awkward point in the whole story. Every time the heroine encounters something more precious, she almost treats it like a rare treasure. She feels that some things can be handled with care. Anyway, she puts it away in the end, so she is not so cautious [face covering]

Five stars is encouragement. Well, I have finished reading it, but I feel that the author has a lot of room for improvement. The first thing is to refine the text. There are indeed a lot of cumbersome descriptions. Also, everyone knows that there is a storage ring, which can be stored and released with your thoughts. However, it is so late in the article that it is really funny to still use "miraculous occurrence" to describe taking out a table of food.

It feels okay at first, but then there are guns and bullets, but when the protagonist is in danger, he doesn't use them. He fights at close range with a knife. He also says from time to time that fighting like this is very dangerous and can easily lead to death [face covering]! Then there is the feeling that the protagonist's golden finger is of little use except for healing medicine! Four stars encouragement

A nanny-type novel about a strong woman?

I think the heroine is getting busier and busier. There are more and more sundries, things for sale, and planting. We can add auxiliary robots and other props.

It's a good-looking, no-CP survival story, the heroine is not a virgin, there are no poisonous points, and the data records are also very clear! !

It's not bad. Great work for the author, you can have CP.

It's good to watch, keep writing while you're at work (don't get caught [laughs])!

Keep this up, come on!

Not bad, the writing is quite good, please keep up the good work!

Nice. Support, the heroine knows how to strengthen herself, she is not the kind who only knows how to cook

Super invincible and beautiful

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Looks good, so far so good

Good looking [loving] author, cheers✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Not bad ~ keep chasing

Like to cheer very much

Jiang An, come on and grow!

Hmm... It's a bit too peaceful. The heroine easily trusts other people.

The heroine explores various natural disasters, hunts for treasures and kills monsters. In the middle period, she gets a little turtle as a pet.

Not bad! The heroine is pretty good, why is the rating so low?

It's okay, there's just a lot of nonsense, but the plot is okay

A very good survival story, but it ends too quickly

The author has done a lot of foreshadowing for the heroine's character. She is very attentive and the plot is exciting. I highly recommend it.

It's really good. In the process of surviving at sea, the combat effectiveness is constantly improved. The author's brain is very open, the ideas are very novel, and the plot is very attractive. I will continue to follow [laughing and crying]

It looks good, good luck to the author

It's pretty. Why is the rating so low?

The ending is good, but it's a pity that Mouse and Mouse can be perfect together.