When I Traveled to the World of Female Competition, I Met a Bunch of Yanderes

Do you think it would be okay to call the police at the right time after we queue up? I still don't like that the male protagonist has always been defeated and slaughtered like a dog. I still hope that he will not be as frustrated as those who quit the team. Whether it is studying or something, let the male protagonist master more skills and take the initiative.

The writing of this book is okay, but the male protagonist cannot obtain other superpowers or counteract the superpowers in some ways, which makes the book still a bit depressing at the moment. And since I read the latest chapter from the beginning, my mood has changed from being a little hot to being calm now. My attitude when reading this book is not that of a marginal book, so I will also consider the direction of the official plot. The current chapters of this book are not short anymore, and the readers are attracted only because of the good foreshadowing and plot rhythm. It can be seen that the author still has some writing skills. But if the protagonist is still in a situation where he is unable to counteract those with abilities in the next dozens of chapters, I am afraid that some readers will be turned away - I will definitely be turned away anyway, after all, it is already a catch-up, rather than reading all the chapters in one go. The protagonist's way of thinking is indeed okay, but if you only rely on one golden finger forever, it will inevitably cause sensory fatigue to the readers. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, or some kind of twist. Currently giving it five stars.

Damn, I must give full marks. The description of Pig's Knuckle is getting better and better. From a loser to a real man, he is slowly counterattacking. The setting is also strange and beautiful. I just don't know when Pig's Knuckle will awaken an ability that can be actively expressed. According to the setting, he will become handsome after awakening. I can't imagine how handsome he is. He may be as handsome as me [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

The idea is okay, but some of the ideas are very strange. Why not give it a try?

It's awesome, it's the first time I've seen something so beautiful, especially at night, I'm terrified [Adoration]

I would like to give some advice to the author, just like the simulation RPG, first explore the world, seek awakening, work to strengthen your strength, and follow different plot lines. Integrate the world view and then strike hard. I just don't know if the archive strength can be stacked up. If not, I have to follow the main line of perfection. An additional point is that it is not necessary to improve the strength of exploring the world, but it is also possible to have a deterrent trump card or to strengthen the physical fitness. Then reveal the world view and deduce the main line from the branch line

It's quite "vulgar", but it is undeniable that it is indeed an intellectual work, and the style is very light, making it effortless to read. Good works have their "main business" or "characteristics". The main business of this work is not so serious, but it also avoids the possibility of creating a dark room. The part that lacks "color" is replaced by a relaxed imagination style. To be honest, it is really fresh and has an excellent reading experience. This kind of work is not that high-end, but the setting and plot are more thoughtful, and it has a certain degree of novelty. It can definitely be rated as a five-star masterpiece [like] It's very good. It can be said that the "degree" is very well grasped. There is neither deliberate subversion nor forced dark drama. In addition to the type of imaginative works, such career lines and emotional attitudes and changes should be considered more than 90% of the works. Like [like]

The subject matter is novel and suits my sp appetite!

Great writing. The plot is exciting and the characters are vividly drawn. The unique and weird world is displayed three-dimensionally, making us feel like we are immersed in it [learned]. The description of the worldview is also thought-provoking, the speculations are eye-catching, and the reasoning is staggering. The only fly in the ointment is that the protagonist's combat power is too exaggerated now. Can he speed it up? Otherwise, it's not a problem to have to rely on rewinding. Come on, novel world view, unique description. [Learned]

What I wrote before is quite good, but it's a bit despairing and painful, a future without goals, a false but real present, all of which are shrouded in darkness. You can't see everything clearly. You are just one of thousands of insects.

The setting is very novel, and it looks very interesting. It's so perverted that you will be eaten if you succeed in courtship.

Hahaha, this book written by the author is very interesting. Although the protagonist in the early stage is a little bit weird, I think the idea is really good. It is just to take advantage. In the later stage, it is very good. I feel that the protagonist has the ability to backtrack. It is okay to set the heroine as Yang Ningbing. In this way, the protagonist will not lose fighting spirit because of backtracking all the time, because there is a goal, just like 486, there is a goal worth fighting for. The target is to be worthy of the heroine or to be the person who controls the rules, so that there will be no obstacles between him and the heroine. I think the character of the heroine is okay. She dares to love and hate, which is very good. She is willing to dedicate everything to the hero. I feel that the author's setting of the protagonist is okay. Although it is a bit useless in the early stage, there is still a little bit of ambition in the later stage. The setting of the heroine is very good. I hope it is a heroine, I hope it is a harem.

You will like it after reading it. For a male protagonist who likes anyone who comes, it is simply a cool novel. Although there are hints of unrequited love in the follow-up, how can the protagonist's character give up the forest? Give me more, I want to be a layman with money. The writing is also great. How can I say the setting? It's super interesting.

A very interesting novel, although the word count is very small, I still recommend everyone to read it. I am more concerned about the division of those abilities. The ones that appear now can only be understood by their names. I don't know how they will be set later.

An old bookworm came to review. The plot is very good, the setting is very novel, and it makes people want to read and explore, and want to know the real world view. However, in some places, it makes people feel very frustrated while reading and I can't help but want to complain.

The male protagonist is controlled by the small head and the big head [face covering] [face covering]

It's a bit interesting. The characters have grown a lot, from being a wanderer to being in a stable position. It's a pity that the car can't pick up the speed, otherwise the reader will be so happy in this book. There are just too many holes dug, and I don't know how to fill them? Looking forward to the follow-up

Han Yuefu. Shou Chong Xiao Chunan, Unfinished Taoist Temple Xiangxiang pear, Haiting Fengfu

Although the male protagonist is a little humble, he is gradually committed to exploring the truth. Generally speaking, the plot progress is not sluggish. For example, the male protagonist understands the uniqueness of the world and his ability to look back in the first eight chapters.

The ability to revert can ensure that the male protagonist is invincible. As for the character issue, the male protagonist has not adapted to it at the beginning, but he continues to change his cognition under reversal, which is really good-looking.

At first glance, there are actually some flaws. For example, the plot twist is a bit abrupt, with sudden dramas and so on, but as we go to the back, the setting becomes more and more complete, and the writing becomes better and better. I think it's a very good book.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a charming yandere novel.

My name is Fang Xiu, I will die until Fang Xiu My name is Ren Jie, and I was born to be a great person. My name is Wu Sheng, I am a mouse My name is Qi Xia, I'm going to start lying My name is Eri, we are both little monsters My name is Harry Potter and I'm a Gryffindor I'm Jeremy Ward, biologist and extreme fishing enthusiast My name is Zhaoyang, this is my story, both the beginning and the end My name is Wu Xie. My grandfather wants me to be clean and innocent, but I was born in Jiumen, so how can I be innocent?

It looks good. I wonder if the protagonist will wake up later.

Is this a new theme? It's well written. I hope I can stick with it.

Tailai, I'm beautiful. I'm a big beauty, you know? I know Jin Yan grabbed Tailai's hand; touch it, does it look good? What a good idea? Tai Lai was embarrassed. He was born blind and never knew what good-looking was. He held it in for a long time and said in a voice like an oath: It's more good-looking than braised pork - "Massage"

I feel that the whole book is well written and the plot is interesting. However, after pushing the school girl to jump off the building, I felt that the male protagonist did not know what to do. The plot became more and more confusing. I still hope that the author can come back to his senses. I give it five stars!

As a long-time reader of the Heroine series, I can only say that it is a bit off topic, but it is also for the promotion of the plot. The setting is like this. In summary, I see that it is a good book so far. I will give it a good review [like]

At the beginning, the male protagonist still put me off, but later on the plot was very fascinating, and I was very excited to watch the male protagonist's growth. Just too little! Speed ​​update!

It's so cool, it feels like reading a suspense novel to decipher the mystery. The author's writing style is really good. The silly and cute protagonist created in the early stage has now grown up.